作文评讲课---演讲稿 写作---张莉.ppt

写作（演讲稿）,高三英语组：张莉,课程安排：,1.讲评考试作文题目及写作技巧；2.当堂评改学生考试过程中所写作文；3.范文示例；4.类似题材分析；5.尝试写作；6.点评范文。,题目要求(2011江西高考)假设你是成都七中（星光中学）的李华，将参加主题为“LetsRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。,参考词汇：低碳生活lowcarbonlife节能energysaving注意：1.词数：120词左右；2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromChengduNo.7HighSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“LetsRideBicycles”_Thankyou!,技法指导演讲稿是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体，它是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。写好演讲稿，应注意以下三点：1格式演讲稿一般由三部分组成，即：称呼语(Greetings)、正文(Body)和结束语(Closing)。常见的称呼语有Ladiesandgentlemen,Friends,Boysandgirls等，一般称呼语前不使用Dear。,2内容演讲稿的主题部分应该阐述清楚事情的缘由、结果和要求。第一部分的内容应该以详细完整地介绍事情为主，具体地讲，包括事情的发生、发展及结局。第二部分的内容应该提出发言稿的主题，如欢迎、欢送、号召、建议、个人看法等。,3语言演讲稿以简单句为主要的表达形式。同时，演讲稿的语言必须有感染力，所以演讲稿可以使用祈使句、感叹句、强调句等句式来达到这种目的。写作时要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境。,第一步构建框架，清晰行文谋篇布局第二步打造亮句，增色文章第三步串句成文，保证流畅,第一步构建框架，清晰行文谋篇布局,黄金模板Boysandgirls/Ladiesandgentlemen,Itsagreathonorformetostandhereandgivemyspeech.Mynameis_(自我介绍).Thetopicofmyspeechis_(发言主题),Tobeginwith,manypeoplesuggestthat.Secondly,.Thirdly.(话题或现象列举)WhatIwanttostressisthat_(重申主题).Foronething,.Foranother,.Besides,.(原因或重要性列举).Inaword,_(总结)Thankyouforyourlistening./Thankyou.,第二步打造亮句，增色文章1我认为，骑自行车是一个好的解决办法。Inmyopinion,itisagoodsolutiontoridebicycles.AsfarasImconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.,2众所周知，随着人们生活水平的提高，汽车已经成为一种很受欢迎的交通方式。Itsknowntoall/thatwiththeimprovementofpeopleslivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport.Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeopleslivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport.,第三步串句成文，保证流畅LetsridebicyclesHelloeveryone,Imlihuafromchengdumiddleschool,Imgladtostandhere,andthetopicofspeechisletsridebicycles.Asweallknow,withthesteadygrowthofpeopleslivingstandards,peoplehaveenoughmoneytopayforcars.Thatbringmoreconvenienceforus.Butcarsalsobringsomebadproblemstous.Forexample,themorecarsinlifethemorecrowdedinlife,whichiseasytocausetrafficjams.Whatsmore,carsnotonlycauseairpillutionbutalsoruinourhealth.,Whataseriousproblemis,andhowtosolveit.AsfarasImconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodway.Withthegloblewarmingsothatweshouldlearntoenergysavingandlow-carbonlife.Ridingbicyclescandoit.Inaddition,ridingbicyclescankeepourfitandreducetrafficjams.Itsalsohelpusdomoreexersisetokeephealth.Soletsridebicyclestoprotectourhomes.Imlookingforwardtoyoujoiningus.,范文示例：Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromChengduNo.7HighSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“LetsRideBicycles”.Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeopleslivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.,Howcanwesolvetheseproblemsthen?AsfarasImconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicyclesdontneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywontgiveoffwastegas.Whatsmore,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisbeneficialtoourhealth.Therefore,letstaketheresponsibilitytobuildupalowcarboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!Thankyou!,典题示例(2010四川)假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。1过去对成年的向往；2现在的感受和认识；3将来的目标及措施。参考词汇：责任responsibility,注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。Goodmorning,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Thoughtsonbecomingagrownup”_Thankyouforlistening.,写作点拨：这是一篇演讲稿体裁的半开放式作文。命题者从“过去现在将来”三个时间阶段出发，给考生一个自由发挥的空间，并考查学生灵活转换时态的能力。写作时要避免逐词逐句翻译，除了语言基本功外还要注意好句子的运用，出一些闪光点。写作要点1.梦想着做某事：dreamofdoing2.表达目标：aimto/mypurposeisto.3.有的责任：haveresponsibilityfor.,写作范文:Goodmorning,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Thoughtsonbecomingagrownup”Asachild,IalwayshopedthatIcouldgrowupassoonaspossiblesothatIcouldhavewhateverIwantedanddowhateverIliked.NowImagrownup,butIfindthingsdonotgoasIexpected.AlthoughIcanenjoymorefreedom,atthesametimeIrealizethatbeingagrownupnotonlymeansthis,butalsomoreresponsibilities.Ihopetodomoreformyparentsandsocietyinthefuturetomakemylifemoremeaningful.Toreachthegoal,Imustfirsttrymybesttopassthecollegeentranceexaminationandenteragooduniversity.Thankyouforlistening.,(2012日照模拟)假定你是某学校学生会主席，你校将选拔学生参加模特大赛。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿，谈谈你的看法，并鼓励大家积极参与。1实现梦想；2学会生活；3促进学习。,注意：1.词数120150；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。Goodmorning,everyone!Itsknownthatourschoolwillchoosesomestudentstoattendthemodelcontest.Inmyopinion，-Thankyouforlistening.,参考范文：Goodmorning,everyone!Itsknownthatourschoolwillchoosesomestudentstoattendthemodelcontest.Inmyopinion,itsagoodideaforusstudentstoenterforthemodelcontest.Someofusarefondoffashionandmodeling.Wewanttobefashiondesignersorprofessionalmodels.Wemaywellseizetheopportunitytomakeourdreamscometrue.,Besides,notonlydoweshowourfiguresandintelligenceonthestage,butwealsolearnhowtobeindependent,howtobehaveinsocietyandwhattodoforotherswhile