2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题07-建议申请话题指导

1 20132013 届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题 0707 建议申请话题指导建议申请话题指导 实例指导实例指导 1 1 求职申请求职申请 写作任务写作任务 注意 1 词数 120 左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使短文连贯 上海世博会 2010 Shanghai World Exposition 思路指导思路指导 求职申请的信件是一种应用文 一份出色的求职申请的信件是得到理想职位的关键 这类 文章一般具有以下特点 1 时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 有时会用到一般将来时 2 人称相对统一 主要采用第一人称 3 文章主要叙述真实情况 而不需要发表评论 写求职申请的信件一般采用以下几个步骤 第一 明确提出自己所应聘的职位 然后介绍自己的基本情况 如年龄 性别 学历 所学专业或技术特长等 第二 写自己的简单经历 着重写教育和工作经历 如 在何单位从事过去何种工作 业 绩如何 受过何种培训等 切记不可浮夸或隐瞒 第三 阐述自己能胜任此项工作的理由 尽可能写得详细 充分 注意要谦虚 客观 不 要夸夸其谈或信誓旦旦 第四 写清自己的联系地址 电话及联系时间 这类文章的写作 通常要注意以下几点 1 直入主题 解释你为什么写这封求职信并表明你感兴趣的职位 还可以说一下你是在哪 儿得知工作信息的 2 一封求职信是你向雇主证明你是最好人选的好机会 因此确定该职位的技能要求是重要 的一步 必须看清招聘广告上所列出的每项要求 再将自己的学历 能力与兴趣逐一与其 比较 然后 具体介绍你以前和这些技能相关的工作经历 最后表明自己的信心 词语搜索词语搜索 apply committee protect the environment volunteer serious unhealthy rubbish duty take care of realize problem solve civilized friendly reasonable polite manner behavior 句型搜索句型搜索 I would like to 我愿意 As far as I m conemed 就我而言 Only 2 1 本文要求写一封求职信 既然是写求职信 应包括该用人消息的来源和个人的基本情况 个人信息 工作经历 个人技能等个人基本情况已经以表格的形式给出 这些将是你的习作 的主要内容所在 如何安排这几个方面 孰轻孰重 也有讲究 根据所给材料可知你已工作 两年 那么重点阐述你的优势以及自己的潜能 才是这封信的核心部分 另外 说明招聘信息 的来源也很必要 题目中已经明确给出信息 该招聘广告登载在报纸上 2 本写作要求是写一封信 因此首先要注意书信的格式 不妨分下面几部分完成该习 作 第一部分 开头称呼语及说明该招聘消息的来源 引出话题 第二部分 主体部分 即介绍 你的情况 第三部分 结束语 3 求职信属于正式信函 开头称呼应为 Dear Sir Madame 在行文上要注意使用礼 貌用语 如开头时写 I would love to work in your company 等 结尾时写 I d appreciate it if you can call me or write back to me 或者 Thank you for your attention 之类的话 让读信者感到求职者的礼貌和真诚 其次 在介绍自己的情况的时候要注意句子之间的联系 使用必要的连接语 如 and what s more besides 或者表示顺序的词语 如 firstly finally 等等 让文章连 贯通顺 要长短句交替使用 正确使用并列句和复合句以使文章避免单调 错落有致 最后 在打草稿的时候注意千万不能遗漏要点 因为这是要扣分的 实例指导实例指导 2 2 征求建议征求建议 写作任务写作任务 假如你是 Amy 你所在的城市要修一座地铁 现在面向社会广泛征求意见 作为一名中 学生 请你给设计师写封信告诉他你的建议 希望他至少能考虑以下几点 并说明你的理 由 1 地铁的入口和出口标牌要醒目 3 Dear Sir Madam I heard that you are the architect of the new subway Here I d like to offer you my suggestions First the entrance and exit to the Subway should be accessible to anyone To our disappointment find the subway in many big cities often takes much time just because of the entrances and exits are hidden at some corner of the street Worse still directing signs can t stand out compared to Others Second traditional steps to the subway should be replaced by lifts For one thing it can save passengers much time for another it will be convenient for those with special needs such as the disabled I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration 教师点评教师点评 1 亮点点击 文章格式正确 要点齐全 第一句开门见山点出文章的主旨 此外 作者 使用了定语从句等负杂句型和不少短语 如 be accessible to take time stand out compared to be convenient for take into consideration 等 并且句与句之 间的衔接得当 如 to our disaapointment for one thing for another 等短语的恰当 运用 2 误点点拨 find 改为 finding 此处是现在分词短语作主语 去掉 of because of 不可接句子 只可接名词或名词短语 此句改为 because the entrances and exists are hidden at some corner of the street 3 画龙点睛 To our disappointment finding the subway in many big cities often takes much time just because the entrances and exits are hidden at some corner of the street 句虽然用了连接短语 但不够简洁 可改为 It often annoys us so much to make great efforts to find the hidden entrances and exits at some unknown corner 参考范文参考范文 4 Dear Sir Madame I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions for the subway that will be built For a smoothly flowing subway I would like to suggest the following First more outstanding entrances and exits to subway stations should be provided It is usual that entrances and exits are hard to find since they are almost hidden at the corner of the street Besides directing signs are easily left unnoticed because of many advertisements Second it would be better to replace traditional steps with lifts to make it convenient for the elders an d even for the disabled Furthermore lifts help save time Looking forward to the improvement of the subway and wishing you all the success Yours sincerely Amy 佳句欣赏佳句欣赏 1 For a smoothly flowing subway I would like to suggest the following 2 It is usual that entrances and exits are hard to find since they are almost hidden at the corner of the street 3 Besides directing signs are easily left unnoticed because of many advertisement 实例指导实例指导 3 3 如何写好规劝性质的书信如何写好规劝性质的书信 范文欣赏范文欣赏 Dear Lili Glad to hear from you I just want to share with you how I m getting on well with my English study First of all you should know clearly what you study for As we know 5 English is one of the most widely used languages in the world To be a capable person in your future life you must learn English well Secondly I think the basic thing to do is to memorize as many English words as possible When you come across new words you should write them down again and again Thirdly you should read out English texts loudly every morning learn phrases useful expressions and sentence patterns They are helpful in improving speaking and writing as well Last grammar is also very important You ought to listen to the teacher s lectures carefully in class When you have trouble you must ask for help in time Yours faithfully Xumin Dear Sir Madam I am writing jo suggest that our government should set up a special agency to provide more job opportunities for the disabled With the increase m competition for jobs it is easy for the government to ignore the needs of these individuals Admittedly there has been much improvement made for them However it is far from enough Though they may be different in many ways they in fact want to make contributions to society just like any of us to prove their worth to our country And one of the suggestions is to train them to learn some skills for free Only in this way can they achieve their dreams and feel good about themselves not just as individuals but citizens of the country Yours sincerely Tom 加入你是一名残疾学校的学生王兵 你们城市准备建造新的体育馆 你写信给建筑师李先 生 提供一些建议 期中也包括一些有利于残疾人的建议 注意 1 在城市的北面 那里方便 2 至少要放下 2 万人 3 要留给残疾人座位和通道 体育馆 gymnasium 字数 120 150 6 思路指导 1 在历年高考中 英语试题中的书面表达题考查最多的应用文为书信形式 而内容有很多 又是关于很多疑惑问题的请教或解答 2 故掌握英文书信的写法对考生来讲非常必要 英文书信 通常包括以下几个部分 即 信头 称呼 正文 谦称和结束语 签名 3 本文是一个以学生的身份写信 因此语言要客气 委婉 4 时态以一般现在时态和将来时态为主 学习习作 Dear Mr Li I am a student in a disability school It is very glad for me to have a chance to write to you a famous architect I hear a big gymnasium will be put up in our city and you are the leading architect As a sport fan I want to give suggestions to you Firstly I think it should be in the north of the city as it is convenient for citizens especially for our disabled men Secondly I think it will be good if it is a very big and I think it can hold over 20 000 people Last the important suggestion it should have many seats for our disabled sports fans and it should there be a way for us to enter the gymnasium I heartily wish you may consider my these suggestions And I am looking forward to the wonderful gymnasium Yours Li Ming 参考范文 Dear Mr Johnson I m writing in response to your advertisement for the position of Sales Manager I will graduate from Peking University in the coming July majoring in Marketing Management I have ever worked for half a year in the marketing field as an intern in a computer company I have an outgoing personality and I am good at communicating with people from all walks of life both in fluent English and Chinese Besides I m skillful in operating computers I believe my solid 7 educational experience and practical work experience can make me a perfect fit for this position I ll appreciate it if you can give me a chance for an interview and we can discuss this position further I can be reached at 010 12345678 I m looking forward at hearing from you soon Yours faithful Wang Jun Dear Mr Wang I m glad to know that our school radio station will choose one broadcaster recently I m a student from senior two and now I m writing to apply for the position I m fond of the work of broadcasting and I am willing to serve all of our schoolmates providing them with wonderful English programs over the radio First of all I m good at English especially at spoken English I won the first prize for the School Spoken English Contest last year In addition when I was in primary school I worked for the school radio station which gained me rich experience in this field Therefore I m sure to get