山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作（11）

山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（11）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Mr Wang,Were so pleased that you are willing to sharing your views.In the course of the general revision, what we needed is a chain of knowledge. As you know, we didnt learn well enough in the first two years, but please slow down and make sure we have real mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for us. As for those important points which also make us confusing, would you please give us more practices in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need our instructions, for example, on how to write with natural English. We still have another request: please dont make us do too many homework.By the way, we often feel worried, which has very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.书面表达假设你是李华，你的网友李明来信诉说他英语基础不好，学习很吃力，打算放弃这门学科。请根据以下提示用英语级他回一封e-mail:2. 消极对待英语学习不可取；3. 如何面对英语学习过程中的困难；4. 谈谈你的英语学习方法。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Li Ming,Ive learned from your last letter that you have difficulty in learning English and intend to give it up. I think its unwise to give up this subject. Otherwise, you might be left far behind because English is necessary for us all.Yours,Li HuaDear Mr Wang,Were so pleased that you are willing to sharing your views.shareIn the course of the general revision, what we needed is a chain of knowledge. As you know,needwe didnt learn well enough in the first two years, but please slow down and make sure we havesoreal mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for us. As for thosereally ourselvesimportant points which also make us confusing, would you please give us more practices in caseconfused practicewe forget? Meanwhile, we need our instructions, for example, on how to write with naturalinEnglish. We still have another request: please dont make us do too many homework.muchBy the way, we often feel worried, which has very bad effect on our study. We wouldaappreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.书面表达：One possible version:Dear Li Ming,Ive learned from your last letter that you have difficulty in learning English and intend to give it up. I think its unwise to give up this subject. Otherwise, you might be left far behind because English is necessary for us all.Negative attitudes are bad for your study and sometimes even make you feel depressed. In the face of learning difficulties, what you need to do is calm down and improve your learning methods, as well as ask your teachers for advice.I believe vocabulary is an important part of English, just like a good foundation for a good building. Also, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, Ive learned a lo