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精品精品 热点高分范文热点高分范文 1 Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition on the topicTravel Aloneor Travelwith aCompanion You shouldwrite atleast120words and baseyour position on the outline given in Chinese below 1 有的人喜欢独自旅行 有的人喜欢与别人结伴而 行2 两种旅行方式的好处3 你更喜欢哪种旅行方式 为什么 Travel Aloneor Travelwith aCompanion 行文思路本题属于提 纲式文字命题 提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式 提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种 旅行方式的好处 提纲第3点要求表明 我 的倾向 由此可判断本 文应为对比选择型作文 根据所给提纲 本文应包含如下内容指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏 好有人喜欢独自旅行 有人喜欢结伴旅行 对比阐述旅行各自的好处 表明 我 更喜欢于哪种旅行方式 并说明理由 高分范文Travel Aloneor Travelwith aCompanion 1 When it es to traveling way different peoplewill offerdifferent opinions 2 Some peoplelike totravel alone 2 while othersprefer totravel with a panion 3 Of course everyone hashis considerationfor hispreference 4 Traveling enjoymore freedom The travelercan arrangehis touras hewishes withoutthe troubleof humoringothers 3 Moreover traveling alone 5 tend tobring thetraveler 6 unexpected surprise 7 such asmaking anew friendand enjoyinga differentscenery 8 Compared withtraveling alone traveling witha panionhas also its advantages 3 For ohing the groupmembers canhelp andlook aftereach otherin the journey 3 For another 4 traveling with others whohave sameinterest with you canshare costsand experienceswith them 9 As tome I prefertotravelwitha panion 3 Firstly we candeal with the possibleproblems anddifficulties in thejourney 3 Secondly I like to share the pleasureof traveling withothers 3 In sum 10 both traveling alone andtraveling witha panionhave theirattractions and youcan findthe pleasurefrom eitherone 亮点点评 1 当涉及到或谈到 时 2 用于提出两种不同的观点 态度或喜好 3 过渡衔接理清晰 衔接紧密 4 现在分词短语作伴随状语 5 倾向 趋于 6 意外的惊喜 7 表示列举 8 和 相比 9 用于引出自己的观点或选择 10 或者 或者 佳句临摩1 佳句When ites totraveling way different peoplewill offerdifferent opinions 临摩当谈到是否应该取消 黄金周 假期时 人们的看法 各不相同 2 佳句Compa red withtravelingalone traveling witha panionhas alsoits advantages 临摩和城市相比 乡村的经济相对落后 3 3 佳句Both travelingalone andtravelingwithapanionhave theirattractions and youcan findthe pleasurefrom eitherone 临摩网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点 因此 我 们应该将二者相结合 KEY 1 W hen ites towhether we should cancelthe golden week holiday different peoplewill offerdifferent opinions 2 Compared thecountryside isrelatively backwardin economy 3 Both workteaching andtraditional schoolteaching havetheir advantages Therefore we shouldbine thesetwo teachingways 2 Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition on the topicThe MoonlightClan You shouldwrite atleast120words and baseyour position on theoutline given inChinese below 1 现在很多年轻人每个月都把自己赚的钱花光 他们被称作 月光族 2 有人认为这是一种时尚的消费观念 但很 多人反对这样消费3 我对此的看法是 The MoonlightClan行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题 提纲第1点指出一种现象 提纲第2点针对该现象提出两种不同的观 点 提纲第3点要求谈谈 我 的看法 由此可判断本文应为对比选 择型作文 根据所给提纲 本文应包含如下内容描述 月光族 现象 引出对 这一现象的不同看法 对比阐述两种看法各自的理由 表明 我 对 月光族 的看法并说明理由 高分范文The MoonlightClan Nowadays more andmore people 1 especially theyoung arejoining in the armyof the moonlightclan These peopleexhaust theirearnings everymonth withoutany savings 2 Many peoplethink thisis afashionable lifestyle 2 while more other peopleobject to this kindof consumptionstyle 3 Those whosupport the moonlightclan think thatthose peopleknow howto enjoylife andhave ahigher lifequality 3 However moreother people criticize the moonlightclan They saythat theconsumption habitof the moonlightclan is unhealthyand sometimeswasteful In addition no savingswill 4 place the moonlightclan in adifficult position 5 in caseof unexpectedexpenses 6 Weighing thesetwo arguments I preferto thelatter one In myeyes 7 though the moonlightclan may acquiretemporary satisfactionfrom their consumption 8 in thelong term it 9 is unfavorableto theirfamily andcareer 10 Just asa proverbsays one shouldalways preparefor arainy day 亮点点评 1 尤其 特别 2 用于提出两种对立观点 3 用于引自的理由 4 使 处于艰难的境地 5 以防 万一 6 用于表明 我 的倾向 7 though引导让步状语从句 8 从长远来看 9 对 不利 10 引用谚语结尾 值得借鉴 佳句临摩1 佳句Many peoplethink thisis afashionable lifestyle while moreotherpeopleobject tothis kindof consumptionstyle 临摩勇敢的人往往会获得更多的机会 而懦弱的 人面对机会也有可能错过 2 佳句Those whosupport the moonlightclan think thatthose peopleknow howto enjoylife andhave ahigher lifequality 临摩持悲观态度的那些人认为地球上有限的能源很快 就会枯竭 3 佳句Just asa proverbsays o one shouldalways preparefor arainy day 临摩正如一句谚语所说的 机会只给那些有准备的人 KEY 1 Bra ve peopletend to get whiletimid onesmay missthem whenchances e 2 Those whohold pessimisticattitudes thinkthat limitedenergy onearth willbe exhaustedsoon 3 Just asa proverbsays Opportunities areonly for the preparedminds 3 Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition on the topicA FoodPoisoning Aident You shouldwrite atleast120words and baseyour position on theoutline given inChinese below 你的几个同学因食用了从某超市买回的食品而中 毒 幸亏及时治疗而脱险 请描述他 们 中毒与脱险的过程 并呼吁要加强食品安全 A FoodPoisoning Aident 行文思路本题属于情景式 命题 提纲要求描述一件事情的经过 由此可判断本文应为记叙文 根据所给提纲 本文应包含如下内容交待食物中毒的背景和原因 叙 述中毒的和脱险的经过 谈谈由此引发的感想 呼吁加强食品安全 高分范文A FoodPoisoning AidentLast month I 1 witnessed afood poisoningaident 2 happening tomy classmates At thattime thesituation wasreally verydangerous andurgent Though finallythey gotout ofdanger this aident 3 is still vivid in my mind That daywas Julie s birthday one ofmy classmates In order to celebrateit her roommatesbought abig birthdaycake forher froma supermarketnearby They sharedthe cakehappily 4 However after awhile all of them feltabdominal pain nausea anddizziness Two of them evencannot standup becauseof greatpain We 5 rushed tosend themto thehospital 6 It turnedout thatthe cakethey atehad expiredits guaranteeperiod Futunately 7 due totimely treatment they allrecovered verysoon 4 However this aident 8 leaves mea deepponder I thinkit is very urgentto takeeffective measuresto improvefood safety 4 Firstly the governmentshould 9 strengthen supervisionand administrationon food safety 4 More importantly to thosewho immoralbusinessmen more strictpunishment should be given 4 Besides we consumersshould be more carefulin buyingfood 10 Only in this waycan wemake surethat nosame aidenthappens 亮点点评 1 目睹 目击 2 发生在某人身上 现在分词短语作定语 3 仍然令我记忆犹新 4 过渡衔接词语 使文章条理清晰 衔接紧密 5 闻讯赶来 6 结果是 原来是 7 由于及时的治疗 8 留给我深深的思考 9 加强监管 10 only 状语 位于句首 引起句子部分倒装 佳句临摩1 佳句Though finallythey gotout ofdanger this aidentis stillvivid inmy mind 临摩尽管这件事情已经过去了很多 但它仍然让我记忆犹新 2 佳句It turnedout thatthe cakethey atehad expiredits guaranteeperiod 临摩结果他没能在红灯前通过那个路口 而和另 外一辆车撞在了一起 3 佳句It isvery urgentto takeeffective measuresto improvefoodsafety 临摩现在的当务之急是帮助大学生就业观 KEY 1 Though thisincident happeneda longtime ago it is stillvividinmymind 2 It turnedout notpass through the crossroadbefore thelight turnedred andcrashed intoanother car 3 It isvery urgentto helpcollege studentsform aright ideaon employment 4 Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition on the topicParental Hopesand PersonalIdeals You shouldwrite atleast120words and baseyour position on theoutline given inChinese below 1 父母都会望子成龙 但是父母的期望有时候会 与他们孩子的理想发生矛盾2 分析这种矛盾产生的原因3 应该如何 解决这一矛盾Parental Hopesand PersonalIdeals 行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题 提纲第1点提出一个问题 提纲第2点要求分析这一问题产生的原因 提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题 由此可判断本文应为问题解 决型作文 根据所给提纲 本文应包含如下内容描述父母的期望和孩子的理想 之间的矛盾 分析这种矛盾产生的主要原因 说明解决这一矛盾的办 法 高分范文Parental Hopesand PersonalIdeals Allparents hopetheir childrenwill havea brightfuture However parents expectations for their childrenare notalways 1 in aordance with their children s personal ideals 2 and sometimesthey areeven conflictingwith eachother This isoften amain causefor quarrelsand gapsbetween parents and children 3 But whatlead to the conflict between parentalhopes andpersonalideals 3 The followingthree factorscontribute to the conflict 4 First ofall inthisfast changing society parents and children have too manydifferences inmind 4 Secondly traditional patriarchyisstillinfluencing Chineseparents in modern society They areused tomaking decisionsfortheir children 4 Third nowadays youngpeople havestrong independence 5 who wantto plantheir ownfuture andcontrol their own destiny 4 Thus the conflictbetweenparents and children inevitablyappear 6 In orderto solvethe conflict both parentsandchildren should paytheir efforts 4 For ohing parents shouldgive their children rightsto maketheir owndecisions They mayhelp their children makechoices 7 instead ofreplacing themto makechoices 4 For another childrenshouldlearn torespect theirparents advices 8 since parentstend tohave morelife experience 4 Besides to municatewith eachother activelyis necessary to theirunderstanding eachother As longas both parentsandchildren learnto think 9 from theother side s point of view the conflictsbetween themcan beavoided 亮点点评 1 和 一致 2 表示递进 3 通过转折和设问句引出原因 容易引起注意 4 过渡衔接词语 使文章条理清晰 衔接紧密 5 who引导非限制性定语从句 6 为了 表示目的 常用于句首 7 代替 而不是 8 since引导原因状语从句 表示既定的原因 常译为 既然 9 从对方的角度 佳句临摩1 佳句Parents expectations fortheirchildrenare notalways inaordancewiththeirchildren s personalideals and sometimesthey areeven conflictingwith eachother 临摩过多的压力使得许多大学生产生抑郁 焦虑等心理 疾病 甚至导致一些大学生自杀 2 佳句Nowadays youngpeople havestrong independence who wantto plantheirownfuture andcontrol theirown destiny 临摩郊区的新鲜空气和美丽风景对那些忍受着空气污染和 噪音的城市居民会有很大的吸引力 3 佳句In orderto solvetheconflict bothparentsandchildrenshould paytheir efforts 临摩为了保持旧的友谊 许多同学每天花费一两个小时给 亲密的老朋友打电话 KEY 1 Overdue pressuremakes manycollege studentssuffer frompsychological diseases like depression anxiety and evenleads to some students suicide 2 The freshair andbeautiful sceneryin thesuburbs willbe appealingtothecity citizens who sufferfrom airpollution andnoises 3 In orderto keepthose many freshmenspend oneor twohours aday callingtheir oldclose friends 5 Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition on the topicDoes aStudent NeedPrivate Tutoring You shouldwrite atleast120words and baseyour positionon theoutline given inChinese below 1 根据调查 目前在全国的大城市中有大约80 的 中学生都有私人家教我要高分2 分析中学生请家教的利弊3 你的看 法Does aStudent NeedPrivate Tutoring 行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命 题 提纲第1点指出一种现象 提纲第2点要求分析这种现象的利弊 提 纲第3点要求谈谈 我 的看应为对比选择型作文 根据所给提纲 本文应包含如下内容描述中学生请家教的现状 分析 中学生请家教的利弊 谈谈 我 对中学生请家教现象的看法 高分范文Does aStudent NeedPrivate Tutoring A recentinvestigation showsthat about70percent ofmiddle schoolstudents incities haveprivate tutors Such apopular practiceindicates that people are 1 attaching greaterimportance toeducation 2 However private tutoring 3 has bothadvantages anddisadvantages Many parentshave noenough abilityor time to helptheirchildrenin study Private tutoringis a good solutiontothisproblem 2 In addition private tutoringis usuallyone to one so theteacher canknow 4 the weakpoints as well as 4 the strongpoints ofthe pupil and thusteaching is 5 in mostcases directly tothe point 2 On theother hand its owndisadvantages 2 For ohing it takesup somuch ofthe pupil s timethat hecan hardly find rest and entertainment 2 For another some tutors 5 busy shuttling from onefamily toanother 6 tend toneglect their teaching dutiesas tutors 7 Considering theabove mentioned I think 3 the disadvantagesof privatetutoring outweighits advantages In myopinion greater emphasisshouldbelaid 8 on classroomteaching andpractice 8 ontheimprovement ofteaching quality 8 and onthe tappingofthe pupil s potential 9 Only inthis waycan anew generationbe healthilybrought up 亮点点评 1 非常关注 2 过渡衔接词语 使文章条理清晰 衔接紧密 3 有利有弊 弊大于利 4 弱点 优点 5 插入语 6 倾向于 往往 7 用于得出结论 considering 考虑到 鉴于 8 and连接的平行结构 9 only 状语 位于句首 引起句子部分倒装 佳句临摩1 佳句Teaching is in mostcases directly tothe point 临摩无论多么困难的一项任务 只要有决心都能够完成 2 佳句It takesup somuch ofthepupil s timethat theycan harhardlyfindrestandentertainment 临摩社会上有如此多的诱惑 以至于稍一疏忽就可能误入歧途 3 佳 句Some tutorstend toneglect theirregular teachingduties 临摩传统食物的烹饪往往很耗时 而且需要花费很 多时间和精力去学习 KEY 1 A task no matterhow difficultit is can beaomplished provided thatone makesup his mind todo it 2 There areso manytemptations inthe societythat witha littlecarelessness wemay goastray 3 The cookingof traditionalfood tendsto betime consuming andtakes much time andenergy tolearn 6 Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite apositiononthe topicSkipping Classeson CollegeCampus You shouldwrite atleast120words and baseyour positionontheoutline given inChinese below 1 大学里逃课现象时有发生2 分析学生逃课的原 因3 如何减少逃课现象Skipping Classeson CollegeCampus行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题 提纲第1点指出一种现象 提纲第2点要求分析该现象产生的原因 提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题 由此可判断本文应为问题解决 型作文 根据所给提纲 本文应包含如下内容描述大学生逃课现象及主要表 现 分析大学生逃课的主要原因 说明应该如何减少逃课现象 高分范文Skipping Classeson CollegeCampus Incolleges anduniversities the phenomenon of studentsskipping classesis notunusual There areoften some students whoskip thoseclasses forfeeling unfortableor otherprivate reasons 1 Besides still some students areabsent inclasses withoutany reasonbut forthey don t wantto 2 There aretwo mainreasons forcollege studentsskip classes 1 First 3 pared within middleschool students havemore freedomin college 4 It depends more onone student s consciousness 4 whether hewill attendthe class So thosestudents lackingself discipline beginto skip classes 1 Second some teachers classes couldnot attract students interests 5 so that somestudents 6 would rather skipclasses to study what they are interested in 7 For whateverreasons skipping classes 8 does bringnegative effectson students study 1 Therefore 9 it isnecessary to take someeffective measuresto reducethis phenomenon 1 On theone hand the schooland teachersshould makestudents realizethe negative effects ofskipping classesand increasetheir consciousnessof attendingthe class 1 On theother hand teachers haveto improvetheirteachingquality toattractstudents interests 10 Only inthis waycan thephenomenonofskipping classesbe reducedas soonas possibly 亮点点评 1 过渡衔接词语 使文章条理清晰 衔接 紧密 2 用于引出原因 3 和 相比 4 it充当形式主语 whether从句是真正的主语 5 so that引导结果状语从句 6 宁愿 7 不管什么原因 8 强调谓语动词 9 用于引出解决办法 10 only 状语 位于句首 引起句子部分倒装 佳句临摩1 佳句It dependsmore onone student s consciousnesswhether hewill attendthe class 临摩在过去 一个学生只要成绩好就行 有没有好的身体不 要紧 2 佳句Some teachers classes couldnot attractstudents interests sothatsomestudents wouldratherskipclassestostudywhattheyareinterestedin 临摩他 们的时间完全被工作占据以至于几乎没有时间和孩子们认真交流 3 佳句For whateverreasons skipping classesdoes bringnegativeeffectson students study 临摩不管学习外语的原因是什么 它都能够使一 个人受益 KEY 1 In thepast whether astudent hada strongbody ornot as longas hegot thetop marks 2 They arefully oupiedby theirwork sothat theyhave littletimetotalk withtheirchildrenseriously 3 To acquireanother language for whateverreasons isveryuseful for a person 7 Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite apositiononthe topicSocial Practiceof CollegeStudents You shouldwrite atleast120words and baseyour positionontheoutline given inChinese below 1 各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践 活动2 这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处3 参加社会实践活动应该 注意些什么Social Practiceof CollegeStudents 行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题 提纲第1点指出一种现象 提纲第2点要求分析这种现象带来的好处 提纲第3点要求指出注意事项 由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作 文 根据所给提纲 本概述大学生社会实践活动及其主要内容 分析社会 实践活动给大学生带来的好处 指出大学生参加社会实践应该注意些 什么 高分范文Social Practiceof CollegeStudents Nowadays many universitiesencourage andorganize studentstotake part in social practice activities During theholidays more andmore studentschoose to 1 be thevolunteers take part time jobs or takepart inother practicalactivities alike It s obviousthat social practice isplaying amore andmore importantrole inChina s college education 2 Undoubtedly college studentshave 3 benefited a lot from social practice 4 Above all they moreopportunities tocontact thereal worldoutside thecampus 4 Moreover in social practiceactivities students can 5 apply theirknowledge tothe solutiontothepractical problems So theirpractical skillsare improvedgreatly 4 Besides social practicehelps 6 strengthen students sense ofsocial responsibility 7 Considering theabove mentioned I think it isnecessary forcollege studentsto participatein socialpractice 4 However socialpracticemay bringsome problems For example somestudentsspend toomuchtimein takingpart time jobsso asto ignoretheir study 4 Therefore 8 balance therelationship betweensocialpracticeand study 亮点点评 1 平行结构 alike意为 类似的 作后置定语 2 毫无疑问 副词使用恰当 3 从 中受益很多 4 过渡衔接词语 使文章条理清晰 衔接紧密 5 把知识运用到解决实际问题中 6 加强社会责任感 7 用于得出结论 considering用作介词 意为 考虑到 鉴于 8 平衡 之间的关系 佳句临摩1 佳句More andmore studentschoose tobe thevolunteers takepart time jobs or takepart inother activitiesalike 临摩参加社交活动 朋友是新生融入大学生活的 有效办法 2 佳句Undoubtedly college studentshave benefiteda lotfromsocialpractice 临摩毫无疑问 阅读经典书籍使人们受益 匪浅 3 佳句Considering theabove mentioned I think it isnecessary forcollege studentsto participateinsocialpractice 临摩鉴于这些情况 义务教育必须 被强制执行 KEY 1 To takepart insocial activities meet newpeople andmake newfriends areeffective waysfor freshmento geton withcollege life 2 There isno doubtthatpeoplehave benefiteda lotfrom readingclassics 3 Considering thesituation it isnecessarytoenforce thepulsory education 8 Directions For thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan You shouldwrite atleast120words followingtheoutlinegiven belowinChinese1 简单介绍个人情况我要高分2 说明申请助学贷款 的原因 数额3 保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心A LetterApplying for a BankLoan行文思路本题属于情景式命题 要求写一封申请信 根据所给提纲 本文应包含如下内容简单介绍自己的情况 表明写 信目的申请助学贷款 说明申请助学贷款的原因 数额 保证合理利 用贷款并表明还款决心 最后表示感谢 高分范文ALetterApplyingforaBankLoan Sep12th xxTo whomit mayconcern I ama freshmanof LianheUniversity 1 majoring inApplied Physics I amwriting inthe hopethat Imay obtaina bank loan tosupport mystudy inApplied Physicsforthefollowing fouryears My parentsare bothlaid off workers soit s 2 beyond theirpower tofinance methroughthe collegeeducation 3 To makematters worse my motherhas suddenlyfallen illand isexpecting amajor operation 4 Therefore 5 withthecollege tuition being a much heavier burden on my family I ampelled toapply aRMB20 000bank loan 6 I giveyou mypromise thatthe loanwould beused properly 4 Meanwhile I ll 7 spare no effort to work hard both inthe study and my future career in orderto pay back the loan I wouldbe greatlyobliged ifmy applicationis granted And I am lookingforward tohearing fromyou soon Sincerely yours Song Xue 亮点点评 1 主修 现在分词作伴随状语 2 超出 的能力范围 3 使事情更糟糕的是 4 过渡衔接词语 使文章条理清晰 衔接紧密 5 with 宾语 宾补 的独立结构 6 我保证 that引导同位语从句 7 不遗余力 佳句临摩1 佳句To makematters worse my motherhas suddenlyfallen illand isexpecting amajor operation 临摩令人更迷惑不解的是 很多飞机都从大海上离奇消 失了 2 佳句Therefore thecollegetuitionbeingamuchheavierburdenonm yfamily Iampelled toapply aRMB20 000bankloan 临摩由于周围交通不便利 人们只得步行回家 3 佳句Meanwhile I ll sparenoefforttoworkhardbothinthestudyandmyfuturecareerinor