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2014高考作文新题型读写任务,2014高考作文新题型读写任务,ComparisononwritingrequirementsforNMET,2013书面表达要求要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的，对象、时间、地点、方位、关系、内容、数据等；提供情景的形式如图画、图表、提纲、信函。考生应能：（1）根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法，选用恰当的词汇；（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。,2014书面表达要求要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文。情景的形式包括图表、图画、提纲、信函、短文等。考生应能：（1）根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法，选用恰当的词汇；（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想。,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。,Tomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasant，notnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman，whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheoffice，mayworkhardattheweekend，paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.Whatisthereason，then?Inmostcases，itisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasy，likemakingupwoodenboxes，butitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargerone，suchasattachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversay：Ihavemadesomething!Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.Nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.,写作内容1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：(1)描述清洁工工作的艰辛；(2)假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？(3)你对平凡工作的看法。写作要求1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。,2014高考作文新题型读写任务,Definitionofsummary,Summary:ashort,cleardescriptionthatgivesthemainfactsorideasaboutsomething,withoutgivingallthedetails.,aneffectivesummary,writer.,Tomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasant，notnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman，whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheoffice，mayworkhardattheweekend，paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.Whatisthereason，then?Inmostcases，itisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasy，likemakingupwoodenboxes，butitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargerone，suchasattachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversay：Ihavemadesomething!Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.Nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.,Summarizethepassage:,Purpose:toraisepeoplesawarenessoftheimportanceofordinaryjobs;tocallonpeopletorespectsuchjobsandthepeopleinvolved.,topic/fact:peopledislikejobs,reason/fact:smallboringjobsbringsnosatisfaction,authorscomments:ordinaryjobsarenecessaryandimportant;deserverespect,Twobasicelementsofasummary,SummaryPair1,AManypeoplewhoarelazyfeelunpleasantwiththeirjobs,whichtheydislike.Forthereasonthatjobsarequiteeasybutboring,peoplecouldntbegivenenoughsatisfaction.Theyalwaysholdtheviewthattheyshoulddosomethinguncommon.(43words),BToday,manypeoplethinktheyarenotpleasedwiththeirjobsforthereasonthatthejobisdullandboring.Buttheyplayanimportantroleinourlifeandtheyareworthrespecting.(36words),misunderstanding;missingthekeypoint!,SummaryPair2,APeoplemayshowgreatinterestintheirjobsaftertheygraduatedfromuniversities.However,astimeflies,theywillgettiredoftheirjobs.Arethesejobsnotsuitableforthem?Arethesejobssoboring?Maybetheanswersare“No”.(2p./46words),BAsisshowninthepassage,peopleareboredwithordinaryjobsbecausesuchjobsbringnosatisfaction.However,ordinaryjobsalsomatteralotinourdailylife.Thepeopledoingordinaryjobsareworthytoberespected.(40words),misunderstanding;unnecessarydetailedinformation;missingthekeypoint.,SummaryPair3,ATosomepeople,theyarenotsatisfiedwiththeirjobsbecausetheythinktheirjobsaretooordinaryforthemtospendtimeon.Yetordinaryjobsarealsoveryimportanttooursocietyandtheydeserveourrespect.(40words),BDoingordinaryjobswhicharecalled“dullandboring”,moreandmorepeoplebecomelessinterested.Whatmakesthemfeelboredisthelackofsatisfaction.(30words),missingthekeypoint,SummaryPair4,AAsisshowninthepassage,manypeopledisliketheirjobsinthefactoryorevenintheoffice.Theythinkalthoughtheirjobsarequiteeasy;theyareveryboring,becausethejobsaretooordinary.(37words),BManypeopledisliketheirjobsinthattheythinktheirjobsaretooboringtomakesomethinggreat.However,theseordinaryjobsplayanimportantroleinmakingsocietyabetterplacetoliveinandtheyshouldberespected.(40words),notbrief;missingthekeypoint.,SummaryPair5,AAccordingtothereport,wecanachieveainformationthatmanypeoplenotworkhard.Mostofthemdisliketheirjobsinthefactoryorevenintheofficebecausethesepeoplesimplydontenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Thereportalsotellussocietycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.(62words),BWhatthetexttalksaboutisordinaryjobs.Manypeopledislikesuchjobsbecausetheyaretooboringtobringpeoplesatisfaction.However,the“dullandboring”jobshavegreatvalueinoursociety.(37words),toolong;manyspellingandgrammarmistakes;copying;,SummaryPair6,AConsideredas“dullandboring”,ordinaryworkmaymakepeopleunpleasant.Whatcontributesmostlytothephenomenonisthesepeopleslackofsatisfaction.However,nomatter,itisvitalthatweshouldrespectourjobsnomatterhowordinarytheyare.(47words),BAsisshowninthisarticle,manypeopledontlikeanordinaryjobintheirlife.Theyalwaysthinktheirjobscannotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.However,Ithinktheirattitudeaboutjobsareveryridiculous.(40words),missingthekeypoint;givingpersonalviews,Summaryforreference,Thoughmanypeoplefindtheirjobboring,smallandunsatisfying,ordinaryjobslikecleaningstreetsarenecessaryandimportantinmodernsociety.Andthesejobsareworthrespecting.(28words),Tipsforsummarizing,Questions:1)Whatsthetopicandthemainideaforeachparagraph?2)Whatstheauthorsattitude?3)Whatstheauthorspurpose?(toinformortopersuade,etc.)Attention:Omitspecificdetails,suchasillustrations,descriptions,anddetailedexplanations;Eliminateallunnecessarywordsandrepetitions;Eliminateallyourpersonalideas;Setalimittothenumberofyourwords.,2014高考作文新题型读写任务,Appreciation,Someofyourfantasticexpressions,Someofyourfantasticexpressions:aboutthehardship,Nomatterhowbadtheweatheris,theyhavetosticktotheirpost,cleaningthestreets.Tiredandbored,theonlythingtheycandoiscleanthestreets.,Someofyourfantasticexpressions:abouttheimportance,Weretherenocleaners,disgustingsmellwouldsurroundus.Weretherenocleaners,ourstreetswouldbeinamess.Chancesarethattheriverswillbepollutedandfullofrubbish.Withadirtyenvironment,viruscanspreadeasily.Itisthesesimplejobsthatprovideuswithaharmonioussociety.,Someofyourfantasticexpressions:aboutyourpersonalviews,Inconclusion,ordinaryjobsplayimportantrolesinoursocietyanddeserveourrespect.Itsimportantforustoreflectonourattitudetoordinaryjobs.Ordinaryjobscanprovideuswithjoy.Itsourattitudetojobsthatreallycounts.AsfarasIamconcerned,boringasthejobsare,oursocietycouldntfunctionwellwithoutthem.Undernocircumstancesshouldwediscriminatethepeoplewhotakeonordinaryjobs.Theirjobsareholy.Whatweneedtodoistorespectthemandtheirjobs.,Someofyourfantasticexpressions:aboutyourpersonalviews,Ifwelikeourjobs,ordinaryjobscanbringushappinessaswell.Onlyinthismannercanourworldbecomeincreasinglybeautiful!Iholdthebeliefthateachkindofjobisofimportancetomakeoursocietyfunctionwell.Wearesupposedtorespectthosewhodotheirjobswhole-heartedly.Atthesametime,weshouldenjoyourownjobsevenifitisanordinaryone.,Improvement,Trytocorrectandimproveyourexpressions,Someexpressionstobeimproved:aboutthehardship,Whenwearehavinglessons,heiscleaningthetoiletalone.Andwhenweareenjoyingourselves,hesatonthefloorandsmoking.Improved:hesatonthefloor,smoking.Somepeoplemaylookdownuponthecleaners,buthavetheyeverimaginedhowourcitywillbewithoutcleaners?Improved:howthecitywouldbelikewithoutcleaners?,Someexpressionstobeimproved:abouttheimportance,Justbecauseoftheseordinaryworkers,wecanenjoyourlives.Improved:Thankstotheseordinaryworkers,weEverybeautifulcitymayloseitsgoodappearanceandtheenvironmentbecomenotfitpeopletolive.Improved:andtheenvironmentwontbesuitableforpeopletolivein.Iftherewerenocleaners,Icannotimaginewhatourenvironmentwillbe.Improved:Icannotimaginewhatourenvironmentwouldbelike.Iftherewerenocleaners,ourworldwouldbefilledwiththingsabandoned,smellbad.Improved:,ourworldwouldbefilledwiththingsabandoned,smellingbad.,Someexpressionstobeimproved:aboutyourpersonalview,Ibelievethatmoreandmorepeoplearecontenttodoordinaryjobsandmoreandmoreharmonioustheworldwillbe.Improved:Ibelievethemorepeoplearecontenttodoordinaryjobs,themoreharmoniousthewouldbe.Whatweneedtodoistorespectalldevotetheireffortstoordinaryjobs.Improved:(1)Whatweneedtodoisrespectalldevotingtheireffortstoordinaryjobs.(1)respectalldevotedtoordinaryjobs.,Someexpressionstobeimproved:aboutyourpersonalview,Morethanksshouldwegivethemfortheirdevotiontoourearth.Improved:(1)Morethanksshouldbegiventothemfortheirdevotiontoourenvironment.(2)Wecannotthankthemtoomuchfortheirdevotiontoourearth.,Tipsforbetteringexpressions,Polishourexpressionsby:Using“withn.doing/done/adj.”Using“itis/wasthat”Usinginversionlike“undernocircumstances,only+adverbial,”Usingnon-finiteverblike“doing;done;todo”Usingsubjunctivemood,like“ifdid/were,would/could”Usingfixedphraseslike“stickto;reflecton;providewith;chancesarethat”Usingcomplexsentences,includingnounclause,attributiveclauseandadverbialclause.,Aversionforyourreference,Thoughmanypeoplefindtheirjobsboring,smallandunsatisfying,ordinaryjobslikecleaningstreetsarenecessaryandimportantinmodernsociety.Andthesejobsareworthrespecting.Astheauthormentionedinthepassage,cleaningthestreetsisakindofordinaryj