最新高考英语写作专题辅导-基础写作[建议倡议]PPT课件

.,1,.,2,1.covertopicslike.涵盖的主题有2.arouseonesinterest激发某人的兴趣3.getinvolvedin参与，涉及4.bewell-received广受欢迎5.makesomesuggestions提一些建议,相关短语,.,3,6.protectourenvironment保护我们的环境7.theenvironmentalpollution环境污染8.beofgreatbenefitto.对大有好处9.getwell-prepared(for)(为)做好充分的准备10.takeresponsibilitytodosth.有责任做某事,.,4,11.thecomingspeechcontest即将到来的演讲比赛12.leaveadeepimpressionon给留下深刻的印象13.takemysuggestionintoconsideration考虑我的建议14.havethechancetodosth.有机会做某事15.helpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish帮助学生提高英语水平,.,5,1.Themainreasonisthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.其主要原因是父母的压力使他们几乎没有时间参加其他活动。2.ThereasonwhyImlateisthatImissedthebus.我迟到的原因是没赶上公共汽车。,相关句式,.,6,3.Ilikeitverymuchmainlyfortworeasons.我喜欢它,主要有两个原因。4.Inmyopinion,therearethreereasonsforthis.在我看来,有三个原因。5.Myviewsarebasedonthefollowingreasons.我的观点是基于以下理由。,.,7,6.Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.其理由如下。7.SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriendsadvice.因此,我建议你接受你朋友的建议。8.HereIhavesomesuggestions.这里我有几条建议。,.,8,8.Itwouldbebetterifyoucouldsharemoreofthehousework,suchascleaning,washingandcooking.如果你能分担更多的家务,如扫地、洗衣、做饭,那就更好了。,.,9,1.在建议倡议的写作中,应开门见山指出写作目的,陈述建议或倡议的内容。如：Iamwritingtogivesuggestionsabout.(建议信)或Inorderto.,Iamgoingtomakethefollowingsuggestions(倡议书)。,.,10,2.建议倡议类型的作文都有相关的一些固定句型,考生需要熟练掌握使用这些句型和相关的语法。比如,在句中使用到advise,suggest或advice,suggestion等表示建议的词时,要考虑到虚拟语气的使用。,.,11,广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目,新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在,John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。写作内容假如你是学生李华,建议开办“广州全接触”(All-roundGuangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信：,.,12,.,13,DearJohn，IknowyouregoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents.SoImwritingtosuggestaprogram“All-roundGuangzhou”.Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration.Sincerelyyours,LiHua,.,14,例题导写确定文体。建议信属于应用文信件类的范畴,写作的时候一般使用将来时或者一般现在时。建议信在于给对方合理并且能够接受的建议,考生应该注意使用一些委婉的语气。,.,15,信息重组。我们可以把题中信息整合成以下5个汉语句子：1.节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人。2.建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。,.,16,3.建议邀请中学生参加节目,激发学生的收看兴趣。4.这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化,还有助于提高中学生的英语水平,这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。5.我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。,.,17,词语翻译翻译或完成下列词或短语。句1：(1)包括(节目)_(2)历史，教育，景点，饮食，名人_,History,education,scenicspots/touristattractions,food,famouspeople/celebrities,cover/include,.,18,句3：(3)激发某人的兴趣_句4：(4)提高英语水平_句5：(5)受到欢迎_,bepopularamong/withsb./bewell-receivedby/bewelcomedby,spark/stimulate/arouseonesinterest,improveonesEnglish,.,19,难句翻译翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。句2：(1)(这个节目将于)每周六、日(播放)。(1)Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekends./Isuggestthattheprogrambebroadcastonweekends./Itisagoodideatobroadcastitonweekends.,.,20,(2)方便学生周末观看。(2)Westudentscanhavethechancetowatchit./Itwillbeconvenientforusstudentstowatchit.,合并：Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekendssothatwestudentscanhavethechancetowatchit.(因果关系,可以使用so.that.句型),.,21,句3：(3)(你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。(3)Youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedin/takepartintheprogram.(4)(这个节目可以)提高学生的收看兴趣。(4)Itwillsurelyarouse/spark/stimulateotherstudentsinterestinit.,.,22,合并：Youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedin/takepartintheprogram,whichwillsurelyarouse/spark/stimulateotherstudentsinterestinit.(补充说明关系,可以使用which非限制性定语从句),.,23,句4：(5)(这个节目帮助)中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。(5)ThisprogramcangetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhou.(6)(中学生可以)向外国游客介绍广州。(6)ThestudentscanintroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.(7)(这个节目)有助于提高中学生的英语水平。(7)ThisprogramhelpsstudentsimprovetheirEnglish.,.,24,合并：NotonlywillthisprogramhelpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish,butalsogetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhousoastointroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.(第5个句子和第7个句子是并列关系,因此我们可以用notonly.butalso.这组连词把它们连接起来,并且注意统一主语,第6句是作者提出建议的原因,可以用soasto引导出目的状语。),.,25,参考范文DearJohn，IknowyouregoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents.SoImwritingtosuggestaprogram“All-roundGuangzhou”.Thisprogramwillcovertopicslikethehistory,education,famousscenicspots,foodandfamouspeopleofGuangzhou.Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekendssothatwestudentscanhavethechancetowatchit.,.,26,Besides,youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedintheprogram,whichwillsurelyarouseotherstudentsinterestinit.NotonlywillthisprogramhelpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish,butalsogetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhousoastointroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.Iamsureitwillbewell-receivedbythemiddleschoolstudents.Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration.Sincerelyyours,LiHua,.,27,连句成篇。考生把句子合并成篇章的时候,需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的,如：Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon.andIwilltrytomakesuggestions./Thanksfortrustingme./Regarding.,Idliketomakesomesuggestions等句型。在表示建议的时候,考生可以使用Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif./Iwouldliketosuggestthat.等句型。另外,考生若是使用虚拟语气的句子IfIwereyou,Iwould.,也会让文章增色不少。,.,28,能力提高,ToWhomItMayConcernAs1_studentofthisuniversity,Iwouldliketotaketheopportunitytoexpressmyappreciation2_yourkindassistanceasalways.Meanwhile,Ifeelthat3_wouldbe4_(benefit)toexpressmyviews5_(concern)thequalityofthelibraryservice.,concerning,a,for,it,beneficial,.,29,Inthefirstplace,Ifindthatmostkeyboardsofthelibrarycomputersareinpooroperation,6_bringsmuchinconveniencetotheusers.Iwouldalsorecommendthelibrary7_(improve)theefficiencyofbuyingnewbooksandacademicjournals.Last8_notleast,thestudyroomsneedtobefurnished9_abetterlightingsystem.Ihopethatyoutakemysuggestionsintoserious10_(consider).Yourssincerely,John,which,toimprove,but,with,consideration,.,30,假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。,.,31,写作内容1.说明回信的意图；2.向小明提出建议；3.预祝小明比赛成功。DearXiaoming，.Yours，LiHua,.,32,参考范文DearXiaoming,YouhavetoldmethatyouareverynervousaboutthecomingspeechcontestandIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionswhichIhopecanhelpyou.Inmyopinion,youshouldgetwellpreparedbeforethespeechcontestbypracticingbeforeamirror.,.,33,Besides,youhadbetteruseabriefandconciselanguageinyourspeechsothatyoucanleaveadeepimpressiononthejudges.Whenyouaregivingthespeech,remembertokeepsmileandevenifyouforgetyourwords,dontbepanicandjustcontinueyourspeech,becausenoonewillnoticeit.Wishyousuccessinthespeech!Yours，LiHua,.,34,精华点评,建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯,使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者Youshould的句型表示建议,这样比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富,如范文中使用了youshould.,youhadbetter.,remembertodo等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候,可以用简明扼要的句型,如wishyougoodluck/wishyousuccess/mayyousucceed,使文章长短句结合得当。,.,35,由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存,为鼓励大家节能环保,你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动,假设你是高三6班的一名学生,将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容：1.尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式;2.少喝一次瓶装水；,.,36,3.尽量不用一次性制品,如一次性木筷子和塑料袋；4.每周至少手洗衣服一次；5.每周少开手机、电视一天。写作内容1.活动背景;2.倡议目的;3.倡议内容。,Helloeveryone,IamLiHuafromClassSix,SeniorThree.Ibelieveeveryone,asamemberofthisglobalvillage,shouldtakeresponsibilitytotakepartintheglobalgreencampaign!,.,37,参考范文IamLiHuafromClassSix,SeniorThree.Wehumanbeingsareseriouslythreatenedbytheenvironmentalpollution,suchaswastegases,dirtywaterandwhitepollution.Inordertoencourageallofustosaveenergyandprotectourenvironment,Iamgoingtomakethefollowingsuggestions.Itissuggestedthatweshouldwalkortakebikesifwegoout.Toavoidwhitepollution，wecanr