高考英语任务型写作之记叙文ppt课件.ppt

SayItIsn tSoGarethGates SkiesaredarkIt stimeforrainFinalcall youboardthetrainHeadingfortomorrowIwavegoodbyetoyesterday 1 BlindedbythesorrowHowcanIbesmilinglikebeforeWhenbabyyoudon tlovemeanymore Chorus Sayitisn tsoTellmeyou renotleaving 2 ThatIamonlydreamingthisisnotgoodbyeThisisstartingoverIfyouwannaknowIdon twannaletgoSosayitisn tso Tempttofindbutatleastwe vetried 3 AstheyclosedthedoorbehindyouWe resoaloneandtimestandsstillShakethegroundbeneaththewheelsasIwishI dneverfoundyouWohohHowcanIbesmilingwhenyougoWillIbestrongenoughtocarryonMiles milestogoBeforeIcansailBeforeIcannailmyloveforyoutosleepOhdarlingIgetmiles milestogoBeforeanyonewilleverhearmelaughagain Task writing Howtodevelopanarrative Pleasereadthefollowingpassagefirst Everyonehasanexperiencetheywouldratherforget Someareembarrassing somearemoving andsometeachusalesson Hereisastoryofmine LastSundayIwentfishing Aftersettingupmyfishingrod 钓鱼竿 withbait 鱼饵 Isatdownonthebankofthelake Buttwohourslater Ididn tcatchanyfish Igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff 收拾东西 preparingtogobackhome Justthen Isawanoldmansittingnearme Tomysurprise hisbasketwasfulloffish soIwentovertohim wantingtoknowwhy Excuseme buthowlonghaveyousathere Iasked Aboutfourhours heanswered Fourhours Icouldn tbelievemyears Yes It sveryimportanttobepatient theoldmansaid Don tconsiderfishingatiringsport Justenjoyit Suddenly Iunderstandwhathesaid Imustlearntobepatient ThenIsatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently Ifeltafishtouchthebait butIdidn tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin 卷收钓鱼线 Atlast Icaughtit Thismademeveryhappy Inthefollowingsixhours Icaughtover10fish Onmywayhome Ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank Igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience Whatstyleofwritingisthispassage Anarrative 记叙文 Writingcontentandrequirements 写作内容 1 以约30个词概括短文的要点 2 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文 描写你认识到耐心的重要性的一次经历 并包括以下要点 a 叙述你认识到耐心的重要性的一次真实或虚构的经历 b 你是如何认识到耐心的重要性的 c 耐心对你的生活 学习有什么影响 写作要求 1 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构 组织故事 但不得直接引用原文中的句子 2 标题自定 Whatstyleofastorydoesitaskustowrite Anarrative too 评分标准 assessingcriteria 1 概括的准确性 语言简洁明了 能客观 准确 全面地转述所给文字材料 2 语言的规范性 语言合乎语法 地道自然 无中国式英语 3 内容的合适性 选材必需切题 内容符合写作要求 论据能证明论点 4 篇章的连贯性 文章的主题 一个 要明确且贯穿全文 层次分明有条理 衔接过渡自然 读写任务评分原则 assessingprinciples 1 本试题总分为25分 分两部分给分 短文概括5分 主题写作20分 2 强调内容健康 观点鲜明 说服力强 表述清晰 可参照阅读材料的内容 但不得直接引用原文中的句子 3 评分时 选根据文章语言的规范 内容的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次 然后以该档次的要求衡量 确定或调整档次 最后给分 4 语言规范 拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个方面 评分时 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑 英 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受 5 如书写较差 以至影响交际 将分数降低一个档次 1 Title2 Summary Abouttheoriginalpassage About30words 3 Atransitionalsentence4 Anarrative Aboutthesametopic 5 Anendingparagraph Pointoutthemainidea Thewritingtempletofanarrative 叙述类文章写作模板 1分 5分 19分 1 Title What sthetitlethatweshoulduse 1 PatienceIstheSecretofSuccess 2 PatienceIsImportant 3 TheImportanceofPatience 8 PatienceIsNecessary 4 TheKeytoSuccess Patience 5 HowImportantPatienceIs 6 PatienceLeadsto ResultsinSuccess 7 OurLifeNeedsPatience keywords Suggestions Whatshouldwepayattentiontowhenwritingatitle Weshoulduseanounphraseorasentenceasatitle 2 Thefirstletterofeverywordinatitleshouldbewritteninacapital 大写 letterexceptarticles 冠词 prepositions 介词 andconjunctions 连词 3 Thenumberofatitlehadbetternotbemorethan10words 2 Howtosummarizeastory Skill Combinationoffiveelements要素串联法 wastaughtalessonbyanoldman thewriterandanoldman whengoingfishinglastSunday onthebankofthelake Patienceisimportant Patienceisthesecretofsuccess Wemaybeginlikethese 1 Thepassageisaboutthewriter sunforgettablelessonfromanoldman 2 Thewritertellsusabouthisunforgettablelessonfromanoldman 3 Thestoryisaboutthewriterwhowastaughtanunforgettablelessonbyanoldman 4 Theauthortellsusthathewastaughtanunforgettablelessonbyanoldman Inthispassage thewritermainlytellsushisexperienceoffishingandwastaughtanunforgettablelessonbyanoldman Heknewtheimportanceofpatienceandfinallygotsomefish 33words Myversionforthesummary Mainlyusethekeywordsandphrasesintheoriginalpassage Donotincludeyourownopinion butbesuretouseourownwords 2 Writeitinthethirdperson 第三人称 3 Controlthenumberofwordsbetween28and35 Suggestions Whatshouldwepayattentiontowhenwritingasummary 3 Howtowriteatransitionalsentence 1 Itoccurstomethatasimilarstoryofminehappened3yearsagoandtaughtmealesson 2 Ihadasimilarexperienceatonetime too 3 AsfarasIamconcerned Ihaveasimilarexperience 4 Ihavesuchasimilarexperience too 5 Ihaveasimilarexperiencetothewriter s 6 Ialsohaveasimilarexperience Wemaywritelikethese Myversionforthetransitionalsentence Ialsohaveanexperienceaboutbeingpatient Iwouldlikeyou thereader toshareitwithme 4 Makeupyoursimilarstory Skill Combinationoffiveelements要素串联法 Takewaitingforabusforexample waitedforabus I whengoingtoschool atthebusstop Patienceisimportant Ihaveasimilarexperience OnceIwaitedforthebusatthestopfor30minutes nobuscame Icouldn twaitanylongeranddecidedtowalktoschool ButnosoonerhadIleftthanthebusarrived IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute Iwouldhavecaughtit IfIwantedtotakethenextbus Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes OnlythendidIrealizetheimportanceofpatience Beingimpatientwillwastealltheeffortsthatwehavemade Patiencealsoplaysanimportantpartinourstudyandwork Withitwecanachievegreatersuccess 110words 5 Howtowriteanendingparagraph Allinall patienceisveryimportant Everyoneshouldhavepatiencetodoeverything Pointoutthemainidea Myversion Let senjoythepossibleversionfortheoriginalpassage Usingthebus waitingsituation PatienceisthesecretofsuccessThestoryisaboutanunforgettablelessonofthewriterfromanoldmanwhilefishing throughwhichthewriterrealizedpatiencewasveryimportantandthatitwasthesecretofsuccess 33words Ihaveasimilarexperience OnceIwaitedforthe