增强书面表达的技巧.ppt

EnglishWriting,增强书面表达效果的技巧,HowtowriteanimpressivepassageShizhuangseniorhighschoolMs.Guo,一、比较下面两篇书面表达AWemiddleschoolstudentshavehadmanytestsandexams.Wehaveexperiencedsuccessaswellasfailure.Consideringcarefully,Ithinkwhatmattersisnottheoutcome,buttheattitudestowardstexts,whichhaveagreatinfluenceonit.Themajorityofstudentsbehavepositivelythoughtheyfailed.Thereisnodoubtthatmanyfactorscontributetotheresult.Therefore,theyanalyzethecausesandpolishuptheirstudyskillssothattheycanbuildupconfidence.Besides,theyvaluecorrectingthemistakestheymadeverymuch,whichwillhelpthemachievesuccessinthenextexamination.However,therearesomestudentsshowtheoppositeattitude.Theybecomeupsetandlackofconfidencebecauseoftheshock.Theycantcomeupwithasolutiontotheproblem,onlywaitforothers,takingnoefforts.Itisobviouslythattheycantachievesuccessanymoreduetolackofworkinghard.AsfarasImconcerned,undernocircumstancescanweloseourconfidence.Aswearemiddleschoolstudents,weshoulduseourintelligencetodealwithit.wecantgiveupbeforehavingatry.Asanoldsayinggoes,“wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”.,BWemiddleschoolstudentshavehadmanytestsandexams.Notonlydidwehavesuccessfulexperiences,butalsohavefailed.Facingfailureoftests,differentpeopleholddifferentopinion.Afewpeoplehaveanegativefeelingtowardit.sotheylosethepositiveattitude.Theydontworkhardanymore.Itcausesagreatinfluenceonthemwhohaveanegativefeeling.Butmostofpeoplepossessacorrectattitude.Theyusuallyanalyzewhytheydonthaveasuccess.Andtheyalsolearnharderandhard.Eventually,theyoftenhaveaprogress.Ithinkweshouldbepositivetowardit.itishelpfulforustostudy.Sowecansucceedinthefuture.(105词),Whichoneisbetter?Why?,Conclusion,1:要点全：覆盖了所有要点,2:连贯性强：即过渡词、句的使用。,3:词汇、句型和语法结构的多样化：高级词汇高级句型：定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句特殊句型：强调句、感叹句、倒装句、省略句,增强书面表达效果的技巧,1.高级的词汇,2.丰富的句式,1.既有意义又有挑战beboth_2.给某人最深刻的印象_3.取得显著的进步make_progress4.对充耳不闻_5.感到筋疲力尽_6.在建造当中_7.树立现实的目标set_goals8.激烈的竞争_competition9.很多的作业_homework10.乐于、喜爱take_in,rewardingandchallenging,givesbthedeepestimpression,remarkable,turnadeafearto,feelwornout,underconstruction,realistic,fierce,delight,一.点缀以较高级的词汇,endless,Englishcontest,Smallchangesmakebigdifferences!,1.这是件挺难的工作。Thisisadifficultjob.,Thisisachallengingjob.,2.周末我们会有很多作业要做.,Wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.,Wehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.,3.在我所有的老师里,我仍然记得刘老师。,Ofallmyteachers,IstillrememberMissLiu.,Ofallmyteachers,MissLiugavemethedeepestimpression.,4.他没听我课上讲的东西。HedidntlistentowhatIsaidinclass.,HeturnedadeafeartowhatIsaidinclass.,5.高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingverytired.,Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingwornout.,6.我的家乡正在建造一条铁路。Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.,Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.,7.我过去在中学时喜欢读写诗歌。Iusedtolikereadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.,Iusedtotakedelightinreadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.,1.Thisisarewardingactivity,fromwhichwecanbenefitalot.2.Itmakesgoodsensetotakepartinschoolactivities,whereyoucanmakeasmanyfriendsaspossible.3.Filledwithcourage,wearepreparedforanychallenges,howeverdifficulttheyare.4.Lotsoftouristswillfloodintothisarea,leadingtoheavytrafficandexpensivetickets.5.Funnyasthecartoonis,itisacommonphenomenonintodayssociety.6.Beingagoodlisteneriskindofqualityandthatswhatittakestokeepfriendship.7.Notuntilhereturnedhomedidherealizehisfoolishness.8.Itwasnotuntilhereturnedhomethatherealizedhisfoolishness.,二.使用较丰富的句式,一使用定语从句,1.which/where引导的非限制性定语从句,inwhichcase,asaresultofwhich,二使用分词结构,Facedwith.，Comparedto/with.，Devotedto.，,causing/contributingto/resultingin,(thus)making,三使用一些有力度的状语从句,whetherAorB;whatever;whenever;however;nomatter+疑问词;,四用what名词性从句,AiswhatittakestodoBWhatisknowntoallisthatWhatmattersisthat,倒装句2.强调句3.,五特殊句式,Practice:Translatethefollowingsentences,1.我将努力争取得到一个奖学金，这样的话，我可以减轻父母的负担。,2.形势是如此的严峻，以致我们现在已经到了需要改变的境地。,3.面对能源越来越短缺，我们必须找到这个问题的解决方法。,4.汽车在中国越来越流行，使我们生活更加便利.,Iwilltrytowinascholarship,in_caseIcangreatlyrelievetheburdenonmyparents.,Soseriousisthesituationthatwehavegottoapoint_changesareneeded.,_growingshortagesofenergy,wehavetofindasolutiontothisproblem.,CarsarebecomingincreasinglypopularinChina,_.,which,where,Facedwith,makingourlifemoreconvenient,6.总之，无论有形的还是无形的，这两种关键因素在我们生活中一样是必须的。,7.我确信勤奋是实现我们梦想所赖以需要的东西。,8.任何时候我们都不能以牺牲我们的学习来获得社会经验。,9.我们必须意识到是我们的内在美使得我们更为杰出。,5.几乎所有的城市儿童都能接受正规教育，享有明亮的教室和现代化的设施。,Almostallthecitychildrencanhaveregulareducation,_thebrightclassroomsandmodernfacilities.,Inaword,_,thetwokindsofkeysareequallynecessaryinourlife,Iknowforsurethathardworkis_.,Never_atthecostofourstudies.,Wemustrealizethat_makesusstandout.,enjoying,whethervisibleorinvisible,whatittakestorealizeourdreams,shouldwegainsocialexperience,itisourinnerbeautythat,作为中学生，你经历过多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。请你根据提示内容，简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的态度和理由。,词数：150左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。【参考词汇】对态度：attitudeto/toward分析：analyzeWemiddleschoolstudentshavehadmanytestsandexams.,experiencesuccess,sufferfromfailure,takeanactiveattitude,takeanegativeattitudeto,analyzethereasonsforfailure,improveoneslearningmethod,strengthenonesconfidence,feelsad,loseconfidence,nolongerworkhard,Wehaveexperiencedsuccessandsufferedfromfailure.,Wenotonlyhaveexperiencedsuccessbutalsohavesufferedfromfailure