作文范文 张静

作文范文作文范文 张静张静 真题范文解析与记忆图表作文 图表分析说明型 1 Changes inPeople s Dietin China写作思路1 State the changes inpeople s dietwithin the5years 2 Give possiblereasons for the changes 33 Draw your own conclusionsPara 1 重点描述图表中的总体信息 即1986 1990年这5年中人们的饮食结 构的变化 同时对图表提供的信息进行比较说明 Para 2 分析 中国人的饮食结构发生变化的 原因 Para 3 根据比较和分析 得出最后结论 范文From the chart givenabove we cansee great changes in the dietof theChinese from1986to1990 根据图表信息概括出某一现象 The consumption of grainhas decreasedby4 while theconsumptionof high qualityfood such asmilk andmeat has increasedsteadily 对图表数据进行概括性描述 The changes in dietcan beaounted for a number of factors 分析变化的原因 First with theincreasing development of science and economy people s livingstandard has been betterand better they can afford tobuy goodfood 原因1 Another factoris thatpeople haverealized theimportance of a balanceddiet to their health Lack ofcertain amountof meator milk for example will resultin poor health 原因2 Finally owing to the economicreform meat fish andmilk which werescarce in the past are producedin largequantities 原因3 注意时态的运用 To sumup insignificant asthose changesmay seem they arethe signsof theimproved economiondition in China 评价这一变化的意义 We believe that aslong as the effortcontinues inreform andopening to the outsideworld there will be greaterchangesinpeople s dietin the future 进一步展望美好的未来前景 范文二Student Use of Computers1 上图所示为1990年 1995年 2000年某校大学生使用计 算机的情况 请描述其变化 2 请说明发生这些变化的原因 可从计算机的用途 价格或社会发 展等方面加以说明 3 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题 范文A As is shown in the chart greatchangeshave takenplace instudents use of puters in the university The hoursstudents spenton putersper weeksoared fromabout2in1990to20in2000 more than9times higher 图表所反映出的具体信息和比较性描述 Obviously pute rs are being more and more popular There areseveral reasonsfor this 分析现象产生的原因 On one hand puters facilitateus inmany aspectsof life On theother hand with the fast developmentof Inter our demandson putersincreased sharply Last butnot least with thedrop inprices ofputers more studentscanaffordthem 3个原因 Just aseach coinhas twosides there stillexist someproblems To beginwith many studentsuse putersonly toplay videogames which hasgreatly influencedtheir study What s more many students health has been damagedas aresult oftoo muchexposure toputers 引起的问题 范文B StudentUseofComputers Nowadays more and more studentstend touse puters Reading thischart we canfind that the averagenumber ofhours astudent spendson theputer perweek hasincreased sharply In1990 it hasless than2hours and in1995 it increasedto almost4hours and in2000 the numbersoared to20hours Obviously puters arebeingmore andmorepopular There areseveral reasonsfor this First puters helpus inmore aspectsof life Meanwhile thefastdevelopments of the Interenlarges ourdemands forusing puters We caneasily contactwith friendsin remoteplaces throughthe Inter Besides the pricesofputersare gettinglower andlower which enables more students to purchasethem 提出这个变化可能However there stillexist someproblems such as poor quality out ofdate designsand soon What s more how tobalance thetime betweenusing putersand studyingis alsoa seriousproblem Anyhow we will benefit a lot fromputers aslong aswe usethem properly 范文三Why DoMore andMore PeopleBuy Houses In recentyears many Chinesejoin in the groupof house buyers 根据图表提出某一现象 Aording to the chart house buyers aountfor15 and30 of allpeople in1995and2000respectively pared withalmost nonein1990 概括性描述图表数据 Why domore andmore people buy houses 用提问方式引出探讨的主题 造成这个现象的原因 For ohing with thereform of the country there aremore peopleinvesting inbuilding houseswhile lesspeople hadmoney todo soa decadeago So there is anever growing number of housesavailable in the market 原因1 For another people canafford tobuy houseswith theirincreasing salaries 原因2 An officialreport showsthat thesalaries onaverage can be ashigh asRMB2000 3000monthly whereas themonthly inefor peopleten years ago wasonly RMB500 原因2展开 Last butnot least the governmentpolicy stimulatesthe activityof house buying such asinvesting moneyin constructionand returningine taxes 原因3 From theforegoing the trendthat moreandmorepeoplebuyhouses meanssuess of our country s reforming 对全文概括 结论 范文四图表说明全英文 无中文翻译和提示 注本篇所给英 文材料后面有对应的翻译 也可作汉英互译练习 Education Pays published everythree years presents detailedevidence of the privateand publicbenefits ofhigher education It alsosheds lighton thedistribution of these benefitsby examiningboth theincreases and the persistentdisparities dis p r ti n 不同 不一致 不等 i n collegeparticipation andpletion In thethree yearsbetween the publication ofEducation Paysxxand EducationPaysxx median earnings 经济中的固定搭配 收益中值 for four year collegegraduates increasedmore rapidlythan thoseofhigh school graduatesandthegap betweenthe unemploymentrates of the twogroups grew In additionto earningsparisons the reportdocuments differencesin lifestyles health and otheroutes forpeople with and withoutcollege education Differences inenrollment andpletion patternsacross demographicgroups highlightthe realitythat gapsin educationalattainment areexplained bya binationof money and otherfactors 翻译教育回报 每隔三年发布一次 它显示了高等教育所能带来的私人和公共利益的详细的证据 同时 通过考查大学入学与毕业方面的增长和长期的差异 它也阐 明了由高等教育带来的这些利益的分布状况 在xx年和xx年教育回报发布后的中间三年 受过四年大学教育的高 校毕业生的平均收入的增长要快于高中毕业生 并且 这两者间的 失业率的差距也加大了 除了收入对比之外 这份报告也显示了是否拥有大学学历给人们的 生活方式 健康和其他因素造成的差异 人群的教育入学和教育完成模式 是否上大学 是否大学顺利毕业 的差异强调了一个事实 那就是 教育程度的不同所带来的差距 是可以通过收入和其他多种因素来解释的 范文注意括号中的定语表达What isshownin thechartabove is that thosepeople with highdegree earn more than those with lower For example staff with master s degree receive a better paymentthan those with bachelor s degree aording to a surveyof thepayment to the employee These surveyindicates thateducation degreedoes have a relationshipwith earnings contrary to the recenttheory of useless educationQuite afew reasonscan aountfor thisphenomenon for ohing with thedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology quite afew high tech industriesemerge overnight which leadstoasoar demandof workforces with higheducational degree Additionally those with educationalbackground underassociate degree are easilydismissed andpaid bylow salary They can be replacedany timedue tothe factthat theirjobs areeasy andcanbefinished byaverage people 图表作文的常用句型分析图表现象时常用句型As canbe seenfrom thediagram chart graph table As isrevealed illustrated shown stated noted inthechart It canbe seenfrom thechart table statistics that The figuresuggests shows indicates illustrates demonstrates that The chartgives information that 表示 结论 的常用句型1 From theanalyses metionedabove we candraw arrive at e to make reach the conclusion that 2 From the above datawe canconclude 3 Aording tothe informationgathered above we mayreach the conclusion that 4 We can make aconclusion fromtheabovethat 表示 数据 的常用句型1 had thelargest percentage proportion of 2 make s up take s up aount s for percent 3 On thetop of the listis which aountsfor percent 4 At thebottom is which takesup percent 5 Compared withA B has a higher lower percentage 6 A istwice asmuch many asB 7 A is three timesfaster slower than B 8 A is percent higherthanB 9 A isslower thanB bythree times 10 The number of Aisthreetimes asmuch asthat ofB 表示 数据增长 的常用句型1 There was a rapid sharp dramatic marked gradual slow rise increase upward 2 It increased rose went upfrom to 3 It hasrisen toan averageof 4 The number of is on the rise increase 5 The number of tends togo up increase rise 6 There wasa boominthe numberof from to 7 The numberof climbed jumped rose suddenly went sharplyup soared to in 表示 数据下降 的常用句型1 There wasa fall decrease reduction decline drop 2 The numberof has fallen dropped declined to 3 The numberof is on the decline 4 The numberof tends togo down decrease fall drop 表示 变化不大 的常用句型 完毕 1 There wasa slightfluctuation n 波动 涨落 起伏 inthenumberof from to 2 The numberof remained steady stable constant between and 3 There waslittle hardly anychange inthenumberof between and 4 The numberof remained levelbetween and 5 The numberof remained steadyat approximately 大约 大概 between and 范文五2 问题对策 型分析问题 找出成因 提出解决办法 题目实例如下xx年6月英语 四级作文真题 商品过度包装Directions For this part you areallowed30minutes towrite ashort essayentitled ExcessivePackaging You shouldwrite atleast120words followingthe outline given below 1 许多商品都存在过度包装的现象2 出现这种现象的原因及 其带来的后果3 为了改变这种状况 我认为 No onein Chinahas failedto noticethat goodsare wrapped 包装 in beautiful fancy flaring 华美的 花哨的 boxes orbags Taking alook around we canfind exampleswith ease easily asmall puteris packedin athick andheavy 又厚又重 carton clothes areput in a well designed plasticbags 塑料袋 which printedvarious kinds of patternsand colorsand soon What arethe causesof thisproblem On theone hand in orderto earnmore economicgains 经济收益 a considerablenumberof 很多 manufactures usuallywrap theirproducts withunnecessary butappealing 吸引人的 materials aimingat attractingcustomer s attention arousing theircuriosity andthen stimulatingtheir purchasingdesire 吸引顾客的注意力并引发他们的好奇心 On theother hand quite afew customersbelievethatthe moredelicate thepackage seems the superiorthe qualitywill be 包装越精美 产品质量就越好 the notionhas alsoencouraged thetrend of excessive packaging However the emergenceofexcessivepackage 过度包装 has givenrise to 导致 many undesirableconsequences that can t beneglected 不容忽视 For ohing it is a wasteof preciousand limitednatural resources which willthus poseunderlying 潜在的 threat toour generation 子孙后代 For another customers areoften deceivedby artificialexternal packingrather thanbeing providedwith high quality goods To changethis situation I thinkwe shouldtake the following measures First laws must be madeand implemented 执行 实施 生效 to imposerestriction on 实行限制 excessive packaging Second a publiceducation campaignshould belaunched toarouse customers consciousness 意识 that packagingdoesn t equalto quality and alsolet themknow thebad impactof it Only in this waycan weput anend to this trend 结束这种趋势 范文六正反观点对比型 辨析两种对立观点 题目实例如下四级作文真题Directions For this part you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition on the topicCan MoneyBuy Happiness You shouldwrite noless than100words andyou shouldbase yourposition on the outline given inChinese below 1 有人认为金钱是幸福之本 source of happiness 2 也有人认为金钱是万恶之源 root of all evil 3 我的看法Can moneybuy happiness Various peoplehave variousanswers Some peoplethink that money is the source of happiness With money one canbuy whateverhe enjoys With money one cando whateverhe likes So in their minds money canbring fort security and soon Money as theythink is the sourceofhappiness But there are stilla lot of otherswho think thatmoney is the root of all evil Money drivespeople tosteal to rob and tobreak thelaw A lot of peoplebecame criminalsjust becausethey werein searchof money And what s worse in some people s eyesthere is nothing whichcan tbebought by money which causesthem losetheir own lives whenhunting it As faras I am concerned money isessential to life andwe cannotdo withoutmoney But eventhough money is necessarytolife it can t buy happiness Happiness isnot somethingthatcanbe measuredbymoney It isa stateof mind One canhave plentyof money with whichhe canbuy whateverhe wants and atthe same time he isnothappy becauseheisnever satisfiedorheis troubledby variouskinds ofproblems Therefore although money is necessaryfor ahappy life it can t buyhappiness 用自己的话进行浓缩 对于此篇要在领会范文所给 的方向和精神后 用自己的语言进行浓缩 改编成适合的四级作文 改编范例如下Can moneybuyhappiness People s opinionsvary fromindividual toindividual Some peoplethinkthatmoney is the sourceofhappiness With money they canbuy whateverthey wantand whateverthey need With money they cando everythingthey like However there arestill some people whoargue thatmoneyistheroot of all evil Money drivespeople tosteal to rob and tobreak thelaw Some peoplebecame criminalsor evenlost theirownlivesjust becauseof theirstrong andgreedy desirefor money As faras I am concerned moneyis something butmoneyisnot everything We shouldadopt assume properattitude towardsmoneyandearn moneyin leagalway Only in this waycan moneyreally bethesourceos happinessinstead ofrootof allevil 134words 作文中常用的结构常用的 启 承 转 合 表达方法1 启 按顺序First Firstly First ofall At first In the first place In thebeginning To beginwith To startwith For ohing On theone hand当前Now At present recently lately 一般而言In general generally speaking asamatter offact2 承 按顺序second secondly beside this what ismore in addition furthermore moreover for theother on theother hand 举例子for example instance as anexample as anotherexample namely 换言之in otherwords in particular 扩展after that afterwards from nowon similarly meanwhile atthesametime 3 转 转折but yet however nevertheless though although despite in spiteof on thecontrary unlike on theother hand 4 合 结尾 In conclusion In short In summary Therefore Thus To sumup To conclude consequently To summarize Briefly Above all As aresult at last eventually aordingly 语言1 词汇替换 注意作文中的选词 尽量多样化 是文章富于变化认为assume argue hold claim sugge st declare say believe insist maintain suppose that in myopinion in myview in mypoint ofview as faras Iknow as faras I m concerned as forme重要的important necessary critical crucial primary ele mental significant be ofgreat value be ofgreat significance be ofgreat use很多many a varietyof variouss of a multitudeof an armyof an oceanof A great large huge considerable significant noticeable number amount quantity portion of越来越多 moreandmore a growingnumberof an increasingnumberof on therise大多的the vast overwhelming majority of人people folks individuals characters支持 反对者followers objectors be infavor ofthe ideathat be for be againat2 插入语Apparently evidently however surely indeed briefly fortunately amazingly undoubtedly mostimportant ofall even worse strange enough after all to one s surprise to beexact roughly speaking in otherwords asamatter offact 3 用一些具体化的进行描述Personality generous humorous interesting smart gentle warm hearted hospitable 表示好的 good favorable pleasurable excellent outstanding perfect etc 表示负面的的 bad unfavorable harmful adverse poisonous etc 历年真题范文 xx xx 几乎每套真题大都从从07年起 因此之后的范文大家真题中都 有 在此不再赘述 大家充分利用好手中的真题 xx年6月 Part Writing 30minutes Directions For this part you areallowed thirtyminutes towrite aneye witness aountofa traffic aident You shouldwrite atleast120words aordingtothe outline given below inChinese 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸 就此写一份见证 书 见证书须包括以下几点 1 车祸发生的时间及地点 2 你所见到的车 祸情况 3 你对车祸原因的分析 An EyeWitness AountofaTraffic AidentMy nameis Liming I amstudying incollege A weekago Isaw atraffic aident which isstill vividin mymind now It wasat about9 00on Saturdaymorning June15th when I went outofthe university to visit afriend ofmine at another university I waswalking leisurelyon thesidewalk whenI hearda loudcrash oftwo vehiclesjust atthe crossingabout10meters away Two taxiscrashed together It wasatrafficaident Iwentup andfound thatthe twotaxis werebadly damaged One doorofacar wasknocked offand lyingon theroad One driverwas bleedingand anotherwas shutinthe taxi Some peoplewere tryingto helpthe driverget outofthedamaged car One manwas callingthe trafficpoliceman station A lotof carswere jammedon theroad From thestopping trackon theroad it isclear thatthe twotaxis weredriving toofast But it is justone ofthe reasons In myopinion thetaxi drivers areeager to take morepassengers andmake a little moremoney On theother hand both driversdon t showconcern forone another Both ofthem wantedto runin frontof another Therefore the aidentis inevitable So far we shouldlet thedrivers keepit in theirmindthat alittle slower alittlesafer Taking careof others lives meanstaking careof yourown life xx 6真题 英文的outline Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition entitledA BriefIntroduction toa TouristAttraction You shouldwrite atleast120words tothefollowingguidelines Your role a tourguide Youraudience a groupof foreigntourists Yourintroduction shouldinclude 1 some welingwords2 the schedulefor the day3 a descriptionoftheplace thetourists will be visiting e g a scenicspot景点orahistorical site etc You shouldmake theintroduction andthe arrangementsfor theday clearto everybody A BriefIntroduction toa TouristAttraction Dearfriends May I have yourattention please First wele toChina fora visit I amyour tourguide fromChina TravelService andit sa great honorto stayhere withall ofyou fora wholeday Just asthe oldsaying goes It isalways apleasure togreet afriend fromafar I ll domy best to make your tripas pleasantand meaningfulas possible The followingisaschedule oftheday The firstspot we are goingto visit isthe Great Wall the grandestarchitecture inancient China The nextsight tolook aroundistheMing Tombs which isone ofthe bestpreserved tombsfor13emperors inMing Dynastymorethanthree hundredyearsago In theafternoon we willgo for the SummerPalace the royalpark forChinese ancientemperors Currently weare on the waytothe Great Wall Dating backtotheseven centuryB C the GreatWall isconstructed byrespective statesfor strengtheningagainst invasionof neighboringstates By thereasons oflong historyand itslength it beesone ofthe eightwonders inthe world and representsthe highestwisdom andcrafts工艺 From thetop oftheGreatWall we canenjoy amagnificent viewof continuous green treesand bloomingwild flowers It isno doubtthat onesays He whohas neverbeen totheGreatWall isnot a true man Today allofuswillbeatrueman Enjoy yourday please Thank you xx 1真题 Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite ACampaign Speech You shouldwrite atleast120words andbase yourposition onthe outlinegiven inChinese below 1 你认为自己具备了什么条件 能力 性格 爱好等 可以胜 任学生会主席的工作2 如果当选 你将为本校同学做些什么Dear fellowstudents It isagreathonor forme tostand hereto runforthepresident ofthe StudentsUnion I amxx a juniorfrom ChemicalDepartment As forthe positionof presidentofthe students union I thinkthereareseveral aspectsmaking mefeel qualifiedtotakethe job Firstly I havegained a lotofexperience andreceived widepraise frommy classmatesfor myjob asmonitor Secondly I amwarm hearted andalways readyto helpothers quick toreact tothe needsof myclassmates Thirdly I amgood atmunicating andorganizing Moreover Ihavea varietyof hobbies for example playing basketball playing football playing tabletennis etc Iamsure that Iamqualified forthis position If Ibee thepresident I wi