雅思大作文(第三类PPT课件.ppt

雅思大作文 第三类 2020 3 28 1 第三类大作文 辩论一个有争议的观点或二个 截然 不同的观点 并给出自己的意见 立场 或建议Somepeoplethinkschoolsshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicknowledge Othersthinktheyshouldalsoteachstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Somepeoplethinkspacetravelisimportant Othersthinkpeoplewillnotrememberthis Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Manyparentsthinkadvertisingonlytellsinformationaboutsnacksandtoystochildren Butcompaniesthinkadvertisingalsotellsusefulinformation Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Somepeoplebelievethatnationalsportsteamsshouldbefinanciallysupportedbythegovernment Someotherpeoplethinktheyshouldbefundedbyprivateresourcessuchascorporationsandindividuals Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinions 2020 3 28 2 第三类大作文推荐框架 题目特点 Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Doyouthinktheiradvantagesoutweightheirdisadvantages引言段 用自己的话转述题目中有争议的双方 给出文章的目的 正方段 讨论你倾向的观点 陈述1 2个正方论点与论据 论点解释例子逐步展开 反方段 陈述你反对的观点 讨论1 2个反方论点与论据 论点解释例子逐步展开 与正方段比例为1 1or2 3结论段 明确给出自己的立场 陈述原因 与希望 2020 3 28 3 Somepeoplethinkspacetravelsuchaslandingonthemoonisimportantwhileothersargueitwillnotberememberedbypeople Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion 2020 3 28 4 1 开头段 Introduction Spacetravelhasbeenatthecentreofglobaldebateformanyyears Somepeoplethinkthatspacetravelisworthwhile becauseitwillbenefithumanbeingsinthelongrun However othersregardmankind sexplorationintoandresearchonspaceasawasteoftime resourcesandmoney Beforeairingmyopinion Iwillanalyzethismajorissuefromdiverseperspectives 2020 3 28 5 2 正方段Advocatesofspacetravelhavestrongfeelingsaboutthistopic Tobeginwith itiswidelyacceptedthatspaceresearchwillresolvemanydifficultproblemsperplexingmankind Asevidenceofthis theyarguethatspaceexplorationwillenablehumanbeingstolearnmoreabouttheorigin developmentanddestinyoftheuniverseaswellasaboutearth Secondly throughspacetravel wemaydiscovernaturalresourcesonotherplanetsinordertomitigatetheenergycrisisonearth Lastbutnotleast spaceprovidesanidealenvironmentforscientiststocarryoutcertainsubtleexperimentswhichleadtotheadvancementofscienceandtechnology 2020 3 28 6 3 反方段Onthecontrary theothersideofthecoinhasvoicedstrongopposition sayingthatpeoplewillnotbeimpressedbyspaceexplorationbecauseitisoflittlevaluetohumanbeings Aboveeverythingelse aftersomanyyearsofarduousworkandeffortsandwithastronomicalinvestmentintospaceresearch wehavenotyetattaintedanadequateunderstandingofspace Besides uptillnow novisiblepracticalbenefitshavebeenachievedintheexplorationofspace Tomakethingsevenworse spacetravelhasproducedalargeamountofspacerubbishwhichcontaminatestheenvironmentinspace 2020 3 28 7 4 结论段 Conclusion Inshort althoughspaceprobeisaninvestmentinthefutureandproducesfar reachinginfluenceonoursociety Ipersonallybelievethatitdoesnotmakesenseforustospendanastronomicalsumofmoneyandahugeportionofhumanresourcesonspaceexplorationwhenhumanityhasmanyotherpressingissuestoaddress suchasenvironmentalprotection poverty diseasesandsoon 2020 3 28 8 Withtheincreasingglobalizationinbusinessandtrade airtransportisoftenusedtoexporttypesoffruitandvegetablestoothercountrieswherethoseplantscannotgroworareoutofseason Somepeoplethinkitisapositivedevelopmentwhileothersconsiderthisuseofairtransportunjustified Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion 2020 3 28 9 Carryingfreshfruitandvegetablesfromcountrytocountryviaairisbecomingmorecommonthesedays Somepeopleholdpositiveviewsaboutdoingthiswhileothersbelieveitshouldnotbedone Personally Ibelieveitsbenefitsaremorethanitsshortages 2020 3 28 10 Tostartwith airtransportationenablesfruitandvegetablestobeconsumedinavarietyofregions andthereforeprovidesconsumerswithawiderrangeofoptionsintheirdiet AnillustrationofthisisinnorthChina wheneatingvariousvegetablesinwinterwasaluxuryinthepast becauseoflackofsunlightandcoldweather Thissituationhasbeenchangedbyairtransport Asaresult bycarryinggoodsbyplanes citizenscanselectallkindsoffruitandvegetableswhichcomefromotherplacesorcountries Besides airtransportationhasincreasedpeople sincomeinsomeareas Forexample Hainan asouthernprovinceofChina exportsitstropicalfruittomanycountriesbyairandthathashelpedmanyfarmerstolessentheirimpoverishedcircumstances 2020 3 28 11 Admittedly purchasingproductswhichutilizesairtransportcancostconsumersmore Anexampleofthisisthatlastweek Iboughtsomeoranges thepriceofwhichwasdoubledbecausetheywerefromAmerica Althoughtheywerealittleexpensive Iwascontentabouttheirflavor Becauseofgoodquality thereby theirevaluatedpriceseemedacceptableandreasonable 2020 3 28 12 Ingeneral eventhoughthecostofproductsthathavebeencarriedbyaircanbehigher individualsstillprefertopurchasethembecausetheyarefreshandingoodquality Therefore Ibelieveairtransportwillremainorincreaseitspopularityinthefuture 2020 3 28 13 TaskResponse 4Youhaveonlyreallyansweredonehalfofthequestion Youaresupposedtodiscussbothsidesoftheargument butyouonlybrieflymentionedthatairtransportcanraisefoodcosts Also yourexamplesaretoospecific whereyoutalkaboutdifferentregionsofChina ortoopersonal aboutyourtriptothemarket InTask2 youaresupposedtodiscussthequestionfromanabstractpointofview whichmeansyouneedtohaveabroadperspective Cohesion Coherence 5LexicalResource 5GrammaticalRange Accuracy 6 2020 3 28 14 2020 3 28 15 2020 3 28 16 2020 3 28 17 Somepeoplethinkusingculturalheritagetoattracttouristisharmful Othersthinkthatistheonlywayforculturalheritagetoremain Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion 2020 3 28 18 Somepeoplearguethatutilizingculturalheritagetoattracttouristsisharmfulwhileothersbelievethatistheonlywayforculturalheritagetoremain Inmyopinion bothofthestatementsarereasonable 2020 3 28 19 Tourismaffordsindividualswithaccesstokeeptheminformedabouttheculturesofwheretheyarevisiting and atthemeanwhile itprovidesthelocalgovernmentwithasubstantialamountoffundsfromthetaxrevenue Thiscanbeinvestedinpreservingtangibleculturalheritagesuchashistoricalsites oldbuildingsandhistoricalrelicsfromtourism However Ibelievethereismorethanonewaytokeepculturalheritage forinstance someinternationalorganizationsareplayingakeyroleinprotectingit 2020 3 28 20 Additionally itisundeniablethatutilizingculturalheritagetoattracttouristshasitsdisadvantages oneofwhichisitmightharmculturalheritageafteralongduration Forexample buildingswithalonghistoryareoftendestroyedbyvisitors Barsinthatbuildingcannotsupportmanypeoplebecausetheyeasilybend Thesadfactisthattheywerebrokenintheendbecauseofthousandsofvisitors Besidesthat touristsmayhaveaneffectonlocalresidents cultures Nevertheless Iamoftheopinionthatitappearsaslightlypessimisticbecausetourismalsohasgoodeffectsonprotectingculturalheritage 2020 3 28 21 Ingeneral eachviewhasitsownideasbutisnotcompletelycorrect Itishardformetofollowoneofthem Ibelieve therefore thatauthoritiesshouldconsidermoreaboutdevelopingthestrongpointsandavoidtheweakpointsoftourism 2020 3 28 22 TaskResponse 4Youhavedonewelltoaddressissuesonbothsidesoftheargument butthequestionaskedyoutostateyourownviewaswell Inthistypeofquestion youmustchooseaside Cohesion Coherence 6LexicalResource 6GrammaticalRange Accuracy 6 2020 3 28 23 常见语法错误类型一 名词单复数与冠词的使用 2020 3 28 24 Fix1 Employeescanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthanemployers Fix2 Anemployeecanbenefitfromtelecommutingthanhisorheremployer Fix3 Employeescanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthantheiremployers Fix4 Theemployeecanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthanhisorheremployer 2020 3 28 25 1 Conflictsmayarisebetweentouristandlocalresident 2 Somepeoplethinkifchilddonotacceptextraeducation itiswastetotheirvalubletimeandenergy 2020 3 28 26 常见语法错误类型二 动词的使用 2020 3 28 27 1 Growupinapoorfamilymakessomechildrenfeeltheyarenotascapableasotherchildren 2 Someeventsarenotreportbythemediainadependableway 3 Thegovernmentsofallcountriesonthisplanetisbeginningtorealizetheseverityofwatershortage 2020 3 28 28 常见语法错误类型三 介词的使用 Countriesshouldpayattentiononthedisadvantagesglobalizationmaycreate Oneofthesolutionsontheunemploymentproblemistoincreasetheenrollmenttograduateschools Theinternethasinsteadofteachersinmanyclassrooms ManystudentshangwithinlocalKTVbarsduringweekendsforsingingKaraoke 2020 3 28 29 常见语法错误类型四 形容词和副词的使用 1 Theworldisdevelopingrapidandprovidesmanywonderfullyopportunitiesforpeople 2 Admitted moderncommunicationmeanssuchasmobilephonesorcomputersareusedmoreandmorewidebecauseoftheirconvenienceandefficiency Deliveringelectroniclettersormessagestakesliteralnotimeandcostslittle Theywillbecomemainstreamsoftextcommunicationsinthefutureandplayanincreasingimportantroleinsociety 2020 3 28 30 Thesetypesofmobilityaretermedrespectablyspatial vertical andideationalmobility Thepresenceofwaterisaprerequisitefortheexistingoflife 常见语法错误类型五 词义 词性混淆 2020 3 28 31 常见语法错误类型六 关系词 IshallneverforgetthoseyearswhichIlivedinthefarmwhichyouvisitedlastweek Heisamanofgreatexperience fromwhomuchcanbelearned Idon tlikethewaywhichyouspeaktoher Elevenyearsafterdismissalfromschool youngAlbertEinsteinpublishedthemostamazingtheoryofrelativitywhichchangedourunderstandingoftheuniverse 2020 3 28 32 Withtheworldisdeveloping thecomputer aswellsometheothertechnologies havegainpopular greatgivenmuchpeopleconvenienceandefficient 2020 3 28 33 人类的长寿有助于人类社会的进步 Humanlongevitycontributestotheprogressionofmankind 2020 3 28 34 最近几年 人们已经对不加控制的汽车尾气排放所引起的严重后果表示了关注 Inrecentyears peoplehasshownconcernonthedireconsequencesoftheincreasedcaremissions 2020 3 28 35 我强烈反对减少学校中的音乐和体育课程 Iprofoundly stronglydisagreewithcurtailingthemusicalandP Ecoursesatschool 2020 3 28 36 在过去的二十年里 环境保护已经上升成最热门的话题之一 Inthepast20years environmentalprotectionhasarisenasoneofthehottesttopics 2020 3 28 37 动物保护是耗费时间的和徒劳无益的 Animalprotectionisbothtime consumingandunrewarding 2020 3 28 38 老师的使命之一是帮助学生开拓新的视角并努力实现社会和学术目标 onemissionofteachersistohelpstudentstodevelopnewperspectivesandtostriveforsocialandacademicgoals 2020 3 28 39 跳槽的一个原因是追寻更广泛的工作经验和面对新挑战 Thereasonofjob hoppingisseekingawidervarietyofworkingexperienceandtakingupnewchallenges 2020 3 28 40 在全球范围内 全球化给每个行业既带来了机会又造成了问题 Globalizationposesbothopportunitiesandpro