大学英语四级作文写作要点PPT课件

-,1,大学英语四六级作文写作,-,2,议论文常用结尾句型,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Takingintoconsiderationallthesefactors,Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemaysafelydraw/reachcometotheconclusionthat,Allthe,evidence,analysis,supports,justifiestheconclusionthat,shows,-,3,Itisnecessary/essentialthat,effective,appropriate,proper,actions,steps,measures,shouldbetakentoprevent/correct/endthe,Itishightimethatweplaced/putgreatemphasisontheimprovement/development/increaseof,Inshort/Onthewhole/Inaword,itcanbesaidthatwithout,Nothingcanpreventusfromaslongaswe,Onlybycanwe,-,4,说明文常用开头句型,Generallyspeaking,canbedividedintothree/fourgroups,Therearesomedifferences/similaritiesbetweenAandB,AisdifferentfromBinsome/severalaspects/respects/ways,Asfarasweknow,involvesfour/fivesteps,-,5,说明文常用的结尾句型:,Onthewhole/Allinall/Tosumup,theadvantagesofAoutweighthoseofB.,theadvantagesofAcarrymoreweightthanthoseofB./aremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.,Justasacoinhastwosides,alsohassomedisadvantages/advantages,suchas,Allinall,itsnecessaryforpeopletotakeaproperattitudetowards,-,6,Keepingtheforegoingthreepointsinmind,youwillfinditeasyto,Followthedirectionscarefully,andyouwilldefinitelybeableto.,-,7,MyViewonthePost-graduateCraze,1.目前考研究生形成热潮,2.我认为这股热潮的原因是,3.对该现象未来十年发展趋势的预测,-,8,Everyyear,millionsofcollegestudentswillsitinforthepost-graduateentranceexamination.Moreandmorestudentshaveregardedthepursuingofmasterdegreeasanindispensablepartoftheireducation.,-,9,Whatistoaccountfortheirenthusiasmforapost-graduate?First,itisthedemandofthetime.Inanageofknowledgeupdatingandinformationexplosion,whatyouhavelearnedincollegecanhardlymeetthedemandofsociety.Talentsofhighqualitywhoareequippedwiththelatestknowledgeandskillwillbeneededmorethanever.Second,weallrecognizethatthemoreeducationyouhave,themorelikelyyouaretosucceed.Comparedwiththosewithoutamasterdegree,masterswillenjoymorepreferentialtreatment,forexample,bettersalaries,moreopportunitiesforpromotionandtraining.Apost-graduatedegreecanguaranteeamorepromisingcareer.,-,10,Thelastbutnotleast,withthegraduationofalargenumberofcollegestudents,competitionforjobsbecomesincreasinglyfierce.Onewaytogainsomeadvantagesoverothersistohaveahigherdegree.,Takingintoaccountallthefactorsmentionedabove,wehavegoodreasonstobelievethatthistrendwillproceedinthenextdecade.,-,11,ShouldCollegeStudentsparticipateinSchoolActivities?,当前,越来越多的大学生积极参加学校的各种活动,如参加俱乐部以及各种体育活动.而有些学生不愿意参加这些活动,他们觉得应该把时间放在学习上,取得好成绩从而获得奖学金,1.表明你对这两种观点的看法,2.提出合理的建议,-,12,Nowadays,manycollegestudentskeepaskingthemselveswhethertheyshouldparticipateinactivitiesornotandmanyothersareobsessedwiththequestionwhichweighsmore,studyorplay?Notknowingwhattodo,somestudentsburythemselvesinbooksalldaylongwiththeurgetogetscholarship,whileothersdevotethemselvestoactivitiesinhopeofbeingsoakedinpracticalskills.,Sample1,-,13,Asfarasitgoes,boththetwoextremesarefarfromwise.Collegesareplacesforstudying,notonlyfrombooksbutalsofromallkindsofactivities.Therefore,studentsshouldarrangetheirowntimeaccordingtotheirowncapacity.Forexample,ifastudentisverytalentedatallhissubjectsbutlackofsomesocialabilities,hecanspendhissparetimeinparticipatinginthoseactivitiesthatcanbenefithiminsocialskills.Onthecontrary,anextrovertstudentwhoisnotgoodatstudyhadbetterspendmoretimeonhisstudyinsteadoftoomanyactivitiesandsports.,-,14,Inaword,theconfusioncanbedrivenawayifstudentscanallocatetheirowntimeproperly.Makesuretobalanceyourselfonthecommitmentandtheactivities.,Sample2,Nowadaysincollege,moreandmorestudentsputthemselvesintoallkindsofactivities,andatthesametime,allkindsofclubs,associationsandorganizationsmushroomoncampus.Thisphenomenonhasconfusedalotofstudentswhodontknowhowtobalancestudyandactivities.Asaresult,thereappeartwoextremes:oneislostinactivitiesandtheotherinbooks.Somecollegestudentswhodevotemostoftheirtimeinactivitiesmighthaveanillusionthatstudentsafterenteringcollegesarefreedfrombooksandassignments,whilethestudentswhoburythemselvesinbooksalldaylongmightdreamofscholarship.,-,16,Inmyopinion,studentsshouldfollowneitherofthetwoextremes.Thedevelopmentforstudentsinknowledgeandactivitiesshouldparalleleachother.Thosewhoengageinactivitiestoomuchmaylosetheopportunitytolearnfrombooks,whilethosewhostudyalldaylongmaymissthechancetodeveloptheirsocialskill.,Thus,tobeaqualifiedcollegestudent,oneshouldbalancethetwoaspectsandneitherstudynoractivitiesshouldbeneglectedandoverweighed.,-,17,信函:,1.称呼,2.正文1)导言：用一两句话开头说明写信的目的或表示感谢、问候。2)叙述细节：具体说明你的要求、想法和希望等相关细节。3)结束：向收信人表示谢意或致意3.结尾:签名,-,18,Sample1:,假如你是李明,请你就最近参加的一次旅游向旅行社投诉.信的内容应涉导游服务,酒店饭菜质量、房间环境等。最后提出赔偿。,-,19,DearSirorMadam,IamLi-ming,anordinarytraveler.IamwritingtocomplainaboutmyrecentholidayinHainanwhichwasorganizedbyyourcompany.MyfriendandIselectedtheone-weekIslandtourstartingonOctober1.Youragencyclaimedwewouldbepickedupattheairport,andthatthehotelwasthree-starquality.Theall-inclusivepricewepaidincludedbreakfastanddinnerandtwoexcursions.,Onarrivalattheairport,therewasnoonetomeetus.Wewaitedforhalfandhourandthenhadnochoicebuttotakeataxi.ThiscostRMB50.Thereceiptisenclosed.,-,20,ThehotelwasnotwhatIwouldconsiderthree-star.Theroomwasdirtyandmessy.Thebedsweresmallanduncomfortable.Conditionsinthedining-roomwerenotverysanitary.Thebreakfastportionswereverysmallandthehotelrefusedtoprovideuswithdinner.WehadtospendafurtherRMB500onextrameals.Again,Iencloseourrestaurantreceipts.,-,21,Ifinditdishonestandunacceptablethatyourcompanysoldusatourwhichinnowayresembledthedescription,andthereforeweexpecttobecompensatedforallourextraexpenses.ThereceiptswhichareenclosedtotalRMB550.Inaddition,weclaimarefundofRMB500becausetheroomwasnotuptothepromisedstandard.,Weexpecttoreceiveyourchequeverysoon.Yourssincerely,Liming,-,22,在日常生活中，确实会遇到一些粗心大意的服务人员。一家超市的收银员两次少给顾客找钱，顾客找经理抱怨、投诉。,AletterofComplaint,DearMr.Smith,MynameisLi-mimg.Iamanordinaryconsumerofyoursupermarket.Iventuretowriteyoualetterabouttheserviceinyoursupermarket.,Thefocusofthecomplaintisthecashiersattitude.Foronething,oneofyourcashersshortchangedmeafewdaysagowhenIpurchasedseveralitemsandyesterdaythesamethinghappenedforthesecondtime.,Foranother,Imafraidthatyourclerksaretoorudetoanswercustomersquestions.Honestlyspeaking,someofyourstaffsareworkinghardandpolite,andtheymakecustomersshoppingeasyandhappy.Butsomeofyourstaffsbadserviceshavereallydamagedthereputationofthesupermarket.Besides,someofthemarenotverykindtothecustomerswhentheirmistakesarepointedout.,Allinall,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement.Idohopeyoucantaketimetosetservicestandardsforyourstaffsandoffersometrainingtothem.Thankyouforyourtimeandkindconsideration.SincerelyYoursWuYue,-,26,批评、投诉信常用句型,Iamwritingtocomplainabout.,Ithinkitshightimeyourealized.,Weknowthatyouarenotgenerallycareless,butwewouldlikeyourassurancethatthiswillnothappenagainImustwarnyouthatunlessyoudosomethingaboutthesituationIwillbeforcedtotakelegalaction.,-,27,WritealetterofapplicationtotheDepartmentofPhysics,UniversityofWinsconsin,askingforadmissionasagraduatestudent.Yourlettershouldcontainthefollowingpoints.1.Thereasonwhyyoufilethisapplication2.Youreducationalhistoryandyourmajor3.Yourrequesttogetthematerialsabouttheuniversity,Sample2,-,28,Dearsir,Iamveryinterestedinundertakinggraduateworkinyouruniversity.Ihavereadresearchpapersbytwoofyourprofessors,Dr.ThomasHailyandMr.Jackson.Idliketostudyundertheirguidance.PleasereviewmyeducationalhistoryandletmeknowifIcanhavesuchachance.,-,29,InSeptemberof2000,IenrolledintheGraduateSchoolofTsinghuaUniversityasacomputermajor.ThroughoutthetwoyearsofstudyIhavemaintainedaGPAofnolessthan85.Sincegraduationin2004,IhavebeenworkingintheComputationCenterofShanghaiFudanUniversity.Iseethisfieldasoneofgreatpotentialformycountryandme.Ifeeltheneedtostudyfurtherinordertodevelopthispotential.,-,30,Ifyouconsidermeaviablecandidateforyourdoctorateprogram,pleasesendmetheappropriateformstoapplyforadmission.Also,Iwouldappreciatereceivingfromyouinformationalmaterialsuchasadepartmentbrochureorpamphlet,andauniversitycatalogorbulletin.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.,Sincerelyyours,Liming,-,31,Writeanapplicationletter.Youareplanningtofurtheryourstudiesinacollegeoruniversity.Writeanapplicationtothatinstitution.Youshouldwritenolessthan120,andbaseyourletterontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.,1.写信的目的2.你的兴趣、专业、特长和你的打算,-,32,DearSir/Madam,IamgoingtograduatefromtheDepartmentofCivilEngineeringinTsinghuaUniversityinJunnextyear.IamveryeagertoentertheGraduateSchoolofyouruniversitynextfallandtostudycivilengineeringforMasterdegree.Mypurposeforapplyingisbothtoexpandmyknowledgeandtocreateadditionalopportunitiesformyselfinthefuture.Ireallyenjoymysubjectandmychoiceofcoursefitinwithmylong-termcareerplans.Duringthefouryearsinuniversity,Ihavealwaysbeenahardworkerand,gotanexcellentperformance.Inaddition,myEnglishknowledgeandskillcanfacilitatemyfurtherstudyandworkinthecivilengineeringprogram.IhavealwaysbeenfascinatedwiththecivilengineeringprogramandalsofindthatthereissomuchthatIwouldwanttolearnandunderstand.WhileattendingTsinghuaUniversity,Ihavehadanumberofpart-timepositions.Thesediverseworkexperienceshavegivenmebetterunderstandingofopportunitiesavailabletous.Whatsmore,postgraduatestudywillprovidemeadistinctadvantageandenhancemyjobprospects.Ibelievethatgraduateschoolwillpreparemeforamoresuccessfulandchallengingcareerinthecivilengineering.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.,-,34,DearSir/Madam;IamJamesandwillgraduatefromclinicalpharmacological（临床药理学）departmentinJulythisyear.Through5yearslearning,Ihaveknownalotaboutmedicalfield,buttherearestilltoomanythingsunknownforme,whichhasarrestedmedeeply.Therefore,Iwanttostudyfurtherasapostgraduatestudentinourdepartment.Iamveryinterestinclinicalpharmacology,especiallynewdrugresearchanddevelopmentandwanttodevotemyselftothisfield.Asawaytocurepatient,drugplaysmoreandmoreimportantroleinmodernsociety.Butasweallknow,somediseases,-,35,suchascancer,arenotwelltreatedwithdrug,soIwanttodosomethinginthisfield.IhaveknownsomeChinesetraditionalherbsareveryeffectivetocancerandtheirperspectiveisbrightandpromising.Oneofmypaperwithrelatedcontenthasbeenpublishedonaveryimportantjournalnotalongtimeago,thereforeIwanttoresearchfurther.Ibelievewithmyaptitudeandhardwork,Icandowellasapostgraduate.Thanksforconsideration.YoursSincerely,Tom,-,36,Writeanapplicationlettertoacomputercompanyforapostofprogrammingengineer.Yourlettershouldinclude:yourinterestintheadvisedpost;youreducationalpreparationssuchasyourspecialtyandworkingexperience;yourpersonalityetc.,AnApplicationLetter,-,37,DearSir:ImfortunateenoughtoreadyourcompanysadvertisementforsoftwareprogrampersonnelonXinhuaDailyofJune7th,whichoffersamosttemptingjobtoayoungmanjustoutofuniversity.Icantconsideranyotherjobsbutsoftwaredevelopmentforaworldlyfamouscompanylikeyours.Iregarditasarareandwonderfulopportunity.Herepleaseallowmetogiveabriefself-introduction.,-,38,I,single,male,aged28,adiligentandopen-mindedyoungman,specializeincomputerscienceandapplicationinNanjingUniversity,andawardedM.S.inthecomputerscienceandsoftwaredevelopment.AttheUniversityIrankedtopinlearningscoreandamcapableofcommunicationwithnativespeakersfreelybothinwrittenandspokenEnglish.,-,39,Perhaps,youwillagreethatthesequalificationstogetherwithhighenthusiasm,perseverance,loyaltyanddevotiontoworkwillenablemetobecompetentwiththejobadvertised.ImconfidentthatIwoulddomoreandbetterforyourcompanysexpansionandprosperity.IenclosedaletterofrecommendationbyProfessorZhangHua,anationallyfamouscomputerexpert,andmyaddress.Imlookingforwardtoyourearliestreplyandtoyourkindnesstooffermeanopportunitytobeinterviewed.Mytelephonenumberis.,Dear_Iamapplyingforthepositionof_advertisedin_.Imajorin_.Mytrainingin_definitelymeetyourqualification.Mycompleteresumeisattached.Iwillgraduateon_from_.Inadditiontotherequiredcoursesofthisprogram,Ihave_.Ialsohavesomeexperiencein_.Ibelievemytrainingandexperience_.Youwillfindmetobe_.Ihopethatyouwillconsidermeforyourposition.MayIhaveapersonalinterviewatyourconvenience?Icanbereachedbytelephone_and_.sincerelyyours,-,41,申请信常用句型,Iamwritingtoapplyforthepostofadvertisedin,Inreplytoyouradvertisementin,Ibegtoapplyforthepostof.inyourcompany.,IfeelIhavethenecessaryqualificationsandexperienceneededforthepositionofadvertisedinthepaper.,我认为我具备了报上刊登的贵公司一职所要求的素质和经验,-,42,IhopeImaybegrantedaninterview,whenIcanexplainmyqualificationmorefully.,希望同意面试,届时我可以更充分地说明我的条件.,Ishouldbepleasedtoattendforaninterviewatyourconvenience,whenIcouldgiveyoufurtherdetailsconcerningmyself.,我将乐意在您方便时接受面试,届时我将进一步介绍自己.,-,43,对我来讲,这些经验加上我的学历,使我具备了担任贵公司一职的资格.,Itseemstomethatthisexperience,togetherwithmyeducation,hasgivenmeidealpreparationtoassumetheroleofinafirmsuchasyours.,-,44,我想在贵校系继续深造,我想申请进入贵校,Iwouldliketoapplyforadmissiontoyourcollege.,Iwouldliketofurthermystudiesindepartmentofyouruniversity.,Iwouldgreatlyappreciatereceivingcopiesoftherequiredapplicationformsandanyinstructionsyoumaybesokindastogivemeregardingmypossibleadmission.,如能收到所需的申请表和有关入学的指南我将十分感谢.,-,45,邀请信及答复,ItiswiththegreatestpleasurethatIwritetocordiallyinviteyoutoattendthemeeting.,我怀着极其愉快的心情给您写信,诚恳的邀请您来参加这次会议.,十分高兴能邀请您来参加本次展览,Itgivesmethegreatestpleasuretoinviteyoutovisitthisexhibition.,-,46,WillyouandMrs.GreengivethepleasureofdiningwithusattheBeijingHotelonSunday,ateightoclockp.m.?Wearedelightedtoacceptyourkindinvitationtodinewithyouate.Andarelookingforwardtothateveningwithgreatpleasure.ItisverykindofyoutoaskusdodinnerthiscomingSundayevening.But,toourdeepregret,wecannotacceptit.,-,47,SupposeyouareLi-ming,aforeignfriendofyourshaswrittentoinquireaboutthepossibilityofmakingaten-dayvisitinChina.Writeareplytogivehimsomeinformation.Youshouldwriteaccordingtothefollowingoutline:1.事情的原因2.你对旅行的安排计划及理由3.表达你希望见到朋友的心愿,-,48,Dear:IamdelightedtolearnthatyouplantopayavisittoChinafortendaysinthenextmonth.IthasbeenseveralyearssinceIcamebackfromyourcountry.Inmyopinion,payingavisittoBeijingisyourbestchoice.Ontheonehand,BeijingisthecapitalofChina.Ontheotherhand,Beijingisaplacewheremanyancientdynastieshavelocated.,Astothefamoussites,IsuggestthatyoushouldvisittheGreatWall,HeavenlyTempleforthefirstthreedays,whichmayshowyouarichandsplendidhistoryof2000years.Ifyouareenergeticenough,wecanvisittheSummerPalace.Itisunnecessaryforyoutobringanythingexceptyourcamera.Inaddition,IsuggestthatyoushouldtasteChinesefood.IamsureyouwillhaveaverygoodtimeinChina.Pleaseinformmebeforeyousetoff.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.SincerelyYours,-,50,Nowcollegestudentscometorealizeitisnoteasytogetarewardingjob.Manyofthemcantgetajobrightaftergraduationasshowninthegraph.1.Whatarethecauses?2.Giveyourexplanation,Sample2JobProblemsforCollegeGraduates,-,51,96%,93%,88%,.,.,.,99%,96%,93%,90%,87%,84%,Theclassof1999,Theclassof2000,Theclas