英语写作“汉堡式”段落Hamburger-Paragraph-finalppt课件

.,1,.,2,DoYouKnow?,ParagraphMainideaDetail,whatthestoryorparagraphismostlyaboutsentencesthatsupportthemainideaagroupofsentencesthatincludesamainideaanddetails,.,3,Details,.,4,Theintroductorysentenceintroducesthereadertothetopicofyourparagraph.Trytomakeitexciting!,Onwarmsummerdays,Ilovetryingtocatchbutterflies.Ihavesomuchfunrunningaroundinmybackyardchasingaftertheprettybutterfliesthatgozoomingby!IfIamluckyenoughtocatchone,Ineverkeepitforverylong.Afterall,butterfliesbelongintheirnaturalhabitat.IsurelycantwaituntilnextsummersothatIcangrabmynetandcatchsomebutterflies!,.,5,Besuretoaddatleastthreereasons,examples,ormainpointsthatsupporttheintroductory/topicsentence.,Thesereasons,examples,orpointsarethelettuce,tomato,cheese,andmeatoftheparagraph.,MAINPOINTS,REASONS,OREXAMPLES,.,6,AddDeliciousDetails,Besureto,AgoodparagraphincludesdetailsthatDESCRIBEorTELLABOUTthemainpointsorreasons.,Detailsshouldbe“delicious”orinteresting.Whenyouwriteahamburgerparagraph,compareyourdetailstoalloftheyummypartsofahamburgersuchas:*Lettuce*Tomato*Cheese*Meat,(Elaboration),.,7,AddDeliciousDetails,Again,yourelaborationshoulddescribeortellaboutyourmainpoints.Theyshouldsticktothetopic.,Whichdetaildoesntquitebelong?Ireallylovemybrother!HisnameisJeffandheissuperfunny.Oneofmyfavoritethingstodowithmybrotherisplayvideogames.Healwaysbeatsme!Sometimesmysistercriesatnight.Maybemybrotherwillplayavideogamewithmetonight!,.,8,TooMuchDetail,TheTroubleWith,Howwouldahamburgertasteifithadketchup,mustard,mayonnaise,pickles,lettuce,tomatoes,barbecuesauce,Swisscheese,spicycheese,andolivesontop?Toomuch,right?,Awritercanaddtoomuchdetailtoaparagraphaswell.Paragraphsshouldbeabout5-8sentenceslong.Ifyourparagraphispagesandpageslong,youwilleventuallylosetheinterestofyourreader.,.,9,JustRightDetail,AnExampleof,Myfavoriteschoollunchischickennuggetswithmashedpotatoes.OnereasonwhyIlovethislunchsomuchisthatittastessogreat!Ialsolovebeingabletosmelltheyummynuggetshoursbeforeitsevenlunchtime.Thecreamymashedpotatoesandgravyjustslidedownmythroat.IcantWAITuntilthenextchickennuggetday!,.,10,SofarwehavelearnedthatahamburgerparagraphneedsatopbunorINTRODUCTORYsentence.Theintroductionshouldintroducethereadertoyourtopic.Wealsolearnedthatgoodparagraphscontainthreetosixsupportingsentencesthattellmoreabouttheintroductorysentence.Thesemainpoints,examples,ordetailscanbecomparedtotheingredientsofahamburger,suchasthelettuce,tomato,cheese,andhamburgerpatty.Butwhatsmissing?Hmm,LetsReview,.,11,Thebottombunofahamburgerhelpsholdalloftheingredientstogether.Itworkswiththetopbuntokeepthemeat,cheese,tomato,andlettucefromfallingonthefloor!Theconcludingsentenceofaparagraphhelpsholdallofthesentencestogether!Itworkswiththeintroductorysentencetokeepthedetailsfromfallingapart.Theconcludingsentenceshouldbeinterestingandletyourreaderknowthatyouarefinishedwriting.Itwrapseverythingup!,Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.,.,13,Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Oneithersideofthisriver,whichis175feetwide,aremanywillowtreeswhichhavelongbranchesthatcanmovegracefullyinthewind.Inautumntheleavesofthesetreesfallandcovertheriverbankslikegoldensnow.Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.Eventhoughitissteep,climbingthishillisnotdangerous,becausetherearesomefirmrocksalongthesidesthatcanbeusedasstairs.Therearenotreesaroundthishill,soitstandsclearlyagainsttheskyandcanbeseenfrommanymilesaway.ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.,1.Peoplecanavoidburglariesbytakingcertainprecautions.2.Thereareseveraladvantagestogrowingupinasmalltown.3.MostUSuniversitiesrequirea550pointTOEFLscoreforanumberofreasons.4.Fixingaflattireonabicycleiseasyifyoufollowthesesteps.5.ThereareseveralenjoyablewaystotravelbetweentheUSandQueretaro.6.Effectiveleader