英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)ppt课件

英语写作中几种常见的经典错误,somemistakesweoftenmakeinwriting,.,English?Chinglish?,1.Webecomenowordsdonttalkaboutfriends.,2.HissomebehaviourInotagree.,3.Markgoodorbaddontmeanastudentsgoodorbad,.,Thetasksforthislesson:复合句中缺少必要的连接词2.逻辑性错误3.be动词用错4.主语用错5.Therebe句型用错6.谓语与非谓语混乱,.,1.Youshoulddoistoadjustyourself.(你所应该做的是调整好自己),MydreamisIcanbecomeasupersportstarjustlikeLinshuhao.(我的梦想是成为林书豪一样的运动明星),3.Youcouldsharethehousework,yourmotherwouldfeelmorerelaxed.（你应该分担一些家务，这样你母亲就轻松很多）,一、典型错误1,Whatyoushoulddoistoadjustyourself.,MydreamisthatIcanbecomeasupersportstarjustlikeLinshuhao.,Ifyoucouldsharethehousework,yourmotherwouldfeelmorerelaxed.,在写作中,复合句缺少相应的连接词。,.,Attentions:在学生习作中，常会用到以下几种复合句:,what引导的主语从句/表语从句，what不能省略。,2.that引导的主语从句/表语从句，that虽然没有意思，但不能省略。,3.Whichwho引导的非限制性定语从句。,Translations:最让我们感到不安的是很多人并没有意识到它的严重性。,Whatupsetsusmostisthatmanypeoplearenotawareofitsimportance.,2.我们最好要保持放松,这对我们的学习有积极的影响。,Wehadbetterkeepusrelaxed,whichwillhaveanactiveeffectonourstudy.,.,1.UsingIpodscanlistentomusicandreade-books.(用Ipods可以听音乐和看电子书籍）,UsingIpods,wecanlistentomusicandreade-books.,2.Throughreadingcanobtainvariousknowledge.(通过看书能够获得各种各样的知识),wecanobtainvariousknowledgefromreading.,Readingcanhelpusobtainvariousknowledge.,在写作中,逻辑思维混乱.,二、典型错误2,Ipodscanbeusedtolistentomusicandreade-books.,.,Attention:要想写出逻辑性正确的句子，关键要理清主语和谓语Translations:参加课外活动能结交到更多的朋友。如果能捐赠一些书给这些孩子，他们就能够获得更多的知识。,Takingpartinsomeafter-classactivitiescanmakemorefriends.,Takingpartinsomeafter-classactivitiescanhelpusmakemorefriends.,Ifdonatingsomebookstothesechildren,theycangetmoreknowledge.,Ifwedonatesomebookstothesechildren,theycangetmoreknowledge.,wedonatingsomebookstothesechildren,theycangetmoreknowledge.(独立主格结构）,.,1.Weareoftenblametheteachersfortheirstrictdemands.(我们常常会责备老师的严格要求),are,1.特别提醒:在写作中，谓语务必不能用：be动词+动词原形动词第三人称单数2.Question:什么时候谓语应用上be动词?,三、典型错误3,2.However,otherstudentsagainsttheidea.(然而,其他学生都反对这个观点),Be动词使用不当,.,Attentions:be动词的正确使用1.名词形容词介词短语副词非谓语等不能单独做谓语,应与be动词连用构成谓语.2.be动词还用在被动与进行时中：be+donebe+doing,Translations:我支持他去帮助那些需要的人(infavourof)他代替我们去处理这个问题(insteadof)电视的亮度应调到最低。(turndown),Iinfavourofhimtohelptheneedy.,Iaminfavourofhimtohelptheneedy.,Sheinsteadofustodealwiththisproblem.,Hewilldealwiththisprobleminsteadofus.,TheTVsbrightnessshouldturndowntotheminimum.,TheTVsbrightnessshouldbeturneddowntotheminimum.,.,主语用错:受汉语影响，学生会直接用动词原形作主语。受汉语影响，在学生习作中常会出现“无主语”的句子。,1.playcomputergamescanleadtonearsightedness.(常玩游戏能导致近视.),playingcomputergamescanleadtoNearsightedness.,2.Toexploreanewwaytoimprovethepeopleslivingconditions.(要探索新的途径以改善人民的居住条件。),weshouldexploreanewwaytoimprovethepeopleslivingconditions.,四、典型错误4,.,Translations:1.定期锻炼有助于保持身体健康。2.应该去帮助那些需要帮助的人。,Attentions:1.在写作中，要用动词作主语时，务必应用()2.在写作中，务必要根据句子的逻辑含义和结构，添加相应的（）。,主语,doingtodo,Takingsomeregularexerciseisofbenefittoourhealth.,Weshouldgiveahelpinghandtotheneedy.,.,1.大约有80%的高三学生希望周末不要补习。,Thereareabout80%studentsinSenior3hopethattheydonthavetotakelessonsafterschool.,About80%studentsinSenior3hopethattheydonthavetotakelessonsafterschool.,2.在我们班上有38个学生要参加明年的高考。,Thereare38studentsinourclasstakethecollegeentranceexaminationnextyear.,Thereare38studentsinourclasstotakethecollegeentranceexaminationnextyear.,五、典型错误5,therebe句型问题:受汉语影响，学生常会滥用therebe句型。不会使用“therebe+非谓语”的结构。,.,Attention:Therebe+,doing,todo,done,Translations:,1.只有5%的学生喜欢上英语课。,2.我认为有两个因素导致了这个现象。,Only5%studentsarefondofEnglishlessons.,Iholdtheideathattherearetwofactorsleadingtothephenomenon.,.,Weshouldplantmoretreesandflowersinourschool,notthrowlittersaround.(我们应该在在学校种更多的花草树木,不要乱扔垃圾)WhilehewatchingTV,heneverturningonthelights.(他看电视的时候,从来不开电灯),谓语与非谓语混乱,六、典型错误6,Weshouldplantmoretreesandflowersinourschool,notthrowinglittersaround.,WhilewatchingTV,heneverturnsonthelights.,.,Attentions:1.简单句中没有连接词不能出现多个谓语2.doingtodo不能用作谓语,Translation:1.我们捐赠一些学习用品(schoolsupplies)给那所学校，希望能帮助到那些孩子。2.他骑自行车去上班，没有开车。,Wedonatedsomeschoolsuppliestotheschool,hopewecouldhelpthechildren.,Wedonatedsomeschoolsuppliestotheschool,hopingwecouldhelpthechildren.,Herideshisbicycleg