课堂讲评2012高考2卷短文改错及完型填空.doc

一、课堂讲评2012全国卷II短文改错和完型填空（一）短文改错Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving.76._Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live77._without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water.80._To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81._out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82._drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath84._water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85._Sincerely, Li Hua评析： 大意：高考一卷短文改错内容是节约汽油和节电，此文为节水给编辑写的一封信，提出 水是动物生存和工农业发展之必须。但形势日益严峻，因水资源越来越短缺。所 提建议为：a. 植树 b. 节约饮用水，不能让自来水变成常流水 c. 洗涮用水 和洗澡水的重复利用。 改错策略：a.定语从句考察（较难）.especially bath water for which is quite a lot，应该去 掉 for 。我们应当找到利用洗衣水和利用消耗量很大的洗澡水的方法。考生要意识到which前介词for的多余，因which指代洗澡水，是洗澡水“量大”，因而和for没有任何关系。b. 指代错误（较难）。 Many countries属第三人称，因此代词应为they而非we，把we 改为they。C. “used”过去分词作后置定语较难，被修饰词为water,即在洗东西和洗澡中“被”用掉的水，因此要用used作后置定语。d. 选择连词（较难）。植树与节水的关系：之所以植树是因为树有助于节水，因此把though改为because、as或since，但for不合适，因为for表原因时，前常用逗号分开，起补充说明作用。e. 时态改错（较易），但seemed容易变为seem,应当根据主语为第三人称变成seems。f. 第一人称指代较易，you后加my, opinion可数名词不可单独存在，此处特指我的意见。g. 固定搭配neither后的or改为nor（较易）。 i. 冠词考查较易。a problem改为the problem，特指上文水短缺的问题。j.复数名词表泛指（较易）animal改为animals，可数名词不可单独存在，此处前面是 “We”，所以后面用“animal”的复数形式表泛指。 答案：76. opinion前加my77.animal-animals78.ornor79.seemedseems 80 we-they 81. a-the/this/that 82. though-because/since/as83. 正确 84.using-used 85. 去掉for（二）完型填空Around twenty years ago I was living in York. 21 I had a lot of experience and a Masters degree, I could not find 22 work.I was 23 a school bus to make ends meet and 24 with a friend of mine, for I had lost my flatI had 25 five interviews (面试) with a company and one day between bus runs they called to say I did not 26 the job“Why has my life become so 27 ?” I thought painfully.As I pulled the bus over to 28 a little girl, she handed me an earning 29 I should keep it 30 somebody claimed (认领) itThe earring was painted black and said “BE HAPPY”.At first I got angryThen it 31 me I had been giving all of my 32 to what was going wrong with my 33 rather than what was right! I decided then and there to make a 34 of fifty things I was happy withLater, I decided to 35 more things to the listThat night there was a phone call for 36 from a lady who was a director at a larger 37 She asked me if I would 38 a one-day lecture on stress (压力) management to 200 medical workersI said yes.My 39 there went very well, and before long I got a well-paid jobTo this day I know that it was because I changed my way of 40 that I completely changed my life.21AAs BThough CIf DWhen22Asuccessful Bextra Csatisfying Dconvenient23Adriving Brepairing Ctaking Ddesigning24Aworking Btravelling Cdiscussing Dliving25Aprepared for Battended Casked for Dheld26Alose Blike Cfind Dget27Ahard Bbusy Cserious Dshort28Awave at Bdrop off Ccall on Dlook for29Aordering Bpromising Csaying Dshowing30Ain case Bor else Cas if Dnow that31Ahurt Bhit Ccaught Dmoved32Afeelings Battention Cstrength Dinterests33Aopinions Beducation Cexperiences Dlife34Alist Bbook Ccheck Dcopy35Aconnect Bturn Ckeep Dadd36Aher Ba passenger Cme Dmy friend37Ahospital Bfactory Crestaurant Dhotel38Alisten to Breview Cgive Dtalk about39Aplan Bchoice Cday Dtour40Aoperation Bspeaking Cemployment Dthinking1、 评讲完型填空 大意：本文通过一位成功人士对20年前自己艰难找工作的经历的回顾，说明怎样在逆境 中找到一个好工作。 他找到好工作成功的经验：a. 放下自己拥有工作经验和硕士学位的优越感，开公交勉强度日(make ends meet) 。b.放下架子，租不起公寓和朋友一起住。C. 坚持不懈寻找合适的工作。d.调整自己痛苦心态，使自己努力做到快乐和开心。 文章细节分析：作者到一家公司参加(attended)5次面试，可还是没被录用，极其痛苦（painful）。当一天一位坐他车的小女孩下车时（小女孩下车The girl got off the bus,如果主语为司机，“司机让小女孩下车”则是The driver dropped off the girl.) 交给他捡到的一枚黑色的上面写有“开心生活”的耳环(earing)，他起初很生气，接着突然灵机一动，（An idea hit him.他突然有了主意。如果主语是人的话应该：He hit on a good idea他突然想到一个好办法) ,结果他转变了想法，意识到自己过分关注自己负面而非正面的生活。自己决定把自己感到开心的五十件事情列成一个表，并且不断添加，给自己以快乐的暗示。最后，自己收到了一位大医院的院长(director)给他打来的电话，邀请他给她管理的医院的200名医务工作者作一个压力管理的讲座。那天的讲座（即他去演