高中英语-英语书面表达全攻略-新人教版PPT课件

-,1,Writing:,Thesecretofhigh-markcomposition,-,2,失分原因：,1.语言表达有错误，不地道。2.要点有所遗漏。3.词汇量小，句子单一。4.句子衔接不自然。5.离题句太多。6.书写差。,-,3,1.要点齐全2.较多的语法结构和高级词汇3.语言地道，准确4.全文结构紧凑清析5.书写美观,高分书面表达的要求：,agoodcomposition,-,4,影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,-,5,Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?,-,6,影响给分的因素之二：语言,A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，高级.B.句型结构运用灵活多变.,人靠衣装，文靠词装,-,7,词汇层面,Adj.聪明的、脑筋好的cleversmartwisebrightintelligent,-,8,短语层面,电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Cputersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。,-,9,句型层面,他昨天下午来的。1.Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.2.Hedidntcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.3.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.4.Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.,-,10,Rewritethesentences,1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.2.Iwillbegivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish.Hestudieshard.,使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.,Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.,ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudieshard.,-,11,Usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture,尝试多样化表达方式,一就受到欢迎,-,12,AssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswifeLienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomeddirectly/themomenttheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywereHardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere,-,13,影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词,-,14,使用恰当的连接词,first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleast,and;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith,forexample;forinstance;like;suchas;asto,but;however;while;though;onthecontrary,because;since;thanksto;asaresult/consequence(of);thus;therefore,inaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion,whatsmore;besides;tomakemattersworse;whatsworse;worsestill;furthermore,-,15,Fivestepsforwriting(写作五步骤）,passage,-,16,例文,假设你是宏力学校学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2：005：00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话44876655）欢迎大家光临注意：词数100左右。,-,17,Step1审题,假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。写信我是李华。比赛，评委一般现在，将来,-,18,Step2Keypoints,英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2：005：00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话44876655）欢迎大家光临,假设你是宏力学校学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。,1,chairmanofStudentsUnion2,hold,takeplace3,speechcontest4,close,nearby,nottoofar5,judge,todecidewhothewinnerwillbe,1,thetopic;thesubject;thetheme;themainidea2,ManandNature;Human,Humanbeings,Mankind;Nature,theWorld;Environment3,inRoom501at2:00-5:00ontheafternoonofJune15;from2:00pmto5:00pmonJune154,10students;takepartin,deliver/givetheirspeeches5,callme,contactme,phoneme,-,19,Step3:sentences,1,IamLiHua,ChairmanofStudentsUnionofHenanHongliSchool,whichisclosetoyouruniversity.2,OurschoolwillholdanEnglishspeechcontestinordertoimprovethestudentsoralEnglish.3,ThetopicisManandNature.4,IamwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeattheEnglishspeechcontest.5,ItisinRoom501inourschoolat2:00-5:00intheafternoonofJune15thattheEnglishspeechcontestwilltakeplace.6,Tenstudentswilldelivertheirspeeches.7,Pleasecallmeifyouhaveanyquestions.8Mynumberis44876655.,-,20,Step4:passage,DearMs.Smith,IamLiHua,ChairmanofStudentsUnionofHenanHongliSchool,whichisclosetoyouruniversity.RecentlyourschoolwillholdanEnglishspeechcontestinordertoimprovethestudentsoralEnglishandIamwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeattheEnglishspeechcontest.ItisinRoom501inourschoolat2:00-5:00intheafternoonofJune15thattheEnglishspeechcontestwilltakeplace.Thentenstudentswilldelivertheirspeechesonthegiventopic“ManandNature”.Wewillappreciateitifyouwillacceptourinvitationatyourconvenience.Pleasecallmeat44876655ifyouhaveanyquestions.Iamlookingforwardtoyou