2013届高中英语 5年高考3年模拟 专题22 书面表达（浙江专版）

用心 爱心 专心1 20132013 届英语科届英语科 5 5 年高考年高考 3 3 年模拟年模拟 浙江专版浙江专版 专题专题 2222 书面表达书面表达 备考策略备考策略 一 高考英语作文完美行文四步骤 STEP1 确定文章框架 包括 时态 语态 格式 展开方式 开头结尾等 STEP2 确定内容要点 包括 主要人物 时间地点 重要细节 合理发挥等 STEP3 正式开始写作 整理思路成篇 行文连贯 STEP4 检查全文 主要检查语法以及粗心犯下的错误 二 高考英语文章主体段落三法 一 举实例 思维短路 举实例 提出一个观点 举实例 提出一个方案 举实例 而且者也是我 们揭示一个观点最好的方式 任何情况下 只要我们无法继续文章 不管三七二十一 尽 管举例子 inordertoattractmorecustomers advertisershaveadoptedeverypossiblestimulativefac torinmakingads suchassound light colours cartoonfilmsandhumanperformance forins tance toadvertiseacertainfood advertiserswillaskanactororactresstositatatablean ddevourtheseeminglydeliciousfoodwhiletheyfiindhimorher 更多句型 totake asanexample oneexampleis anotherexampleis forexample 二 做比较 方法 写完一个要点 比较与之相似的 又写完一个要点 再比较与之相反的 世界上没有同样的指纹 没有相同的树叶 文章亦同 只有通过比较 你才会发现二 者的相同点 throughcomparison 和不同点 throughcontrast 下面是一些短语 相 似的比较 incomparison likewise similarly inthesamemanner 相反的比较 用心 爱心 专心2 ontheotherhand conversely whereas while instead nevertheless incontrast ontheco ntrary comparedwith 三 换言之 没话说了 可以换一句话再说 让你的文章在多一些字 或者文邹邹地说 是让读者更 充分的理解你的观点 实际就是重复重复再重复 下面的句子实际上就三个字 iloveyou iamenthusiasticaboutyou thatistosay iloveyou iamwildaboutyou inotherwo rds ihavefalleninlovewithyou 或者上面我们举过的例子 icannotbearit 可以用短语表 达 icannotputupwithit 因此可以这样说 icannotbearit thatistosay icannotputupwithitoriamfedupwithit 更多短语 inmoredifficultlanguage insimplerwords putitmoresimply 1 开头万能公式一 名人名言 有人问了 我没有记住名言 怎么办 尤其是英语名言 很好办 编 原理 我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的 包括我们欣赏的文章也是 所以尽管编 但是一定要听起来很有道理呦 而且没准将来我们就是名人呢 对吧 经典句型 aproberbsays youareonlyyoungonce 适用于已记住的名言 itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever 适用于自编名言 更多经典句型 aseveryoneknows noonecandenythat 2 开头万能公式二 数字统计 原理 要想更有说服力 就应该用实际的数字来说明 原则上在议论文当中十不应该 出现虚假数字的 可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一 但编无妨 只要我有东西写就万 事大吉了 所以不妨试用下面的句型 accordingtoarecentsurvey about78 9 ofthecollegestudentswantedtofurthertheirstu dyaftertheirgraduation 看起来这个数字文邹邹的 其实都是编造出来的 下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样 编造 用心 爱心 专心3 honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示 大学生向老师请假的理由当中 78 都是假的 travelbybike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示 85 的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行 车 youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示 在某个大学 学生的课余时间的 70 都是在休闲娱乐 five dayworkweekbetterthansix daywork 根据最近的一项统计调查显示 98 的人同意每周五天工作日 更多句型 arecentstatisticsshowsthat 高考英语作文结尾万能公式 1 结尾万能公式一 如此结论 说完了 毕竟要归纳一番 相信各位都有这样的经历 领导长篇大论 到最后终于冒 出个 总而言之 之类的话 我们马上停止开小差 等待领导说结束语 也就是说 开头很 好 也必然要有一个精彩的结尾 让读者眼前一亮 这样 你就可以拿高分了 比如下面 的例子 obviously 此为过渡短语 wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers 如果读者很难 显而见之 但说无妨 就当读者的眼光太浅罢了 更多过渡短语 tosumup inconclusion inbrief onaccountofthis thus 更多句型 thus itcanbeconcludedthat therefore wecanfindthat 2 结尾万能公式二 如此建议 用心 爱心 专心4 如果说 如此结论 是结尾最没用的废话 那么 如此建议 应该是最有价值的废话了 因为这里虽然也是废话 但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型 拽 obviously itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典 因为考官本来经常考这个句型 而如果我们自己写出来 你说考官会怎么想呢 更多句型 accordingly irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken consequently tosolvetheproblem so memeasuresshouldbetaken 考点解析考点解析 考点一 图表式题型 步骤 1 说明图表 2 引起变化的原因 3 前景预测 AccordingAccording toto thethe graphgraph presented presented itit cancan bebe observedobserved thatthat therethere havehave beenbeen greatgreat changeschanges inin ThereThere areare manymany reasonsreasons explainingexplaining thethe situation situation AsAs forfor me me I I considerconsider thethe followingsfollowings thethe importantimportant ones ones First First Second Second Besides Besides However However thisthis graphgraph maymay notnot predictpredict thethe entireentire situationsituation inin thethe future future I I believebelieve ModelModel 1 1 Changes in Chinese Professions The Year Agriculture Manufacturing Service Industry 1980 68 27 5 1990 38 40 22 AccordingAccording toto thethe graphgraph presented presented itit cancan bebe observedobserved thatthat therethere havehave beenbeen greatgreat changeschanges inin Chinese professions In 1980 more than half of the Chinese were engaged in agriculture about 27 were employed in manufacturing while 用心 爱心 专心5 only 5 of the people were working in service industry However ten years later in 1990 there was a 38 decrease in the number of people engaged in agriculture and an even bigger increase of 40 and 22 in the number of people involved in manufacturing and service ThereThere areare manymany reasonsreasons explainingexplaining thisthis situation situation AsAs forfor me me I I considerconsider thethe followingsfollowings thethe importantimportant ones ones First First with the development of economy a great number of farmers are now working in various small businesses without leaving their homes Second Second the economic policies result in a great improvement in the Chinese people s living standard which creates a huge demand for service and thus enables the service industries to flourish and absorbs more and more people into these fields However However thisthis graphgraph maymay notnot predictpredict thethe entireentire situationsituation inin thethe future future I I believebelieve as a result of China s open door and economic reform policies a bright tomorrow for all people will be achieved through efforts of every person Practice1 Write an English composition in about 120 words according to the situation given Food 1979 1984 1989 1994 1999 Grain 90 85 75 60 60 Fruit vegetable 5 7 10 15 20 Milk meat 5 8 15 25 20 Total 100 100 100 100 100 AccordingAccording toto thethe graphgraph presented presented itit cancan bebe observedobserved thatthat therethere havehave beenbeen greatgreat changerschangers inin people s diet over the period from 1986 to 1990 The consumption of grain is decreasing year by year while that of some high energy good such as mild and meant is increasing steadily ThereThere areare manymany reasonsreasons explainingexplaining thisthis situation situation AsAs forfor me me I I considerconsider thethe followingsfollowings thethe importantimportant ones ones FirstFirst nowadays people can afford to buy much 用心 爱心 专心6 more expensive food with better nutrition Second people now pay more attention to the quality of it because they know it is of great benefit to their health to diet in a scientific way Therefore they try their best to improve the structure of their food ModelModel 2 2 Car Accidents Declining in Walton AccordingAccording toto thethe graphgraph presented presented wewe cancan observeobserve thethe changingchanging raterate ofof car accidents in Walton City in 1990 WeWe cancan seesee anan increasingincreasing trendtrend inin the first two months Then at the beginning of March thethe raterate camecame toto a a peakpeak pointpoint ofof 32 But in June it fellfell toto 26 In the next two months it was rising again and in August reachedreached 39 From August itit declined declined andand continuallycontinually droppeddropped toto thethe lowestlowest pointpoint ofof 16 at the end of the year ThereThere areare manymany reasonsreasons explainingexplaining thisthis situation situation AsAs forfor me me I I considerconsider thethe followingsfollowings thethe importantimportant ones ones FirstFirst that the rate of car accidents reached the highest point in August isis duedue toto weather conditions WeWe allall knowknow thatthat hot weather sometimes makes us lose patience so drivers want to finish their job earlier by driving fast which easily leads too more accidents In winter the snow which makes drivers more careful in their driving and the decreasing number of cars resulting form a fewer number of people taking cars BothBoth ofof thesethese accordinglyaccordingly mademade the rate of cart accidents droop As in spring slippery roads attritutableattritutable toto 归根于 the rain again leads to more car accidents However However thisthis graphgraph maymay notnot predictpredict thethe entireentire situationsituation inin thethe future future I I believebelieve this trend will be changed this year Once the driving conditions are improved the rate of car accidents will be reduced 用心 爱心 专心7 ModelModel 3 3 Film is Giving Way to TV AccordingAccording toto thethe graphgraph presentedpresented itit cancan bebe observedobserved thatthat therethere werewere greatgreat changeschanges of the number of film goers and TV watchers The number of people going to cinema decreaseddecreased sharply WhileWhile the number of television viewers increasedincreased almost twenty times Obviously Obviously film is giving way to TV butbut why why ThereThere areare manymany reasonsreasons explainingexplaining thisthis situation situation AsAs forfor me me I I considerconsider thethe followingsfollowings thethe importantimportant ones ones First First people are becoming richer and richer TV sets can be afforded in almost every household Besides Besides people can watch TV at home quite comfortable while such comfort can not enjoyed if they go to the cinema What sWhat s more more people don t need to pay anything for watching TV while they have to buy tickets if they prefer the cinema HoweverHowever thethe graphgraph maymay notnot predictpredict thethe entireentire situationsituation inin thethe future future I I believebelieve there are and will always be a number of film fans who prefer to visit cinemas ItIt isis quitequite clearclear thatthat no matter how good TV programs might be people could not get so much pleasure as they sit in cinemas enjoying films on wide screens 较点二 说明利弊题型 步骤 1 说明事物现状 2 事物本身的优缺点 3 你对现状或前景的看法 格式 1 Nowadays it is common to see Many people like because 用心 爱心 专心8 Besides However AAA just like anything else has its negative side as well It has also given rise to a series of problems For example The worst of all for the reason that Through above analysis we can see that the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones Therefore I am in favor of AAA 的现状 人们对待 AAA 的态度 AAA 的优点之一 优点之二 AAA 的缺点 进一步指出 AAA 的缺点 原因 AAA 格式 2 Today play s a very important part of our life Just as people often say that everything has both is good and bad aspects its good sides are as follows For one thing For another However every coin has two sides There are also some unfavorable aspects First Second But for me I think what is more important is its positive side Because 事物现状 理由一 用心 爱心 专心9 理由二 可能有的危害之一 危害之二 作者认为利大于弊的理由 Model 1 Advantages and Disadvantages of Access to the Internet Today Today thethe Internet play s play s a a veryvery importantimportant partpart ofof ourour life life JustJust asas peoplepeople oftenoften saysay thatthat everythingeverything hashas bothboth isis goodgood andand badbad aspects aspects itsits goodgood sidessides areare asas follows follows ForFor oneone thing thing it greatly improves the efficiency of scientific research allows scientists quick access to data and research findings in their specific areas Those who have access to the Internet have an advantage in business over those who don t ForFor another another the Internet has made personal communication both more convenient and more rapid However However everyevery coincoin hashas twotwo sides sides ThereThere areare alsoalso somesome unfavorableunfavorable aspects aspects First First some people like to chat with others through the Internet which will cost them a lot of money Second Second not all information on the Internet is useful Some of it will do harm to young people ButBut forfor me me I I thinkthink whatwhat isis moremore importantimportant isis itsits positivepositive side side BecauseBecause it holds the key to success in the 21st century if properly used Model 2 Advantages and Disadvantages of Studying Abroad Nowadays Nowadays itit isis commoncommon toto seesee more and more young people are going to study abroad ManyMany peoplepeople likelike to study abroad becausebecause they think by attending a college in a foreign country they can learn not lonely useful knowledge of science but also the culture and customs of other nations BesidesBesides they can take advantage of this opportunity to gain a good command of language very 用心 爱心 专心10 quickly MoreoverMoreover they can meet different people and enjoy different culture which may help to broaden their views However However studying abroad justjust likelike anythinganything else else hashas itsits negativenegative sideside asas well well ItIt hashas alsoalso givengiven riserise toto a a seriesseries ofof problems problems ForFor example example the costs are much higher than those in their native country Most overseas students have to work for a living which can t allow them to pay all their attention to study TheThe worstworst ofof allall they may feel very lonely forfor thethe reasonreason thatthat their relatives and friends are not with them ThroughThrough aboveabove analysis analysis wewe cancan seesee thatthat thethe positivepositive aspectsaspects outweighoutweigh thethe negativenegative ones ones Therefore Therefore I I amam inin favorfavor ofof going abroad to study Model 3 Advantages and Disadvantages of the Development of Science and Technology Today Today science and technology playsplays a a veryvery importantimportant partpart ofof ourour life life JustJust asas peoplepeople oftenoften saysay thatthat everythingeverything hashas bothboth isis goodgood andand badbad aspects aspects itsits goodgood sidessides areare asas follows follows ForFor oneone thing thing with the development of science and technology we can make computers do many things so our life will be made easier ForFor another another better medicine will be invented and people can live a longer life Hundreds of people will live in homes that will seem like palace to their parents and grandparents BesidesBesides brought together by telecommunications people around the world will work together more efficiently than ever before However However everyevery coincoin hashas twotwo sides sides ThereThere areare alsoalso somesome unfavorableunfavorable aspects aspects First First if man made intelligent robots were put into use what would these clever people do to their producers Second Second the automation would result in growing jobless population ButBut forfor me me I I thinkthink whatwhat isis moremore importantimportant isis itsits positivepositive side side SoSo I I believebelieve we all have a bright future 考点三 解决方法题型 用心 爱心 专心11 步骤 1 问题现状 2 怎样解决 解决方案的优缺点 格式 1 Nowadays we have to face a problem that People had figured out many ways to solve this problem First Though this method has its good sides like it can one of its bad sides it brings about is that it can Second is another means But it also has its advantages and disadvantages On the one hand On the other hand All in all the solutions may not bring the perfect result but as long as we do it with our brains and hands we will one day resolve the problem 说明问题现状 解决方法一 带来的好处 带来的坏处 解决方法二 好处 坏处 格式 2 Nowadays which has aroused our close attention AAA is very harmful In addition There are ways to get rid of AAA First Second Last but not least 用心 爱心 专心12 All in all the solutions may not bring the perfect result but as long as we do it with our brains and hands we will one day resolve the problem AAA AAA 的危害 危害二 第一种解决办法 第二种办法 第三种 Mode I HowHow toto SolveSolve HousingHousing ProblemsProblems inin BigBig CitiesCities Nowadays Nowadays wewe havehave toto faceface a a housing problemproblem thatthat it s difficult for a large number of people to find a small place to live and rest PeoplePeople hadhad figuredfigured outout manymany waysways toto solvesolve thisthis problem problem First First some suggest building satellite cities in the suburbs ThoughThough thisthis methodmethod hashas itsits goodgood sidessides likelike itit cancan meet people s desire to live in the open air and enjoy the beautiful scenery in the suburbs OneOne ofof itsits badbad sidessides itit bringsbrings aboutabout isis thatthat it is not convenient for people to go to work in the city center Second Second utilizing underground space isis anotheranother means means ButBut itit alsoalso hashas itsits advantagesadvantages andand disadvantages disadvantages OnOn thethe oneone hand hand more space can be spared OnOn thethe otherother hand hand people will live underground without the bright sunshine and the fresh air and the realization of this idea will cost us too much time and money which we cannot afford AllAll inin all all thethe solutionssolutions maymay notnot bringbring thethe perfectperfect result result butbut asas longlong asas wewe dodo itit withwith ourour brainsbrains andand hands hands wewe willwill oneone dayday resolveresolve thethe problem problem Model 2 NowadaysNowadays Cheating in exams is popular in almost every school whichwhich hashas arousedaroused ourour closeclose attention attention Some students cheat because they usually don t study hard enough so they have no confidence in themselves while taking exams 用心 爱心 专心13 AAAAAA isis veryvery harmful harmful The purpose of a test is to show what a student has leaned about a subject and what he needs to spend more time studying Those who always commit cheating in exams are surely missing this point ThereThere areare manymany waysways toto getget ridrid ofof the bad habit of cheating in exams FirstFirst School may help students realize cheating in exams is really cheating themselves To survive and succeed in the 21 century we students should study hard and gain a comprehensive know knowledge SecondSecond those who still cheat once found should be severely punished All in all the solutions may not bring the perfect result but as long as we do it with our brains and hands We will one day resolve the problem Model 3 HeavyHeavy traffictraffic Nowadays Nowadays wewe havehave toto faceface a a problemproblem thatthat the traffic is heavy People have to spend more time to go to work and go back home and sometimes they might be involved in road accidents Buses are crowed especially in hot summer when bicycle riders don t enjoy their trips in the sun They would rather squeeze into crowded buses PeoplePeople hadhad figuredfigured outout manymany waysways toto solvesolve thisthis problem problem FirstFirst laylay downdown moremore one wayone way streetstreet whichwhich cancan relieverelieve thethe pressurepre