高二英语 模块6 Unit16 Communication workshop-Period_1课件 北师大版选修6

TheDayWhenEverythingWentWrong Period1 Inthislessonyouwillbeableto1 Learntopolishbycomparingtwowritings2 Writeastory 3 Uselinkingwords Objectives Lead in Doyoulovestories Whatfactorsshouldbeincludedinastory Story Who When Where What Lead in WhatwillyouwriteaboutwhenyouseethetitleADayWhenEverythingWentWrong Sample tellwhathappenedinthepictures LastMonday myalarmclockdidn tring soIgotuponehourlate WhenIhurriedlyrantothebusstop thebushadleft Asaresult Iwaslateforschool Writethreeorfoursentencesononebadeventthatyouhaveexperienced includingwho when whereandwhat StageOne ReadDraftAofastudent scompositiononthetopicADayWhenEverythingWentWrong Question Howmanyeventsarementionedinthestory EventsinDraftA IWalkedtoschool Icamelastinthepoetryreadingcompetition Ispilledwateronmypillow WritetwoorthreeeventsonthetopicADayWhenEverythingWentWrong Youcanwriteabouteverybadthingyouhaveexperienced suchaslosingsomethingimportant hurtingyourleg beinglateforschool failinganexam Shareyourwritingwithyourpartner StageTwo Whatotherfactorsshouldbeincludedinastory Story Who When Where What Why How Howtoend Howyoufeel Why Feelings Noschoolbus notpreparedthecompetitionTiresome awkward ReadDraftAandfindtheotherfactorsofthestory Putwhyandfeelingsinyourwritings Shareyourwritingwithyourpartner StageThree ReadDraftBandtellwhichoneisbetter WhatdoesthewriteraddinDraftB InDraftB thewriteruseslinkingwordsandaddssomedetailsandspecificinformationtoattracttheattentionofthereader Besides theorderofeventsisclearerandthelanguageismorevivid StageFour Orderofevents A 1 Becausetheschoolbusdidnot 2 Atschool Mr fan 3 WhenIgotintobedthatnight I B 1 First Ihadtowait30minutesfortheschoolbus 2 ThenextproblemhappenedwhenIarrivedatschool 3 ThelastproblemofthisterribledayhappenedwhenIgotinto First next lastWhen Vividlanguage A 1 Itwashotandtiresome 2 Mr fan theEnglishteacherremindedmeofthe Thissurprisedme 3 Icamelastinthecompetition B 1 Thedaywashotandtiring 2 Mr Fan theEnglishteacher alargebutfriendlyman gavemeanastysurprise Heremindedmeinhisloudvoicethat 3 IwasnotsurprisedwhenIcamelastinthecompetition Adjectivesareused Uselinkingwordsandadjectivesinyourwriting referringtoinformationonpage97 Linkingwords 并列转折3 因果4 其他 and both and but however so because when suddenly assoonas unfortunately so that first intheend asaresult Writing 一般过去时 第一人称 描述过去个人经历 WriteyourstoryADayWhenEverythingWentWrong usingcolourfullanguage referringtoWritingHelp1onP97 1 几天