山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作（67）

山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（67）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。务必按照以下要求的格式修改，否则不得分。增加：在缺词处加一个下漏词符号（），并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用从左上向右下的斜线（）划掉即可。修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Peter Judd joined in the army when he was eighteen, and for several months he wastaught how to be a good soldier. He did quite good in everything except shooting. Oneday he and his friends were practice shooting, and all of them were doing quite wellbesides Peter. After he had shot at the target nine times and had not hit him once, theofficer who was trying to teach the young soldiers shoot said, “Youre quite hopeless.Peter! Dont waste your last bullet，too! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!”Peter felt shameful. He went behind the wall, and a few seconds later the officer andthe other young soldier heard the sound of a shot.“Heavens!” the officer said, “Has that silly man really shot himself?”He ran behind the wall anxiously, but Peter is all right. “Im sorry, sir.” he said, “andI missed again.”书面表达假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问中国人是如何庆祝国庆的。 请根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。1. 普天同庆：大街小巷及各大商店焕然一新，悬挂中国国旗，有些出租车和私家车也悬挂国旗。2. 庆祝活动：各地电视台推出国庆专题文艺节目，普通社区自发举行各种形式的庆祝活动。3. 休闲度假：国庆期间，人们可以外出旅游，也可以回家与家人团聚等。注意：1. 不要逐字逐句翻译。2. 词数：100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入词数）高考资源网 Jack，You asked me in your letter how people in China celebrate National Day. Let me tell you._In China, National Day is happy time for all the people.Yours,Li Hua短文改错第一行：去掉in第二行：第二个good改为well第三行：practice改为practicing第四行：besides改为except或but；him改为it第五行：shoot前加to第六行：（正确）第七行：shameful改为ashamed第八行：soldier改为soldiers第九行：（正确）第十行：is改为was；and改为but书面表达Dear Jack，You asked me in your letter how people in China celebrate National Day. Let me tell you.National Day is such an important time for Chinese people that it is celebrated all over the country. The streets take on a clear look. Big stores are hanging up national flags and you can even see national flags on some taxies and private cars.All TV stations are bringing entertaining programs about National Day, while ordinary communities create all kinds of activities in celebration of it such as Yangge Dance.People can take leisure holiday during National Day. They may go on a tour, or even travel abroad; they may