英语人教版九年级全册unit14 SectionB 3a-self check.docx

Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7Section B 3a-Self Check Advice on making your articles perfect 教学目标:To help students make their articles perfect 教学重难点:How to make students understand the ways of writing .How to help them beautify their articles .教学过程Step1.Greeting Step2.Presentation 一篇优秀作文必须符合下列条件 1，包含所有要点 2，围绕内容适当发挥(有新意，亮点），内容具体、丰富（不能限于回答问题或逐句翻译）。 3，应用丰富的语言结构和词汇。 4，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚（表达有层次，会用关联词，注意首尾呼应）。 5，没有语言错误（杜绝任何小错）。 Step3 .Teaching Show students the example writing,making them know how to write a better writing .健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。travel work visit friends or parents stay at home1. 审(search):Style (体裁)：_Person(人称)：_Tense (时态): _ 据实描写：适当发挥：2.列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.3.加(add)加首尾，使结构完整，突出主题。4.美（beautify）选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。Step4.Writing skills 方法一:善用词汇Which is better?我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help. 方法二:活用多种句型她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the 方法三:妙用关联词1.表示并列或递进: and, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor2.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,anyway3.表示因果: because,so,therefore,since,as a result 4.表示对比: instead, notbut, while, on one handon the other hand5.表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth6.表示顺序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, finally, in the end, from then on 7.表示强调: besides, especially, actually, in fact8.表示结论:in a word, generally speaking, in shortStudents have a try to fill in the blanks . _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.方法四:妙用Proverb（谚语）/saying 加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。 Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.3.Where there is a will, there is a way.4.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.5.Failure is the mother of success. 6.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.7.All roads lead to Rome.8.Never too old to learn. 结尾：提出倡议或号召 Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again!As students, we should start from ourselvesDont wait. Join us now!Lets take action right now!Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today! Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!If everyone tries to protect the environment, the world will be a better place!5.Check查：通览全文仔细检查u Spelling(拼写)u Tense(时态)u Grammar (语法)u Handwriting(书写)u Punctuation marks(标点符号) Summary : basic rules(写作考试规则) search（审）list（列）add(加: 开头和结尾) beautify(美：谚语/例子)check(查：通览全文仔细检查）注意：书写规范, 卷面整洁Step5 Practice 3a.Think of a person or an event from junior high school that you will never forget. Make some notes about how this person or event changed your life in some way.(P112)3b.Write a passa