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安徽巢湖市春晖中学2020年高考英语短跑优秀讲义旁批写(21)据报道，报考技术学校的人数比往年大幅增加。请从社会要求和才能概念、待遇报酬等方面分析这一现象。学生习作外国老师改了it is reported that the number of students who enter 1 are entering for vocal schools is larger than ever before。What has2 caused it this3？the main three reasons are as follows:4First，as great changes have taken place in our country since the entrance to WTO，More and More specialized personnel are need . so5 the develonelSecond，as the“knowledge economy”is rapidly taking shape，we need to learn modern science and technology，or we won t surviveThe_last Last but not least，7 the income of A8 specialized personnel is not bad。thanks to the shorage of such personnel in our country，they can get _ well _ paid 9 instead 10 command a better salary。because _ of11 with such good conditions，why not being 12a _ specialized _ personnel learn a specialized skill？旁边放置1.进行中强调继续进行。一般来说，现在意味着不适当的习惯。2.这是现在完成时使用的这个趋势现在仍然存在的标志。3.this把这句话和前面的观点联系起来。4.如果文章的构思和框架明确，就不必这样表达。5.要使文章更完整，可以使用As a result。6.这篇文章冗长，读起来也别扭。请参阅重写的句子。7.正确答案是last but not least。不要在last前面加the。8.personnel是复数名词，不能与a一起使用。9.在口语中有人可以说是getwell paid，章鱼这样写不太正式。请参阅重写的句子。10.不需要称为instead，因为没有引入其他情况。11.because of用于表示原因，此处不说明原因。12.正确的句型是why not do something，动词使用原形。这是一篇更好的作文。论述有力，论据充分。但是作文中有很多错误，有些文章写得不恰当，作文分数也相应降低了。改进建议：正确使用标点符号。不要在不需要句号的地方打句号。另外，应该知道什么时候使用而不是现在，而是现在进行形式。高分作文的秘诀14:尽量不使用直接引语，多用间接引语。例如：Instead of(不要说：)I believe that Reading books is a waste of time because my uncle Tom says so .he always tells me，“reading books is a waste of time”Use(要说：)my uncle Tom often tells me that reading books is a waste of time .I believe that there is some truth in this。Instead of(不要说：)People say，“Internet cafs should be banned”Use(要说：)people believe that internet cafs should be banned。Instead of(不要说：)A person said to me，“don t forget to bring enough food and water”Use(要说：)I was reminded to bring enough food and water。最近全球粮食短缺，价格上涨。在你们学校进行的研究性研究中，你们团队正在以“The World Food Crisis”为主题进行研究。现在请代表你们组用英语向全体同学简要介绍你的研究结果。字数为120左右。参考词汇：粮食产量grain output；城市化城市化；生物燃料生物燃料_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _参考风扇：Hello，everyone！now let me tell you something about our research project the world food crisis on behalf of our group .As we know，food shortcage has hit many countries and even caused social unrest in some areas。but what has caused the current world food crisis？Firstly，annual world grain output had declined because of climate changes。secondly，Lots of farmland has given way to factories and buildings due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization . besides，FacedHow can we deal with the problem？On the one hand，we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology。on the other hand，strict measures