高考英语作文常用连接词.ppt

书面表达系列讲练之使用衔接词,书面表达评分原则,1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。,第五档.2125分第四档.1620分第三档.1115分,第二档.610分第一档.15分0分,语言地道，规范,覆盖所有内容要点,2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,高考范文对比：根据高考作文的评分标准的五个档次对下面两篇作文进行评分。给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。【Sample1】第_档次Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.,Imverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasreduced.Beforethat,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlythingweshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobeduntil11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Inolongerstayuplate;onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.,【sample2】第_档次高考满分作文,连接（过渡性）词语的分类,PartI【归纳】,一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语aboveall,firstofall,tobeginwith,accordingto,asyouknow/asisknown,asisshownin.,Egs：1.按照调查结果，现在总数已减少到不足1000只。(2013重庆卷满分作文）_aresearch,thetotalnumberisreducedtolessthan1,000now.2.我们大家都知道，好的学习习惯可以提高学习效率。_,goodlearninghabitscontributetoefficientstudy.（四川卷满分作文）3.首先，我认为一个人在国外多交朋友是很重要的。_,Ithinkitimportanttomakemorefriendsabroad.4.正如图画所示，树被大风刮倒了，而小草依然在那里。_,atreeisknockeddownbythestrongwind,whilethegrassstaysasitis.,二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语firstly,then,later,intheend,finally,atlast,afterthat,afterwards,sincethen,immediately,suddenly,meanwhile,Egs:1._,weallenjoyedthebeautyofnature.(江西卷满分作文）同时，我们都欣赏了大自然的美丽2._,Icollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace._Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture._,Isweptandmoppedthefloors.（陕西卷书面表达）首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，接着我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，然后我扫地、拖地。,三、表示并列关系的过渡性词语and,or,also,aswellas,neither.nor.,notonly.butalso.,either.or.,not.but.,Egs：1.Ithinkwewillhaveagoodtimethere_Iwillsendyourphotostakenthere.(山东卷满分作文）我想我们会玩得很愉快，而且我将会把在那里拍的你的照片寄给你。2._，doletmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.（新课标全国卷II）如果你需要其他的信息，也一定要告诉我。3.游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。Swimming_benefitstoourhealth,_developsourstrongwell.4.塑造我们生活的不是我们偶尔做的事情而是我们始终如一坚持的事情。Itis_shapesourlives.,四、表达转折关系的过渡性词语but,yet,however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,ratherthan,insteadof.,Egs：1._,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.(湖南卷满分作文）然而，直到比赛结束我们才意识到我们输了。2._,thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth,sotheyareeagertoexperiencethefuturelifeontheMars.(广东卷满分作文）3.Itisthethoughtfulness_thepricethatmatters.(2014重庆卷写作二）,五、表示因果关系的过渡词语because,as,since,for,thanksto,dueto,asaresultof,so,therefore,asaresult/consequence,forthereasonthat.,Egs：1._,thereisnoreasonforustolookdownuponordinaryjobs.因此，我们没有理由轻视普通的工作。（广东卷书面表达）2._,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas(福建卷书面表达）结果，孩子变得太依赖于父母，以至于他们没有独立的思想和创造性的想法。3.Itisatime-consumingandenergy-consuminghobby_playingcomputergameswillswallowahugeamountofstudentsprecioustime.,六、表达条件关系的过渡性词语if,unless,incase(of),as/solongas,onconditionthat,1.I_youcouldmeethimattheairport.（新课标全国卷I满分作文）如果你能到机场接他，我将不胜感激。2._ourdreams,wewillbecomeawinnersoonerorlater.(湖南卷满分作文）只要我们坚持梦想，我们迟早会成为赢家。,七、表达递进关系的过渡性词语Whatsmore,furthermore,moreover,besides,whatsworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,on(the)onehand.ontheotherhand.,foronething.foranother.,1.Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsandhighways,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears._,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(2015江苏满分作文）2._,Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents,_,Icangainsomeexperiencefromit,whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.(山东卷满分作文）,IntheeveningsIcanwatchnewsonTVorreadnewspapers.Whatsmore,Icangotobedearlier.(NMET2001)Inadditiontomeetingtheneedofmarketsathome,itsproductsareshippedtomanycountries.,八、表示列举事实的过渡性词语suchas,forexample/instance,take.forexample,thatistosay,asfollows,inotherwords,1.Theyareofdifferentshapes,suchasdiamonds,butterflies,flowersandbirds.(新课标全国卷II满分作文）2.Ononehand,IwillorganizesomeEnglishactivities,_,toholdEnglishdebatesorEnglishspeechcontestssoastohelpusstudentsarousetheirinterestinEnglish.(天津卷满分作文）,九，表示观点的过渡性词语inmyopinion,inmyview,inmypointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforme,personally.1._,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.(新课标全国卷满分作文）,十、表示总结性的过渡性词语inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingenera,generallyspeaking,1._,successisimportant,andsoisfailure,becauseitsthemotherofsuccess.(湖南卷满分作文）总之，失败和成功一样重要，因为它是成功之母。2._,travellingisthebestchoicetorechargeourselvesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.总的来说，旅游是充实自己，准备迎接新的挑战的最好的方式。,PartII随堂练习Practice1指出下列表达的不妥之处并改正。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreetwhileheheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacarasaresultIcouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itiswhatyoudoratherthanwhatyousaythatmatteronyourwaytosuccess.4.Notonlywecangodowntownanddosomeshopping,butalsowecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.5.Becauseyou,Ifindithardtotrustnotonlymebuteveryonearoundme.6.AsofficialdatashowedonMondaythat,Chinawassuccessfulinreducingruralpovertylastyearwiththenumberofruralpoorfallingby14.42millionto55.75million.,段落练习：Heworkshard.Heisnotlikelytohaveasuccessfulcareer.Hewillstillbeausefulpersoninthesociety.Heworkshard,butheisnotlikelytohaveasuccessfulcareer.However,hewillstillbeausefulpersoninthesociety.,Practice2：Radioandtelevisioncanbeseeneverywhere._theTVsetismoreusefulthantheradio_onTVyoucanseeandhearwhatishappeningintheworld._,radioisnotdisappearing.Itisstillwithus._thenumberoflistenersisbecominglarger._thetransistor(晶体管)hasbeeninvented,atransistorradioissometimes_small_itiseasytocarry.,But,because,However,And,After,so,that,Youcanputitinyourpocketandlistentoitonthebusoronyourbikewhenyougotowork._,radiobroadcastsarebetterforblindpeople._manyoldpeopledonthavegoodeyesight.TheycantwatchTV,_theycanlistentomusicornewsovertheradio._,radioismuchcheaperthanaTVset.,Besides,And,but,Whatsmore,Practice3七选五(2015新课标I卷范文）Howareyoudoing?Recently,ourschoolnewspaperwillstartedaco