句子结构常见错误ppt课件

EnglishWriting Date Nov 1 2009 Paully F 句子结构常见错误 1 残缺句2 接排句3 误置修饰语4 悬垂修饰语 Warming up Correctthefollowingsentences 1 Havingmissedalessonforaweek awrittenexcusewasneeded 2 Notknowinghisname itisdifficulttointroducehim 3 Steppingdownfromthecar theyoungstersranforwardtogetagoodlookatthefootballstar 4 Stuckinthemud theyhadtopushthecar Answer 5 Standingonthetopofthemountain thelakelookedverybeautiful 6 Seeingfromthewhole thecompositionisnotbad 7 Havingdinnerwithhisfamily afriendcameforavisit 8 Walkingdownthestreet acarsuddenlystoppedbesidehim 9 Notshowingthemtheshortcut itwillbedifficultforthemtogetthereontime 10 Havingfinishedhercomposition thetranslationexercisewastakenup Correctthefollowingsentences 1 Everyoneofthestudents includingmyself haveboughtthisdictionary 2 Physicsarefascinatingbutdifficult 3 Thepresidenttogetherwithseveralassistantsarehere 4 Fiftydollarsseemtoomuchforthissweater 5 Anumberofspellingmistakeswasfoundinhiscomposition 6 Howhefoundthosepreciouspaintingsareofgreatinteresttousall 7 Thepublichavearighttoknow 8 Whathewantedtoknowwasthepay thelivingandworkingconditions andthekindofjobhewouldbeassigned 9 ThereareaJapaneseandtwoKoreansinhisclass 10 NeitherhisclassmatesnorProfessorBrownhaveunderstoodhim 误置修饰语 错误一 修饰语只能修饰某个中心词 不能放其他地方 1 Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats 2 Pleasegivethebooktotheboywiththebluecover Hesoldtheoldcarwithleatherseatstotheman Pleasegivethebookwiththebluecovertotheboy 错误二 修饰语既可修饰中心词A 也可修饰中心词B 因此有歧义 3 Weagreedonthenextdaytomaketheadjustment 意思一 Itisonthenextdaythatwearrivedattheagreement Weagreedtomaketheadjustment 意思二 Weagreedthatthetimewhenwewouldmaketheadjustmentisthenextday Weagreedthatonthenextdaywewouldmaketheadjustment 4 Studentswhopracticewritingoftenwillbenefit 意思一 Studentswhooftenpracticewritingwillbenefit 意思二 Studentswhopracticewritingwilloftenbenefit 悬垂修饰语 四种形式 1 悬垂分词 2 悬垂动名词 3 悬垂动词不定式 4 悬垂省略从句 修改方法 1 悬垂分词 现在分词 错句 Lookingupatthesky thesunwentunderacloud 过去分词 错句 Shockedbythebadnews hermouthopenedwide Lookingupatthesky hesawthesungounderacloud Shockedbythebadnews sheopenedhermouthwide 2 悬垂动名词 错句 Afterfinishingtheresearch thepaperwaseasytowrite Afterfinishingtheresearch Ifoundthatthepaperwaseasytowrite AfterIfinishedtheresearch thepaperwaseasytowrite 3 悬垂动词不定式 错句 Towritewell goodbooksmustberead Towritewell Imustreadgoodbooks 4 悬垂省略从句 错句 Whileclimbingthehill therainbegantofall Whileclimbingthehill shefelttherainbegantofall WhileIclimbedthehill therainbegantofall 修改方法 Whileleavingthehouse thephonerang 1 找出句中错误的主语 改为能支配分词的主语 2 补足悬垂短语 使其扩展为一个完整的从句 Whileleavingthehouse Iheardthephonering WhileIwasleavingthehouse Iheardthephonering Exercise 1 Thumbingthrough shenoticed Asshewasthumbing 2 sb performed 3 office shenoticed 4 Thoughhewas hewasac