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考前冲刺（一）审题思路本题探讨的是美国快节奏生活这一现象，属于社会生活类话题。要求简要概括所给材料中的观点，并发表自己的评论。在具体行文方面，考生可以开篇点题，简要概括材料中作者针对快节奏生活的观点。然后提出自己对这一问题的评论并给出充分的论据支撑。最后总结全文，重述论点。Summary写作Para.1-2: A phenomenonThe nation has opted to slow down.Reasons:1. war trauma 2. a deeper understanding of life. 1) walk more slowly; 2) driving better; 3) reconnect with their families and friends. Para. 3: A phenomenonAdding meetingsPara. 4: A conclusion the verdict about this slow life is incorrect.Para. 5-8: offers four measures1. School work should be reduced.2. Service speed should be slowed down.3. Daytime cycle should be stuck to. 4. The threshold for computers should be raised. Summary: A glance of the American society may give you an illusion that the nation has opted to slow down due to a series of reasons such as war trauma or a deeper understanding of life. Yet, the author of the above excerpts points out that the verdict about this slow life is incorrect. Moreover, he offers four measures for fast-free living and they are reducing school work, slowing down service speed, sticking to daytime cycle and raising the threshold for computers. (81 words) （改后）高分范文Slow down and Take a Deep BreathA glance of the American society may give you an illusion that the nation has opted to slow down due to a series of reasons such as war trauma or a deeper understanding of life. Yet, the author of the above excerpts points out that the verdict about this slow life is incorrect. Moreover, he offers four measures for fast-free living. Firstly, school work should be reduced. Secondly, service speed should be slowed down. Thirdly, daytime cycle should be stuck to. And finally, the threshold for computers should be raised. Historian Stephen Kern once pointed out the nature of technology-induced revolution, asserting that its sole purpose is to alter notions of speed, distance, and the pace of social change. These words still mirror the life we are living nowa life that is not meant to slow down at all despite advice from social engineers and soul-cultivators.Riding on the frantic Roller Coaster, we sometimes knowingly or negligently miss the main aim of our life. Home-cooked comfort food gives way to fast food served in McDonalds; a nice scroll over the shops on weekends yields to on-line shopping; a little chat over a cup of coffee with our friends seems like a luxury we cannot afford. All these scenes are nothing but a snapshot of our head-spinning life, yet we are so meddled in it that we lose the perspective of where we are heading for. Its time to halt our frenetic chase after the meaningless “hyper-power” in every walk of our life. After all, life is not simply a tally of the gold mines we spend our whole life painstakingly digging, but rather a heaven that can be seen simply through a wild flower. For that enlightenment, we need to slow down and take a deep breath in this roaring world. The option is yours!考前冲刺（二）审题思路本题探讨的是中国春运这一独特的现象，属于社会生活类话题。要求简要概括材料中提到的春运反映出来的问题，并发表自己的评论。在具体行文方面，考生可以开篇点题，简要概括作者关于春运的观点。然后分析春运现象背后的原因以及春运体现出的中国人的品质。最后总结全文，重述论点或者升华主题。SubtitleReasonPara.1: Chunyun can be ranked the largest scale of human immigration despite the rapid urbanization.Para. 2-4: Reason 1The migrant workers return to their hometown;Para. 3-4the relocation of some industries Para. 5: Reason 2Journeys made by holiday tourists are increasing;Para. 6:the elderly parents travel from the countryside to the cities SummaryA unique occurrence all over the world, Chunyun can be ranked as the largest scale of annual human migration. The first reason is that the immigrant workers need to return to their hometown to spend the Spring Festival with their families. Moreover, the increase of travel in holidays aggravates Chunyun. However, the relocation of some industries from coastal cities to inland provinces and the elderly parents travel from the countryside to the cities to reunite with their children helps ease/slow down the frantic Chunyun. (83 words) （改后）高分范文 Spring Festival Travel Rush A unique occurrence all over the world, Chunyun can be ranked as the largest scale of annual human migration. The first reason is that the immigrant workers need to return to their hometown to spend the Spring Festival with their families. Moreover, the increase of travel in holidays aggravates Chunyun. However, the relocation of some industries from coastal cities to inland provinces and the elderly parents travel from the countryside to the cities to reunite with their children helps ease/slow down the frantic Chunyun. （改后） A definitely unique occurrence all over the world, Chunyun, or the Spring Festival Travel Rush can be ranked as the largest scale of annual human migration. Despite rapid urbanization, the allure to return hometown for Spring Festival, the tradition that has been cherished since ancient times, is stronger than anything else. The peasant workers contribute most to Chunyun as they work in economically vibrant cities while leaving their families behind. Moreover, journeys made by holiday tourists are increasing. However, the relocation of some industries from coastal cities to inland provinces helps ease the flow. Furthermore, the elderly parents travel from the countryside to the cities to reunite with their children. This reverse route also helps slow down the frantic Chunyun. In my opinion, fruit of urbanization though Chunyun appears to be, it embodies the familial value we have been cherishing for centuries. In spite of the higher travel costs, the expected extravagant spending on gifts and other festival items and the bumpy road back home in terms of several pratfalls in securing a train ticket, most Chinese people choose to drop any business at hand just to desperately go back home in hope of celebrating the most solemn festival with their families. The hubbub on the crowded and often suffocating coaches and trains can never quench their burning nostalgia for long-departed homes. Their pampering spending on their families mirrors a champion of love even though the money may well be earned painstakingly through travail over many furiously sleepless nights in sweatshops.In China whose social welfare epitomizes its fair coverage of every citizen, some systems such as Hukou and the soaring housing prices in cities have successfully shunned migrant workers from settling in their workplaces, thus resulting in this gushing rush. So a generously defined social welfare system might be a panacea for this swelling in travel, or Chunyun is doomed a chronic fight-or-flight issue.考前冲刺（三）审题思路本题探讨的是中国大学应该如何解决人才流失的问题，属于社会生活类话题。要求简要概括所给材料中的观点，并发表自己的评论。在具体行文方面，考生可以开篇点题，简要概括材料中作者的观点。然后分析人才流失的原因并针对这一问题给出可行的解决途径。最后总结全文，重述论点或者升华主题。高分范文How to Solve the Brain Drain Problem To solve the brain drain problem, especially those with an overseas academic experience, China has been taking many measures which range over one-off bonus, promotion, an assured salary and a housing allowance or even a free apartment to attract Chinese professors who work abroad and those foreign professors. This encouragement brings surprising results in boosting the overall academic achievements among universities. However, since Chinese universities notoriously rank low on World University Rankings, there is still a long way to go including adjusting executive measures to cater to these talents. Fine porcelain, Chinese-landscape scrolls and calligraphy adorn the office of Shi Yigong. Little about his ornamentation hints at Mr. Shis 18 years professorship at Princeton University in America as his native country started to prosper. In 2008, at the age of 41, he returned to his homeland only to become one of the most famous Chinese scholars to do so. Mr. Shis experience is an emblem of Chinese governments attempts to match its academic achievements with its economic ones. To solve the brain drain problem, inviting offers have been made to attract