河南省郑州市2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（8）

1 郑州市郑州市 20142014 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 高考英语短文改错 书面表达一轮训练 8 8 附参考范文 附参考范文 浙江卷 短文改错 共 10 题 每小题 1 分 满分 10 分 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误 请再有错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单词 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写上该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写上修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 例如 It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you Luckily the I was completely tree then so I ll to say yes I ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 00 p m am in Friday evening on I was playing at my cousin house Since his family was rich than mine he had more toys than I did There was one on particular I d always wanted I put into my pocket when he wasn t looking I guessed even at that age I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again I would always know I d done something wrong Late on my aunt drove me home When she dropped me off I pulled out the toy slow and gave It back She knows what had happened but she thanked me and ever mentioned it 2 again 结束 2012 武汉供题三 请根据以下提示 用英语写一篇短文 Should a city try to preserve its old historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 注意 无须写标题 除诗歌外 文体不限 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称 词数为 120 左右 3 参考范文 One possible version Some people believe that a city should destroy its old historic buildings and replace them with modern ones Others me included have an opposite opinion that a city should try to preserve its old historic buildings The reasons are as follows First of all historic buildings are symbols of cities Without these historic buildings a lot of cities would lose their cultural image or even their identity Besides historic buildings benefit the tourism industry Moreover historic buildings serve as an important resource for historical education For instance the Forbidden City is one of the most visited historic buildings in China Not only are people impressed by its traditional architecture but they also gain rich knowledge about the lifestyles of ancient Chinese emperors in the Ming and Tsing Dynasties In conclusion preserving these buildings is definitely necessary 结束 短文改错 Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours It can cause lots of trouble First people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam Second wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents Also traffic jam cause serious air pollution But it is necessary to deal with this problem In my opinion the government should develop public transport It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable Besides we should use public transport as much as possibly It s better to share cars during rush hours In a word we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars 参考答案 4 Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours It can cause lots of trouble First people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam Second wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents Also traffic jam cause serious air pollution But it is necessary to deal with this problem 结束 2 2 2525 min min 2012 师大附中月考 请你简要概述图中所述新闻事件 并针对路人的反应发表自己的 看法 如果你是在场的路人之一 你会怎么做 a cities theiris easily causesSo waiting 5 参考范文 OneOne possiblepossible versionversion Since 13th Oct 2011 China has been captivated by the distressing case of two year old girl Xiao Yueyue who was coldly ignored by passers by as she lay bleeding in the street after being struck by a delivery van Video shared widely across social media documented the incident in horrifying detail including at least 18 people walking past Xiao Yueyue s body without so much as a glance In my eyes those 18 people have shamed the whole of China Owing to the new complexities of Chinese social life people had lost their reverence for life and felt indifferent or even cold about life or death Any one of us might become the passer by at the side of Xiao Yueyue If I were one of them I would stop move her out of the center of the road or extend a hand of comfort carrying her away from danger Everybody should examine his own conscience if we were in the same situation next time how could we help ourselves Only by lifting a hand to help others we save ourselves 结束 你班李明和王英同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法 请描述下列各图 适当增加细节使文 章连贯 并谈谈你的看法 6 Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three They both work hard but they have different learning methods 参考范文参考范文 Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three They both work hard but they have different learning methods Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher As a result he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his home work So he has to stay up late and doesn t get enough sleep However Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class Because of this she spends less time doing her homework which makes it posible for her to go to bed early In my opinion Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself so I prefer her learning method 典型题 结束 高考英语书面表达指导高考英语书面表达指导 书面表达写作指导书面表达写作指导 书面表达是综合性强 难度大的题目 但是 当我们深入研究后就不难发现 书面表达实 质上就是组词成句 联句成篇的一项系统工程 只要我们抓好词 句 段这三个环节 加强 缩写 改写 仿写等练习 由简到繁 由易到难 一环扣一环地进行训练 由模仿到活用 由操 练到交际 就能使语言知识逐步转化成语言交际能力 一 选词 词是语言的最小组成单位 不同词性的词组合在一起构成句子 因此 要充分利用课文中 出现的重点单词 词组 句型 培养学生学习和识记单词的能力 1 注意一词多义的应用 如 time 一词 在 Times have changed 中指 时代 在 six times the size of mine 中指 倍数 在 in slow time 中指 拍子 切忌在写文章下笔 时 一词滥用 似是而非 2 结合英语构词法 同义反义比较 名词的可数与不可数词义的区别 加强对英语词形变 化的理解 扩充词汇量 3 巧用过渡词 增强文章逻辑性 为了使所写短文通顺 连贯得体 句子与句子之间过渡 自然 提高所写短文的质量 适当加上一些表示时间顺序 递进 因果 条件 让步等关系的 过渡词是很有必要的 常见的过渡词有 1 表时间顺序的过渡词 first second third and then finally before after a few 7 days at last at that time later in the past immediately in the meanwhile 等等 2 表空间顺序的过渡词 near to far from in the front of beside behind beyond above below to the right to the left on one side on the other side of outside 等等 3 表并列的过渡词 also and then too as well as 等等 4 表转折的过渡词 but yet however in spite of otherwise 等等 5 表递进的过渡词 what s more besides what s worse in addition furthermore moreover again 等等 6 表目的的过渡词 for this reason for this purpose so that in order that so as to in order to 等等 7 表因果的过渡词 because since so as a result therefore thus as 等等 8 表解释说明的过渡词 for example in fact in this case for actually 等等 9 表条件的过渡词 as long as so long as on condition that if unless 等等 10 表让步的过渡词 though as even if though who what when where ever 等等 11 表总结的过渡词 in brief as has been stated in a word 等等 12 过渡性插入语 I think I m afraid you know as we all know 等等 二 造句 句子是表达一个较完整意思的最小单位 所以遣词造句的能力在英语写作中是非常重要 的 是书面表达成败的关键 因此 加强造句训练就显得尤其重要 1 连词成句 这是最基本的一种训练形式 如 1 father for you new will buy says a bike 可连成 Father says I will buy a new bike for you 2 me all right write and tell this will be please whether 可连成 Please write and tell me whether this will be all right 2 充分利用教材中特有的句型 句式 语法造句 1 句型 句式可使句子表达简洁 准确 提高文章档次 It s adj for sb to do sth 对某人来讲 做某事是 如 It s difficult for a child to do the job without help It s no good use doing sth 做某事没好处 用处 It s no use giving him any more money It is has been 时间 since 自从 好长时间了 It is has been 5 years since he joined the army It s not long before 不久 It will not be long before be comes back It is was who that 强调句型 It was yesterday that we visited the factory It seems that 好像 It seems that she is happy She seems happy I don t think believe expect that 我认为 不 I don t think I know you Will you please 请 好吗 Will you please help me 8 Would you like sth to do sth 做 好吗 Would you like to have a cup of tea 2 用主从复合句 分词作状语 with 复合结构等用法 可使语言描绘更加生动 增强文 章的情感性和感召力 如 What is more it will become necessary to build gates and walls which will do harm to the appearance of a city NMET 2002 书面表达参考答案片段 I don t know about others but I used to work even at weekends doing endless homework and at tending Classes as well NMET 2001 书面表达参考答案片段 It s a small flat of 25 square meters with a bedroom a bathroom and a kitchen NMET 2003 书面表达参考答案片段 How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well NMET 1998 书面 表达参考答案片段 3 用句型替换练习增强语言的灵活性 拓宽表达空间 如 这孩子太小 还不到上学的年龄 The boy is too young to go to school The boy is so young that he can t go to school The boy is not old enough to go to school 我花了 5 元钱买这本书 I spent five yuan on the book I spent five yuan in buying the book I paid five yuan for the book I bought the book for five yuan The book cost me five yuan 例句赏析例句赏析 下面是一些常用的精美句子 请注意它们在表达方面的特点 1 You go down the street turn to the right and then you ll see the post office on your right 析析 几个动词的并列 你顺着这条街 向右拐 右边就是邮局 2 We arrived at the gate of the school where we were warmly welcomed 析析 关系副词 where 引导的定语从句 我们来到了校门口 受到了热烈欢迎 3 Although we were a little tired we were excited 析析 although 引导的让步状语从句 尽管我们有点累 我们仍然很高兴 4 The old lady was crossing the streets when a young man riding a bicycle rushed up and knocked her down 析析 when 表 此刻 那时 老妇人正穿过马路 这时突然一个年轻人骑着自行车冲过来 把她撞倒了 5 She is a friend to her students as well as a teacher 析析 as well as 表 不但 而且 她不但是学生的老师 而且是他们的朋友 6 The library is quiet and there are a lot of books for us to refer to which 9 is helpful to our study 析析 which 引导的非限制性定语从句 图书馆里很安静 有很多书供我们参考 这些书对我们的学习很有帮助 7 The living conditions have been improved greatly and the town is no longer what it used to be 析析 现在完成时的被动语态 生活条件大大提高 城镇不再是原来的样子 8 Every time I think of what happened to me a year ago I feel I was to blame 析析 every time 引导的时间状语从句 每次我想到一年前发生的事 我就感到我应受到责备 9 They were not only strict in our studies but also strict with us 析析 not only but also 表 不但 而且 他们不但对我们的学习严格要求 而且对我们也很严格 10 Great changes have taken place in Qingdao in the recent years 析析 现在完成时的被动语态 在最近的几年中 青岛发生了巨大的变化 11 Only when we know well both scientific knowledge and practical skills can we live happily and work wonderfully in the society in the coming future 析析 only 引导的倒装结构 只有我们掌握了更多的科学知识和实际技能 我们才能在未来的社会中生活幸福 工作顺 利 12 The more I earned the more difficulties I met with 析析 the more the more 表 越多 越 我学的越多 遇到的困难也越多 13 But the burden of work in class is so heavy that we have little time to do sports which has left many of us in poor health 析析 so that 引导的结果状语从句 但是 课业负担太重以至于我们几乎没有时间进行体育锻炼 这使我们中很多人身体状况 不佳 14 The day we were looking forward to came at last a week s military training began 析析 定语从句的用法 一周的军训最终到来了 我们一直盼望着这一天 15 One day on my way home from school I saw an old woman standing by the roadside with a heavy bag on her back 析析 with 复合结构的用法 一天 我在放学回家的路上 看见一位老太太站在路边 背上挂着一个沉重的包裹 16 On the blackboard were large Chinese characters and English saying Welcome to our school 析析 倒装结构 在黑板上 用很大的汉语和英语写着 欢迎来我们的学校 17 With great curiosity and excitement we students of Senior 2 began our learning from peasant activities in Jiangjia Village Bin Cheng Township not far 10 from Beijing 析析 with 复合结构的用法 带着兴奋与好奇 我们高二学生去了离北京不远的滨城镇姜家村开展向农民学习的活动 18 She is such an excellent teacher that we got so much from her not only the knowledge but also kindness diligence and appreciation for beauty 析析 so that 及 not only but also 的用法 她是一位优秀的教师 我们从她身上不仅学到了知识还学到了善良 勤奋和对美的鉴赏 力 19 Our English teacher Mrs Zhang is an ordinary looking grey haired woman wearing a pair of glasses 析析 wearing 现在分词作定语 我们的英语老师张老师相貌平常 灰白头发 戴着一副眼镜 20 I am living with my parents at No 68 Jingqi Road and I am a student of Senior 2 at Jinan No 1 middle school 析析 家庭住址的表示方法 我同我的父母住在经七路 68 号 是济南市一中高二年级的学生 21 Dong Hai is a newly built city with a population of about three million which covers an area of about 20 000 square kilometers facing the Yellow Sea in the east 析析 which 引导的非限制性定语从句 东海市是一座新建城市 有人口近 300 万 面积 2 万余平方千米 东部面向黄海 22 After he graduated from Beijing Engineering College in 1986