高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达15.doc

2015届高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达15浙江省温州市十校联合体2014届高三上学期期末考试英语试题【题文】请根据上面图画所反应的现象和问题，写一篇100120个词的短文。你的短文应该包括：1、描述这幅图。2、说明反映的问题。3、阐述你对这个问题的看法。注意：短文的开头已经给出。（不计入总词数）as we can see in the picture，_【答案】as we can see in the picture, xiaoming is busy with his homework while his mother is fanning him to make him cool and comfortable.the picture implies the parents are indulgent with their children. for example, like the picture, they do everything for their children to create a good opportunity for their children to involve in their study, which most children are willing to accept. i dont approve of what the parents do. surely there comes a time when everyone has to leave the parental nest, look after themselves and pay their own way in life. therefore, the parents are required to be aware that a great love and concern means providing a good chance for their children to fly higher instead of spoiling or restricting them. certainly its better to take action now.【解析】【考点】表明自己的观点漫画作文【写作指导】1.本次写作任务是漫画作文，实际上是半开放写作。因为学生有很大的发挥空间。漫画作文常规上以三个层面或段落来完成：叙述图画；分析图画父母过分溺爱孩子；提出建议。不要过分溺爱孩子，让孩子养成过分依赖。时态宜用一般现在时，有些地方要用适当的情态动词，should，ought to，must，can等。【模版展示】as is shown in the picture. the picture tells us now.the implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. to begin with,. and this social problem should arouse the great concern of all in the world. in my opinion/as for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. first,only in this way can we solve the problem of【一句多译】1. 介绍画面内容时可使用: as we can see from the picture, according to the picture/from the picture,we can see. the picture shows that. picture 1/the first picture shows/tells us that. picture 2/the second picture shows/tells us that. 2. 介绍画面内容的现实意义时可使用: this kind of phenomenon is very common in life/society. we can often see this kind of phenomenon in life/society. this kind of matter often happens in our life/society. 3. 对社会现象进行评论时可使用: we should realize the importance/harm of (doing) something. we should try hard to improve.we should promote the awareness that. we should promote the awareness of(doing)something. we should promote the public awareness of(doing) something. i think its our duty to do something. 4. 呼吁(有关部门)采取措施解决社会问题时可使用: i appeal to our government/parents/teachers to take action/measures/steps to. we must take measures/action/steps to.浙江省杭州市学军中学2014届高三第九次月考英语【题文】书面表达(满分30分)假设你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。要点：1. 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象； 2. 用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述； 3. 对李华表示美好的的祝愿。注意：1. 内容积极向上，语意连贯，结构完整。词数120左右。 2. 不能写成诗歌形式；不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 3. 开头已给出。dear li hua, its time to say goodbye. _【答案】陕西省渭南市2014届高三第二次模拟考试英语【题文】书面表达（满分30分）请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 there is no such thing as a free lunch. success doesnt come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all. as they say, “as you sow, so shall you reap（收获）.” 注意事项：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示；2. 除诗歌外，文体不限；3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称;4. 短文词数不少于100； 【答案】书面表达（满分30分）one possible version： everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people. as the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.” i failed in the last exam. so discouraged was i that i didnt want to do anything. i didnt do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. later on, i found things got even worse. meanwhile, a great many students made every effort to study. only then did i realize i was wrong and that success will not wait for me. so i made the best of every minute to catch up with my classmates. now im progressing in my studies. i feel confident that my effort will pay off eventually. my story makes me believe failure is temporary for a diligent person but permanent for the lazy. ones efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.北京市重点中学2015届高三上学期第一次月考英语试题 【题文】情景作文 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。今天是你父亲的生日，你给父亲买完生日蛋糕后，在回家途中做了几件好事。请根据图片的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，介绍事情的全过程。注意：1日记的开头已为你写好。 2词数不少于60。march 23, friday sunnytoday is dads birthday and i wanted to buy him a gift. _【答案】last monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. he would be away for three days. just the next morning. i found my mother wasnt feeling well. she had a cold. i immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. with my special care, my mother recovered quickly. when my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. he praised me for what i had done.i feel very happy that i have done something for my mother.【解析】这几件事看似很简单，但是要想把文章写好，写的连贯，自然，要求考生要在给出的图片信息中扑捉到有用的信息，有时候要适当的进行扩充才行，不如第二、第三幅图，需要考生根据自己的生活经验，做出合理的补充，是文章的内容充实而又自然，同时要注重文章的结构，前后时态、动作要做到一致，连贯。总之，把没一幅图吃透，加上合理联想，还是可以写出优秀的作文的2014高考真题英语（重庆卷）【题文】请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。“ my friend falls, i laugh ； my phone falls, i cry. ”要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法；(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点；(3)词数不少于60;(4)在答题卡上作答。【答案】【考点】考察开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于开放性作文，根据材料：my friend falls, i laugh; my phone falls , i cry. “朋友摔倒了，我笑了。我的手机摔了，我哭了”。这句话说明现在人们过度使用手机，而忽略了现实生活中的友谊。可以写成议论文，讨论手机过对使用，影响现实交流。使用一般现在时和第三人称。要点：1.现在人们过度使用手机，忽视了现实中人与人之间的交流，产生了很多的问题。2反对过分使用手机，鼓励人们积极参加各种活动，在现实中与更多的人交流。紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能