读后续写PPT课件

10月考读后续写,1,.,Steps步骤：,B,Predicting,charactersplottheme,sortoutkeyinformation,properlanguage,2,.,Characters,Jack-Linda-,Jackswifeneedmoneyforoperation,aclerkatthelocalbankplanatheft(n偷盗),3,.,Plot,HowdidJacksteal?Didhesucceed?,Thenextday,hewenttoworkasusual.Everythingseemednormal:hejokedwithhisworkmatesandhelpedhisclientsashealwaysdid.Butnoonenoticedthathehadbroughtabiggersuitcasetowork,insteadofthesmallonehealwayscarried.At5:00pm,thebankclosed,andtheclerksandtheguardshadallgonehome.However,atthatmoment,Jackwasinthebathroom,andtheguardsdidntnoticehim,ofcourse.Whenthenoisescomingfromthestreetwerereplacedbysilenceandeverythingturneddark,Jackcameoutfromthebathroom.Hefirstcutthelinesofthealarmsandmonitorswithtoolsfromhisnewsuitcase.Hewasalltoofamiliarwiththeequipmentsincehehadbeenworkingtherefor8yearsandhadbeenstudyingthesecuritysystemforthepast30days.Usingaspecialkeyandsomeothertools,hetheneasilyopenedthedoorsofthesafes.Thebankssecuritysystemwasntverygood,whichallowedJacktotakealotofmoney.Severalminuteslater,Jackleftthebankwithaheavybagfilledwithmoney.,4,.,Plot,HowdidJacksteal?Didhesucceed?,Thenextday,hewenttoworkasusual.Everythingseemednormal:hejokedwithhisworkmatesandhelpedhisclientsashealwaysdid.Butnoonenoticedthathehadbroughtabiggersuitcasetowork,insteadofthesmallonehealwayscarried.At5:00pm,thebankclosed,andtheclerksandtheguardshadallgonehome.However,atthatmoment,Jackwasinthebathroom,andtheguardsdidntnoticehim,ofcourse.Whenthenoisescomingfromthestreetwerereplacedbysilenceandeverythingturneddark,Jackcameoutfromthebathroom.Hefirstcutthelinesofthealarmsandmonitorswithtoolsfromhisnewsuitcase.Hewasalltoofamiliarwiththeequipmentsincehehadbeenworkingtherefor8yearsandhadbeenstudyingthesecuritysystemforthepast30days.Usingaspecialkeyandsomeothertools,hetheneasilyopenedthedoorsofthesafes.Thebankssecuritysystemwasntverygood,whichallowedJacktotakealotofmoney.Severalminuteslater,Jackleftthebankwithaheavybagfilledwithmoney.,Withfullpreparation,Jackmanagedtostealalotofmoneywithoutbeingnoticed.,5,.,underlinedwords,wife;money;operation;suffering;thebank;theft;suitcase;theclerks;theguards;thesecuritysystem,sortout,characters:place:others:,wife,thebank;,money;operation;sufferingtheclerks;theguards;thesecuritysystem;theft;suitcase,6,.,Keyinformation,Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarms(警报器)begantoring.,WasJackcaughtimmediately?notverylikelyWhatwouldhappenafterthealarmsrang?Thetheftcausedgreatattentionfrompeople.WhatwouldJackdo?,7,.,Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.,Whywashethemostunluckyman?Asamanagerofthebank,whatwouldhappentohim?betoblame;beremovedfromthepositionHowdidJackfeel?ashamed;guiltyWhatstheresult?Jacktellthetruth;bepunishedLinda?,8,.,Jack:workasusualfeltguiltytellthetruthbepunishedmanager:betoblameberemovedfrom/befiredLinda:besaved/die,9,.,存在问题,逻辑混乱，与上文不符脑洞乱开-Para.2，无视首句话信息人物关系不明，节外生枝缺乏常识无视法制个别关键词理解不到位-alarm,manager,unlucky语言表达不清几句话说不到重点；情节主线不清，顺序混乱；语言错误影响整体表达,10,.,未明确说明manager的不幸结果Jack心安理得逃脱法网，不符合价值观,11,.,Jack按理已经离开一段时间了，与上文不符,12,.,13,.,情节基本清楚，符合基本逻辑，语言虽有错误，尚不影响整体表达。,14,.,Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.Thepolicearrivedatthebankveryquickly,onlytofindnoonethere.Thenextdaywasareallyspecialdayforthetown,whichwasfilledwithnewspaperandTVreporterscoveringthestrangetheft.Theclerksatthebankwerebusydiscussingthecase,ofcourse,includingJack.Thepolicecouldonlypromisetocatchthethievesassoonaspossible,eventhoughnoclueshadbeenfoundyet.,15,.,Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.Heseemedtobetheonlypersontoblameandwasremovedfromhisposition.Atlast,withenoughmoneyforheroperation,Jackswifewa