作文专题-副本.ppt

Writing,中考英语作文专题,ShangmeiMiddleSchoolLuoYi,Whatkindofcompositionshaveyouwritten?,Mynewfriend,MissLuo30yearsold158cmOutgoing2-year-oldsonLikeplayingchessCansinganddancewell,以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文.(10分)提示如下：1孙老师，25岁，1.65米,打扮入时。2关心热爱学生。3教学方法生动有趣。4与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎。,WRITING,MyEnglishTeacher,MissSunisweEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Shehas1.65meterstall.Sheisveryfashionable.Sheloveherstudents.Shecareforus.Herlesonsisinterestedandlively.MissSungetinwellwithwe.Sheisverypapular.Weallverylovesheandherteaching!,Correct,our,is,loves,cares,lessons,are,interesting,gets,us,popular,loveherandherteachingverymuch!,on,Avoidsomecommonlanguagemistakes：,1.Mistakesintenses(时态错误),2.Chinglish（中式英语）,3.Wrongspellings（拼写错误）,4.Wrongusagesofprepositions，pronouns,nonfiniteverbs,adjectivesandadverbs.（介词,代词，非谓语动词、形容词、副词的错误使用）,5.Nodistinguishingbetweensingularnounsandpluralnouns.（名词单复数）,娄底市中考英语写作评分标准,书面表达题评分档次和标准第一档（8-10分）要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。只有个别语言错误。第二档(5-7分)要求：内容涵盖2-4个要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有一定数量的语言错误。第三档(0-4分)要求：内容涵盖了1-2个要点，能写出少量正确句子，但整体表达不连贯，且语言错误较多；或只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺乏逻辑性，错误很多；或只抄写英语提示的。说明：1.如书写较差，以致影响交际的，扣1分。2.单词拼写错误，每个扣0.25分，同一错误不重复扣分。不影响表意的拼写错误可不扣分。,Fullmarkscomposition,MyEnglishTeacher,MissSun,ourEnglishteacher,is25yearsold,and1.65meterstall.Sheisveryfashionable.Shealwayswearsbeautifulclothes.Sinceshelovesusandcaresaboutourneeds,sheisveryhelpfulinourdailylife.Notonlyisshehelpfulinlife,butalsoherteachingmethodsarespecial.Forexample,sheknowshowtomakeherlessonslivelyandinteresting,andwearecrazyaboutherlessons.Besides,MissSungetsonwellwithusandsheisverypopularwithstudents.Inaword,MissSunisasuccessfulteacher,andweallloveherandherteaching!,Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition?,Step1：要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点,Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition?(Haveadiscussion!),具体做法：找出要点,Step2：列出写作提纲（Outline）。,具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏每一个要点！,Thesteps：1Examine审题：审清作文体裁、时态、人称等细节；2Outline列提纲：文章结构框架；InawordExaminethreetimes(三审)：体裁、时态、人称；Thinkthreetimes(三思)：词汇短语句式；Checkthreetimes(三查)：要点、拼写和语法、字数。,3Write写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；,4Check复查：2遍第1遍看查拼写、语法、字数等问题；第2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；,5Copy誊抄：不做任何的更改，工整地抄在答卷上。,Topic1：Howcanwedescribeaperson?,Describingapersonshouldinclude:,1.Appearance(Whatdoeshe/shelooklike?),shorttall,fat,thin,beautiful,ugly,andsoon,2.Hobby(Whatdoeshe/shelike?),swimming,singing,dancing,playingtheguitar,playingcomputergames,playingbasketball,playingchess,3.Character(Whatishe/shelike?),shy,strict,friendlyeasy-going,4.Achievement(Whatishe/she?),asuccessfulman,arichboss,agreatmother,agoodteacher,Letspractice!,Talkaboutaperson,Youcantalkaboutyourfather,yourmother,yourbestfriend,yourgrandfather,yourgrandmother,Letswrite!,假设你是LiMing，请给你的美国笔友Tom写一封email，介绍你的数学老师Mr.Lee。要点如下：(1)他40岁，有一个幸福的家；(2)性格外向，与学生相处很好；(3)他的课堂很有趣，课后常帮我们学数学；(4)不抽烟，非常喜欢运动，擅长下棋；(5)写一至两点其他同学对他的看法。注意：(1)词数6080，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(2)文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。参考词汇：outgoingadj.外向的；smokev.吸烟；chessn.棋DearTom，Howareyourecently?NowIlltellyousomethingaboutmymathteacherMr.Lee._Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiMing,Letsenjoyourowncompositions!,Fullmarkscomposition,DearTom，Howareyourecently?NowIlltellyousomethingaboutmymathteacherMr.Lee.Mr.Leeisfortyyearsold.Hehasahappyfamily.Hesoutgoingandgetsalongwellwithusstudents.Hisclassesareveryinteresting.Afterclass,heoftenhelpsuswithourmath.Heneversmokes.Helikessports.Heisespeciallygoodatplayingchess.Mostofmyclassmateslikehimandthinkthathesnotonlyagoodteacherbutalsoagoodfriend.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiMing,组段成篇，加主题句,审清题意，构建框架,连词成句，变换句式,抓住要点，列关键词,Summarize,集句成段，添连接词,抄写规范，避免错误,Th