大学英语四级测试作文评分标准PPT课件

.,1,大学英语四级测试作文评分标准,2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。,.,2,大学英语四级测试作文评分标准,11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入）段落不够扣分。,.,3,检查语法,1.动词时态，语态是否正确2.名词单数、复数、可数、不可数，专有名词大小写3.主谓一致分清主句和从句，使各自的主谓一致4.形容词、副词用法是否正确，比较级与最高级是否得当5.介词、连词搭配是否正确6.其他关联词用法是否正确7.单词拼写8.标点符号,.,4,九句话模板,1.引导句（套入标题）,2.主题句,3.展开句（简单描述）,4.主题句（提出论点）,5.6.7.,论据1论据2论据3,8.总结句（概括全文）,9.结束句（重复主题,第一段,第二段,第三段,.,5,Classwork,套用九句话模板,StopSmoking,（1）吸烟的问题越来越受到人们的关注（2）吸烟的害处（3）你的想法,.,6,Model1Model2(developed),(1)Therehasneverbeenanagreementastotheissueofsmoking.(2)Recently,however,moreandmorepeoplebegintopayattentiontothisquestion.(3)Theyhaverealizedthatsmokingdoesgreatharmtohealth.,(1)Therehasneverbeenanagreementastotheissueofsmoking.(2)Recently,however,moreandmorepeoplebegintopayattentiontothisquestion,andsomeevenwritetothegovernmentcallingforpoliciestostopsmoking.(3)Theyhaverealizedthatsmokingdoesgreatharmtothehealthofsmokersandnonsmokersaswell.,.,7,Model1Model2(developed),(4)Theharmofsmokingcanbeseenfromthefollowing.(5)First,itcancausecancer.(6)Second,itpollutestheenvironment.(7)Third,itcausesgreatwasteofmoney.,(4)Theharmofsmokingcanbeseenfromthefollowing.(5)First,itcancausecancer.ArecentsurveybytheWHOshows,ofthediseaseswhichcausedeatheveryyear,nearlyonethirdhastodowithsmoking.(6)Second,itpollutestheenvironment.Cigarettesendsmaydirtyourairandwater.(7)Third,itcausesgreatwasteofmoney.Isitwisetospendnearlythirtyyuaneachdayforsomethingwhichwillkillyoueventually?,.,8,Model1Model2(developed),(8)Inshort,smokingdoesgreatharmtohealth.(9)Effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentostopsmoking.,(8)Inshort