北京市五十七中学高中英语 Unit 3 Celebrations writing课件 北师大版必修1.ppt

unit3 celebration towriteadescriptionofaneventusingappropriatelinkingwords guidedwriting writingobjectives canyoudescribeapartyyouhavebeento 2 whathappenedduringtheparty todaylet slearnhowtowriteanevent 写作准备 stage1题材分析 基本结构 事件发生 事件发展 事件结局 确定好文章中心思想 理清事件的前因后果 安排好行文顺序 stage2 1 introductiontothesituation why abirthdaypartywhere housewhen june lastyearwho familyandfriends2 thebeginning whatpreparations whattime whatfood 3 development whathappenedduringtheparty 4 conclusionwhathappenedintheend whendiditfinish wasitgood 根据下面提示 分4段叙述你参加过的生日宴会 写作思路 stage3 话题词语汇聚 1 表达时间 很久以前在早上6点钟在他来这儿之前到上学期末为止在暑假期间直到 才当 的时候 alongtimeagoatsixo clockinthemorningbeforehecameherebytheendoflasttermduringthesummerholidaynot untilwhile 2 表达地点 在十字路口在山脚下在公园中央在公共汽车前部在树上在街道对面在路的两边在右边 atthecrossingatthefootofthemountaininthemiddleoftheparkinthefrontofthebusinthetreeontheothersideofthestreetonbothsidesoftheroadontheright 3 表达因果 asaresultbecauseofconsequentlyitturnsouttobetheprimaryreasonis 结果因为结果结果是主要原因是 4 关键词语 举行宴会庆祝生日蛋糕和着音乐跳舞抱怨 过得愉快 holdapartycelebratebirthdaycakedancetomusiccomplainaboutenjoyoneself 1 去年6月 他举办了个宴会来庆祝我16岁生日 lastyearinjune hehadapartytocelebratemysixteenthbirthday 2 妈妈为我准备了一个很棒的蛋糕 mumpreparedmeawonderfulbirthdaycake 3 当我们跳舞时 一个邻居跑来抱怨噪音太大 whileweweredancinghappily oneoftheneighborscametocomplainaboutthenoise 4 虽然房子一片狼藉 但我们玩的很愉快 thoughatlastthehousewasabitofamess weenjoyedourselves stage4 连词成句 连句成篇 lastyearinjune wehadapartytocelebratemysixteenbirthday weheldthepartyatmyhouseandinvitedallmyfriends beforetheparty myparentspreparesomedeliciousfoodanddrinks mumpreparedmeawonderfulbirthdaycakeaswell atfirstiwasverynervous butassoonasmyfriendsarrived mynervousnesswasgone thepartystartedatabout8o clock firstofallwehadadrinkandatethedeliciousfoodandbirthdaycake afterthat wedancedtosomegreatmusic whileweweredancinghappily oneoftheneighborscametocomplainaboutthenoise butintheend