英语人教版八年级下册英语写作.ppt

英语写作-写人篇Letsgoforit!,蠡县蠡吾镇三中白桂香,写人篇:写一篇描述人的外貌(look)、性格（characters）、爱好（hobbies）的文章,1.Whatdoeshe/shelooklike?,thin,heavy/fat,Whatdoeshelooklike?,shorthair,longhair,Whatdoeshelooklike?,Wordcollection:,描述外貌的单词：short,tall,thin，beofmediumheight，strong,good-looking,nice,slim苗条描述穿着的短语：wearaT-shirt,wearapairofglasses描述性格的单词：lazy,quiet,friendly,shy,kind-hearted善良的,polite有礼貌的，strict严厉的,out-going外向的描述爱好的短语：likereading,liketohelpothers,likeeating,likeplayingsoccer描述爱好的句型：IlikedoingMyhobbyisdoing,Task1:根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词,开头已经给出。,开头：MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.He,例文:MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.Heisa15-year-oldboy.Heistallandthin.HehasblackhairandhelikeswearingshortsandT-shirts.Helooksverycute.Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenbest.Hisfavoriteclassesarescience,artandP.E.Helikeslittleanimals.Heoftenplayswithhisgoodfriendsatschoolandhelpsothers.Heisverypoliteandkind-hearted.Heisagoodboy.Ilikehimverymuch.,Writingskills（“写”的技巧）,方法一:善用词汇尤其高级词汇,Whichisbetter?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。,AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.,AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.,我认为学英语很有趣。,我们应该保护环境。,AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BItsourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.,方法二:活用多种句型,Writingskills（“写”的技巧）,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,ASheisveryyoung.Shecantcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecantcarrytheDSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe,方法三:妙用关联词,Writingskills（“写”的技巧）,1.表示并列或递进:and,bothand,whatsmorenotonlybutalso,neithernor2.表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,afterall4.表示因果:because,so,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,notbut,ontheonehandontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:first,second,next,then,finally,tobeginwith,first(ofall),later,sincefromthenon,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,infact10.表示结论:allinall,inaword,inshort,关联词(connectionwords),Letstry,_Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidntgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert_.Welikedoingkindsofsports_swimming,runningandhiking._,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._,hewentback._,hesmiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAtlast,方法四：巧加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”开头“和”结尾“，多用后者。,锻炼对学生有好处,Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise,Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.,集中注意力于学习,Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.,Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.,加谚语(Proverb/saying),加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.,Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.,加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。,加谚语(Proverb/saying),Enjoysomesayings谚语分享,1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.三思而后行。3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。4.DoastheRomansdo.入乡随俗。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。,方法五:妙用例子（多用于“thebody”）,Writingskills（“写”的技巧）,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。,Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.,Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.,加例子,加例子,在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。,Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.,为文章润色：MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.Heisa15-year-oldboy.Heistallandthin.HehasblackhairandhelikeswearingshortsandT-shirts.Helooksverycute.Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenbest.Hisfavoriteclassesarescience,artandP.E.Helikeslittlean