中考英语作文复习(精编完整版)

1 中考专题 写作中考专题 写作 1 评分标准评分标准 以以 2011 年中考作文为例年中考作文为例 2 历届中考作文题汇总 历届中考作文题汇总 03 10 3 作文评析作文评析 4 作文题预测作文题预测 5 自制模板 素材分类 积累好词好句好观点自制模板 素材分类 积累好词好句好观点 6 常见作文题汇总常见作文题汇总 1 评分标准评分标准 一 一 要求 要求 初中毕业生要求能够对人物 事物 事件和场所等作简单的描述和议论 因此 英语写话不仅要求单 词拼写正确 用词得当 句子符号语法规范 而且要求句与句之间逻辑连贯 主题突出 英语评分标准由三部分组成 内容 7 分 语言 8 分 组织结构 3 分 其中 内容评分采用 踩点 法 也 就是说你所写的内容涉及到问题或提示的内容 就可获得内容分 反之 则可能偏题 离题 语言方面要求句式规范 表达准确 脉络清晰 如果整个语篇语言通顺 意思连贯 逻辑性强 又有几个好词好句 就可以得高分 二 二 示例 示例 2011 年中考作文评分 2011 Writing 作文共 作文共18分 分 Write at least 60 words about the topic I m a member of 以 我是 的一员 为题 写一篇不少于60字的短文 标点符号不占格 提示 你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团的一员 或者作为家庭 班级 社区的一员 写出你的经历 感受等 Use the following points as reference Are you glad to be a member of What do you do in it How do you feel as such a member 1 简要分析 简要分析 作文标题为 I m a member of 这样的考题让每个考生都有话可说 题目包含5张图片提示 分别代表家庭 歌舞俱乐部 爱护动物者社团 自然科学竞赛社团 题目中蕴含 责任意识和公民意识 的两纲内容 与 往年的考题以强调自我感受居多 不同 今年考题引导学生思考我可以为他人 为集体付出些什么 在写作过程中一定要注意提示 一定要表达具体是什么的成员 根据几个 guided questions 最好能在开头表达是否开心加入此 团体 后面紧接着描述原因即在作为一员主要工作是什么 最后再来一个作为成员的感受作为总结 这样整个作文的结构就清楚了 但 想获得很高分 还要尽量避免语法拼写等错误 写出一些比较出彩的复合句 这就需要同学平时勤练基本功了 2 写话评分标准 写话评分标准 仅供参考 作文共18分 其中内容内容7分 语言语言8分 组织结构组织结构3分 1 内容内容 本项扣分总和不得超过7分 7分 内容切题 意思连贯 表达清楚 完整 4 6分 内容基本切题 意思大致连贯 表达基本清楚 但不够完整 2 3分 内容不够切题 意思不够连贯 表达不够清楚 离题目要求较远 2 0 1分 文不对题 表达不清 2 语言语言 本项扣分总和不得超过8分 拼写拼写每错扣0 5分 同一错误不重复扣分 语法语法扣分标准同 1 标点符号 大小写标点符号 大小写错误每2处扣0 5分 但整卷此项错误的扣分总和不得超过1分 3 词数词数 词数不足30个者 给分以8分为限 词数不足40个者 给分以11分为限 词数不足50个者 给分以14分为限 以上3点应结合内容和语言各项综合考虑 词数在50 59个之间者 每少5个扣0 5分 只写出个别单词 词不成句者 则给0分 4 组织结构 组织结构 本项分四档给分 3 2 1 0 具体描述具体描述 供参考 内容和语言内容和语言两项总分达14 15分者 内容充实 不写废话 主题突出 上下文连贯 用语规范 表达准确 无或少见语法错误 词汇 句型和句式运用恰当 多见好句型和习惯表达用语者 可给足3分 上述各项总体表现略逊色者可给2分 内容内容和语言语言两项总分在12 13分者 若文中确有好句型或表达用语 可给1分 内容内容和语言语言两项总分在11分及以下者 或通篇句型 句式单一 词汇贫乏者 即使无语言错误 亦不给分 3 写作步骤 写作步骤 1 列提纲 列提纲包括 1 审题 确定文章的体裁和篇章结构 先后顺序以及侧重点 总 分 总 分 总 2 选材 选择最能说明主题且自己有话可说的材料 忌眼高手低选择深奥 偏僻 复杂的材料 3 选写作方法 如举例 因果 并列 递进 正反对比 对照 时序等 2 根据提纲写作 注意选词和句型 过渡句 衔接词 3 检查 查词汇 查句型 查要点 查文采 查拼写 训练方法 训练方法 1 遣词 在正确的基础上选择具体的 高级的词汇 2 造句 使用正确的 熟练的句型 恰当使用复杂句 能恰当表意的习语 谚语 使用连接词增加文章的逻辑性和 条理性 3 布局谋篇 主题句简洁明了 中间句丰富多彩 结束句首位呼应 提升主题 2 历届中考作文题汇总历届中考作文题汇总 03 To Be a Lovely Shanghainese 做可爱的上海人做可爱的上海人 Suggested questions Why should we be lovely Shanghainese What should or shouldn t a lovely Shanghainese do What are you doing to be a lovely Shanghainese 04 Write at least 60 words on the topic Leaving School 以 毕业时分 为题写话 词数不少于 60 个 标点符号 不占格 所给要点仅供参考 Suggested points old school life 3 teacher s and schoolmate s future plan 05 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic Growing pains and gains The picture below are for your reference only 以以 成长的烦恼与快乐成长的烦恼与快乐 为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文 标点符号不占格 以下图片仅供参考 个词的短文 标点符号不占格 以下图片仅供参考 06 共共 14 分分 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic I Have a Dream 以以 我有一个梦想我有一个梦想 为题写一篇为题写一篇 不少于不少于 60 个词的短文 标点符号不占格 个词的短文 标点符号不占格 注意 短文中不得出现考生的姓名 校名及其他相关信息 否则不予评分 注意 短文中不得出现考生的姓名 校名及其他相关信息 否则不予评分 Sentence patterns for reference 以下句型仅供参考 以下句型仅供参考 My dream is to be to do to go I enjoy like prefer To make my dream come true I If my dream comes true 07 Writing 作文作文 共共 16 分分 Write at least 60 words on the topic Things I Hate to Do 以 以 我不喜欢我不喜欢 为为 题写一篇不少于题写一篇不少于 60 词的短文 词的短文 标点符号不占格 标点符号不占格 Use the following points as a guide 短文须包含下列要点 What are the things that you hate to do What do you hate doing most Why Give at least two reasons 08 Writing 作文作文 共共 16 分分 110 Write at least 60 words about the topic Love around me 以以 我身边的爱我身边的爱 为题为题 写一篇不少于写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文 标点符号不占格 个词的短文 标点符号不占格 Use the following points as a guide 短文须包含下列要点 短文须包含下列要点 Is there any love around you How do you feel when you get love from him her them What are you going to do to show your love 09 Writing 作文 共 作文 共 18 分 分 Write at least 60 words about the topic I want to do something for my school 以 以 想为学校做件事想为学校做件事 为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文 标点符号不占格 个词的短文 标点符号不占格 注意 短文中不得出现任何人名 校名及其他相关信息 否则不予评分 Use the following points as a reference 以下内容仅供参考 以下内容仅供参考 What do you want to do for your school Why do you want to do it How are you going to do it 10 Writing 作文 共 作文 共 18 分 分 99 Write at least 60 words about the topic I m proud of myself 以 以 我为自己感到自豪我为自己感到自豪 为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于 60 个词个词 的短文 标点符号不占格 的短文 标点符号不占格 注意 短文中不得出现任何人名 校名及其他相关信息 否则不予评分 Use the following points as a reference 以下内容仅供参考 What kind of person are you What makes you proud of youself Given an example examples Why are you proud of yourself 4 3 作文评析 作文评析 My Favourite Things Of all my possessions a walkman is my favourite thing My father bought it for me as my birthday present last year Since then it has always been with me At home when I wake up I turn it on to listen to English tapes to learn English Thanks to it I have always got good marks in English After finishing my homework in the evening before going to bed I always listen to some light music On my way to school I take it with me on the bus and listen to English or songs I have got a lot of pleasure from it I like it very much And I will never drop it How to be happy every day It is important for every one to be happy every day If you are happy every day you can enjoy yourself all the time But how to be happy every day In my opinion one should not be so greedy and ask for too much Never make yourself work without resting Be sure to relax yourself if you feel tired And never be too hard on yourself Learn to smile and face your life in a healthy way And something more never be sad when you are in trouble What is beauty in your mind Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good looking They are not satisfied with their appearance They spend much money taking a kind of operation Can beauty really be man made If so everybody can get beauty As a result there is no beauty at all Many heroes don t have beautiful surface However their beautiful images often come to our minds Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society Don t be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking but with a broad and kind heart Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important As an old saying goes Virtue is fairer than beauty If you have a kind heart you own real beauty Things I hate to do 07 中考 中考 I like going on net going fishing watching a football match and so on But still there are many things I hate to do in my life I hate to go shopping with my mother She always asks me to go shopping with her At the supermarket she always purchases a lot of things for me which I don t need at all It s a waste of money And I hate to go to the bookstores with my father at weekends He always says to me You should not only read these books but also go into those books As a matter of fact I don t like reading these books or those ones I just want to read my own favourite books I am looking forward to being myself in my life English is important There are millions of people learning English in the world They think it important to learn English well It s true that English is very important in our daily life English is widely used all over the world English hasbecome an international language It is used in many international conferences And something more if you know English well you can travel around the world without being understood And Most valuable books newspapers and magazines are written in English If you want to get more information from these books you musrt learn English well Learn English is of great importance A good command of English depends on a lot of practice Let s come on Learn English use English and Enjoy your English Learn to smile 1 If you wan to be happy every day you should learn to smile First when you are successful in doing something you can be happy and smile a lot to show that you are very pleased with yourself Second never be sad when you are in trouble Be sure of yourself and you can overcome the difficulties Third if you can share something with others you will be sure to smile in 5 your heart So be sure to know the importance of smiling in our life Let s learn to smile and enjoy our life Learn to smile 2 Smile is an attitude to life It can make your life full of sunshine In our life there may be something unpleasant For example when you fail in an exam or another time you are miss understood by your friends they make you feel bad Then what will you do Why not learn to smile Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence Sometimes the biggest enemy is yourself That is to say sometimes you are beaten by yourself We should also learn to smile to others It will help us to get close to others So smile to others and to yourself can make the whole world warm and happy 4 4 作文题预测作文题预测 1 环境保护篇环境保护篇 Low carbon lifestyle We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life First we d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet Saving water also matters much Besides we should sort out the rubbish hoping that we might recycle some which will surely benefit us a great deal In addition we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down More importantly when we go out walking riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice which contributes to a cleaner world 2 网络科技篇 手机 电脑等 网络科技篇 手机 电脑等 1 随着互联网的发展和普及 网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了 甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了 相 信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了 比如 网 京东商城等 但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢 请写一篇短文 谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处 参考范文 We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days Some students think it s very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet The shops on Internet for example are open for almost 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if we like What s more we needn t wait in a queue However some students disagreed with them We can t see the things while we are shopping So we are not sure whether they are good or not Besides we can t enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends 2 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见 请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文 介绍人们的不同观点 并表 达自己的看法 赞成的理由 1 广交朋友 2 可自由表达思想 3 有利于外语学习 反对的理由 1 浪费时间 2 影响学习 3 可能上当 受骗 你的看法是 注 字数 100 120 之间 书写不整齐者 酌情扣分 参考范文 Should students make friends on line Some people say yes Internet helps people make many friends Chatting on line students can express more freely their feelings and opinions and even get help for their foreign language studies Others however think students should not They say making friends on line is a waste of time which should be spent more meaningfully on study Besides some students get cheated on line It is my opinion that students should place their study health and safety before other things As for friendship we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us 3 据报道 从 2011 年开始韩国除了向所有小学和初高中学生发放纸质的语文 英语 数学教科书之外 同时还 6 将发放光盘形式的电子教科书 这表明 在韩国 电子图书即将走进寻常百姓家 某英文论坛发起了一次主题为 E Books Good or Bad 的讨论 请你写一篇 80 词左右的短文 表达你对这件事情的看法 参考范文 E Books Are Good It s reported that school students in Korea will use e books from 2011 What good news this is E books have many advantages Most importantly they are good for the environment since they can save lots of paper and trees Besides they are very convenient To get a paper book one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop But we can find e books very quickly on the computer In short e books can help us enjoy our life more 3 情绪 健康篇情绪 健康篇 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力 为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题 你们班特意开展了一 次以 Less Pressure Better Life 为主题的英语演讲比赛 请你准备发言稿 谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法 与同学分享 内容包括 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么 我的压力是什么 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的 注意 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名 词数 80 100 短文的开头已给出 不计入总词数 Less Pressure Better Life Hello boys and girls Pressure is a serious problem in today s world Students in our class are under too much pressure That s all Thank you 参考范文 Less Pressure Better Life Hello boys and girls Pressure is a serious problem in today s world Students in our class are under too much pressure Some students can t get on well with their classmates while others may worry about their exams I m always under pressure too My parents want me to be the top student in class So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends Last Monday evening I had a talk with my mother I told her I was not lazy I really felt tired I needed time to relax My mother agreed with me at last So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem That s all Thank you 4 旅游 运动 节假篇旅游 运动 节假篇 5 叙事篇 最难忘的 高兴的 尴尬的 自豪的事叙事篇 最难忘的 高兴的 尴尬的 自豪的事 6 人物篇 最人物篇 最 的人 老师 朋友 尊敬的 崇拜的 难忘的 伟大的 的人 老师 朋友 尊敬的 崇拜的 难忘的 伟大的 名言佳句 名言佳句 1 A journey of a thousand miles begins with single step 千里之行 始于足下 2 Honesty is the best policy 诚实才是上策 3 Money doesn t grow on trees 钱不是从天上掉下来的 4 I know that my future is not just a dream 我知道我的未来不是梦 5 Youth means limitless possibilities 年轻就是无限的可能 7 6 Leave behind a clean world for future generations 留给下一代一个清洁的地球 7 You can do it too 你也做得到 8 Never say die 永不放弃 9 Knowledge is power 知识就是力量 10 Never too old to learn 活到老 学到老 11 Practice makes perfect 熟能生巧 12 Go for it Just do it 加油 向前冲 做了再说 13 No pain no gain 天下事没有不劳而获的东西 14 Time is money 时间就是金钱 15 Man can conquer nature 人定胜天 16 Better late than never 只要开始 虽晚不迟 17 If a thing is worth doing it is worth doing well 如果事情值得做 就值得做好 18 Actions speak louder than words 行动胜于言辞 19 All roads lead to Rome 条条大路通罗马 20 Easier said than done 说比做容易 21 East or west home is best 管他东方或西方 家是最好的地方 22 Easy come easy go 来得容易 去得也容易 23 Every man is his own worst enemy 一个人最大的敌人就是他自己 24 A friend in need is a friend indeed 患难之交才是真正的朋友 25 Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today 勿将今事待明日 26 A fall into a pit a gain in your wit 吃一堑 长一智 27 A fox may grow gray but never good 江山易改 本性难移 28 A friend is easier lost than found 得朋友难 失朋友易 29 A friend without faults will never be found 没有十全十美的朋友 30 A good beginning is half done 良好的开端是成功的一半 31 A good book is a good friend 好书如挚友 32 A good fame is better than a good face 美名胜过美貌 33 A good medicine tastes bitter 良药苦口 34 A little knowledge is a dangerous thing 一知半解 自欺欺人 35 All things are difficult before they are easy 凡事总是由难而易 36 All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy 只会用功不玩耍 聪明孩子也变傻 37 A man becomes learned by asking questions 不耻下问才能有学问 38 An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening 一日之计在於晨 39 A year s plan starts with spring 一年之计在於春 五 我的模板五 我的模板 好词 好句 好观点 开头 结尾 习语 谚语 连接词等 好的文章结构也可以提纲形式列出 六 常见作文题汇总 六 常见作文题汇总 1 1 What s a nice holiday like Do you often have a nice holiday What kind of holiday is nice Give at least 2 reasons and 1 example What can you do to make your holiday better 8 1 2 My weekend What do you think of your weekend Use at least two adjectives 形容词 to describe your weekend Tell your reasons show at least two main activities you often do 1 3 that day we 2 1 A present for What kind of present is it Who are you going to give this present to Why do you want to give him or her this present give one or two reasons 2 2 A special gift to What is your special gift Who will you give it to Why do you want to gibe him her the present 3 brings me happiness What brings you happiness Why do you think it brings you happiness give at least two examples What have you learnt from it 4 The best I know What is it who is the person What makes you think it he she is the best 5 1 Everybody needs help Do you agree that everybody needs help Have you ever got help from others tell your experiences What do you do when other people are in trouble give examples 5 2 Helping others makes me Do you often help others How do you help others give an examples Why do you offer your help 5 3 everyone needs help Did you get any help from others before Did you give any help to people when they needed Tell your story 5 4 Giving is Receiving 付出即是收获 6 is more important a way to learn the world Some people think that reading is more important than travelling in order to understand the people and the world Others think that travelling is more important What s your opinion 9 What is more important a way to learn the world reading or travelling Why do you think it s more important give at least two reasons What can you learn through reading travelling 7 1 The ways I deal with my problem s in study What problems do you have in study How do you deal with the problems What can you learn from your experience of dealing with the problems 7 2 I turn to when I am in trouble What is was your trouble Who helps helped you when you are were in trouble Why do did you turn to give two reasons 8 My life as a Junior Three Student What is your life like as a junior three student Do you enjoy your life now Why 9 1 he she and I Who is she or he What do you think of him her What happened between you And what was the result 9 2 I never forget him her Who do you never forget Why do you never forget him her What does he she look like What is he she like What are your hopes for him her for the future 9 3 guess who he she is What does he she look like What kind of student is he she give examples What would you like to say to him her 9 4 three adjectives about myself 10 1 What do you think of owning a private car What is the advantage of owning a private car What is the disadvantage of owning a private car What is your opinion 10 2 How to solve the problem of heavy traffic 10 11 1 has helped me to learn a lot What has helped you to learn a lot When did you first take it up How did it help you Give some examples 11 2 On my way to What did you want to do on that day What happened on the way What is your impression 12 A suggestion to my teacher Whom are you going to give the suggestion to How do you like this subject or your teacher And your reasons What is your suggestion And tell your teacher your reasons would you show two reasons What results will you expect to get from your suggestion 13 My views on using the Internet What are your views on using the Internet Why do you think so give at least two reasons What are your suggestions to using the Internet properly 14 Face life with a smile How do you usually face life Do you usually face it with a smile Especially when should you smile to face life give at least two examples Why 15 set a good exampl