初中英语作文教学课件

初中英语作文教学 张晓艳 AYourself 有关于你自己 mynameis Iam myEnglishnameis Iam yearsoldIwasbornin1996inIama girl quiet active creative BYourfamilybackgroundorchildhood Thereare people members inmyfamily IwasbroughtupinahappyfamilyMyfatherisa andmymotherisa worker businessman engineer teacher doctor Ihave youngersister brotherolder CYourhobbies Ilike Myhobbyisplaying Iamgoodat basketball football piano reading printing DYourschoollife Igraduatedfrom Myfavoritesubjectis Chinese Maths English EYourwishinthenearfuture IhopetobehappyinthisclassIwishIcanlearnmoreaboutEnglishFYourambitionandaspirationIwishtobea myambitionistobe GLast ThankyouforyourlisteningThankyouforyourtimeWishtoseeyouagainWouldyouliketomakefriendswithme Self introduction Hi mynameis Iamfrom I m yearsold I minclass grade in middleschool Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily myfather mymotherandI Theylovemeverymuch AndIlovethemtoo Myhobbyisplaying andenjoying Ilikemakingfriendswithothers Wouldyouliketomakefriendswithme 1写作原则 使用自己熟悉的句型 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wasridingawoodenhorse weretalking wastakingpictures happily Aman onawintermorning becoveredwith makeasnowman throwsnowballs Whatwillhappenlater LiMing falldown bebadlyhurt can tstandup takehimtohospital 1 看清图片 2 看懂图片 确定Who Where When What的内容 3 确定时态 并能正确写出时态的结构4 写作时注意 书写格式 字母大小写 标点 主谓一致 正确使用动词 句子之间要有连贯性 内容的完整性 尽量使用习惯用语和熟悉的句型 小结 2 WriteaNoteofAskingforLeave ANoteofAskingforLeaveDecember15th 2010DearMiss Yours LingMing 如何写请假条 例 假如你是李雷 星期一早晨得了重感冒 给老师写个请假条 告诉老师医生建议你休息 需请假三天 请老师原谅 Askingforleave Mondaymorning LiLei DearSir I mverysorryIcan tcometoschoolthismorningbecauseI vegotabadcold Thedoctoradvisedmetostayinbedafewdays Couldyouapplyforathreedays leave Ex 1 你感觉不舒服 要去看医生而不能去上学 请以张明的名义给老师写个请假条 AskingforleaveMay 20th 2002 ZhangMing Dearteacher I mnotfeelingwelltoday Motherwilltakemetoseethedoctor SoIcan tbeatschool Iwanttoaskforoneday sleave Thankyou 3 Writealetter 15RenmingRoadJinhua 321000Dcecmber22th 2004 DearWangLin Thankyouforyourletter Imissallofyouverymuch HowIwishtoseeyouallsoon But Yours LiMing 4 Writeadiary Friday December28th 2010SunnyI msogladtoseemyteachersandfriendagain 日记书写格式 1 在日记的左侧写出日期 星期 日 月 年 2 在同一行的右侧写出当天的天气情况 Eg 16月15日星期天阴今天下午我的同学们去了动物园 他们玩的很开心 但我没去 因为我姑妈病了 正住院 我在医院照顾她 她感到比以前好多了 我祝她早日康复 SundayJune5CloudyAllmyclassmateswenttothezoothisafternoon Theyhadagoodtimethere ButIdidn tgowiththem becausemyauntwasillandshewasinhospital Iwenttolookafterher Shefeltmuchbetterthanbefore Ihopeshewillgetwellsoon 5 失物招领与寻物启事书写格式1 在启示上方中间的位置写上 FOUND LOST 字样 2 写上你所捡到或丢东西的特征及名称 3 在哪里去认领或联系方式 例1 FOUNDAblackpenwasleftatthelibraryyesterdayafternoon December12th Willtheownerpleasering4016633 Ex 1 请写一则 失物招领 提示 教研室拾到一串 abunchof 钥匙 有丢失者请到办公室认领 FOUNDAbunchofkeyswasleftintheTeacher sRoom PleasetheownerofitcomestoRoom505andaskTeacherZhangtorecognizeit Ortelephonethenumber8675432 Ex 2 请写一篇 寻物启示 提示 你丢了一辆自行车和一个书包 请拾到者和王海联系 或请到一年二班 谢谢 LostAblackbikewithaschoolbagwaslostyesterday Peoplewhohasfounditpleaseringthenumber894325 WangHai OryoucancometoClassTwo GradeOne 6如何写通知 1 在正文的上方中间写上 NOTICE 字样 2 在左上角上写所要发往的通知单位或人 3 通知的右下角写明发通知的单位或人 例3 NOTICEAllthestudents Wearegoingtoholdasportsmeetingateighttomorrowmorning Thestudentsgettogetherontheplayground Youmustgetreadyforyourownlunch Headmaster Ex 3 明天早上八点 二年级同学要在校门外集合 请穿上旧衣服 去人民公园种树 请根椐所给条件写一通知 AllthestudentsofGradeTwo Tomorrowwe llgotothePeople sParktoplanttrees Pleaseputonyouroldclothesandmeetoutsidetheschoolgateateighto clocktomorrowmorning March 10th 2001 7 电话信息 看下面表格 填写相应的内容 例 4TelephoneMessageFrom To Date Time Message David YourmotherisgoingtoShanghaitonight Shehasnotimetosay Good bye toyou Justletmesay Sorry toyou ShewillbebacknextWednesday Susan Susan David July 21th 2intheafternoon Ex4 根据给内容完成表格 TodayisMaythefifth Itis10 30now LiLei smotherisansweringthephone A Hi B Oh CanIspeaktoLiLei please A Sorry heisn tin CanItakeamessage B Yes please ThisisJim A Hi Jim B Hi NextSundayismybirthday Couldyoutellhimtomypartyplease A OK I lltellhim B Thankyou Bye TelephoneMessageFrom To Date Time Message Jim LiLei May5th Tenthirty CometoJim sbirthdaypartynextSunday Ex5 Ex6 读下面对话 写一篇电话留言 A Hello 7 5 1double8 2 B Oh hello MayIspeaktoAnn please A Sorry sheisout Whoiscall