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1、ks5u3年高考2年模拟1年原创精品系列专题23书面表达【2017年高考命题预测】预测一话题与考生的生活实际、社会热点内容密切相关。书面表达提供的写作情景比较真实，写作的话题与考生的校园生活、成长经历、社会热点及科技动态等内容密切相关，关注考生的情感、态度和价值观，能够充分考查考生的独立思考能力和创新精神。预测二书面表达的词数仍将保持100词左右。虽然部分地区的高考试卷要求考生写一篇120词左右的英语作文，考生要在文章的结构、段落的衔接和过渡等方面花费更多的心思和笔墨。预测三 写作的开放度可能加大。高考英语书面表达写作要求也呈现了开放的趋势，这使考生的写作内容受到的限制减少，并为考生提供了一个

2、更加自由和开放的写作空间。【ks5u考点定位】2017考纲解读和近几年考点分布英语考试大纲对学生的书面表达能力作了明确的规定：“要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。”高中英语课程标准也对写作作了必须要达到的要求：1.能通过文字及图表提供的信息进行简单描述；2.能写出常见体裁的应用文，如信函和一般通知等；3.能描述人物或事件并进行简单的评论；4.能填写有关个人情况的表格，如申请表等；5.能以小组形式根据课文改编短剧。书面表达是考查考生用英语表达自己思想的能力，即运用所学的英语知识及合乎英语习惯的表达方

3、式来传递信息，进行思想交流的能力。这将要求考生根据所给的情景和要求，在限定时间内(一般30分钟)写出100个词左右的书面材料。因此考生要做到：审题正确、要点全面，能够运用所学的语法结构、词汇知识，使上下文连贯，同时语言要准确、得当，条理清楚，书写规范。所以，具有良好的书面表达能力是非常必要的，它也进一步突出了对考生创新能力的考查。一、命题多样化虽然每年的书面表达都属于提高性写作，但越来越重视创造情景，命题由单纯的汉语提为主、其他提示（如：图表）为辅。考生必须首先理解写作提示，然后才能组句成文。二、书面表达的体栽呈现多样化，为应用文(书信、通知、便条等)、记叙文图表作文、 日记等)和说明文(人物

4、介绍、活动介绍)三、试題突出了交际性、实用性书面表达的内容主要取材于校园、家庭生活和一般外事活动，符合高中学生的年龄特点和生活背景，基本都是考生己经熟悉的或将来有可能经历的事情，情景真实可信。 所提出的要求符合考生的实际英语水平，具有可写性，能够充分展示学生的书面表达能力。四、改革力度逐年増大高考英语书面表达(全国卷I、II的命题方式和题型相公対急定，与单独命制的试题相比， 全国卷改革的力度较小，命题思想相对稳定。而单独命制的试题则敢于创新，勇于求变。五、内容更突出时代特色近几年的话题十分贴近现代生活，因此内容贴近考生的学习和生活将成为今后命题 的方向。【考点pk】 名师考点透析早在2004年

5、公布的高中英语新课标中就已明确指出“培养初步写作的能力是英语教学的目的之一”。 而高考英语书面表达高考资源网命题目的就是要测试学生运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能来表达思想和进行交流的能力。可以说这种题型最能检验出学生综合运用英语语言能力的高低。高考英语书面表达具体主要考查学生以下几种能力：1.观察分析，获取，加工和输出信息的能力。2.体现语法规则，并且正确熟练运用语法的能力。3.语言交际表达得体，突出正确语用的能力。4.关注社会现实，锤炼思维表达能力。备考策略：1.学习生活中多参加一些集体和公益活动，重视交流，在交流中有目的的运用语言，以达到学习和学以致用的目的。同时注意归纳整理得体用语，以扩

6、充知识面。注重积累时尚语言，增强时尚语言表达意识。2. 平时就要注重体裁，话题等方面的积累准备。并且寻找适当材料进行作文专项训练，并定期进行归纳整理和分类巩固，循序渐进掌握作文写作技巧。实际写作时要认真分析材料所提供的背景，落实已知信息与所求信息。注重灵活应对开放式写法。3. 学好语法知识，注重操练运用。平时可以多做一些句型转换、单句翻译、用词、短语或句型造句、文章缩写、改写等练习。4. 回归高中英语课本，切实找到并且分析高考英语书面表达在课本中的典型体现。学生一定要牢固掌握和灵活运用文化、地理、环境、健康、社会等话题的内容。同时课本中精选的文章不仅语言规范准确，而且内容丰富，能够让学生体会到

7、学习和运用英语的快乐。【三年高考】 14、15、16高考试题及其解析2016年高考试题1. 【2016全国新课标I】书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation a

8、nd I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I dont know

9、 if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己

10、的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。2.【2016全国新课标II】书面表达（满分25分）

11、假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1主题：环境保护； 2展览时间； 3投稿邮箱：.注意： 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is envir

12、onmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you v

13、isited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to . Hope to hear from you soon. Yours Lihua【名师点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。

14、文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.时间状语从句. theme the last time you visited our school.条件状语从句If you want to join.；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。考点：考查半开放作文3.【2016全国新课标III】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以

15、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early

16、so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书向Bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意

17、；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that well have more time to read and select books；条件句If its convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。考点：书信类作文 ks5u【名

18、师点睛】题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。4. 【2016北京】书面表达（共两节，35 分） 第一节（15分） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 该人物是谁； 2. 该人物的主要贡献； 3. 该人物对你的影响。 注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ _Yours,Li

19、 Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Its great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technolog

20、ies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!Yours,Li Hua亮点说明：范文使用了词组hear from, As for, In fact和搭配 inspire

21、sb to do sth等，丰富了作文内容；范文注意上下文的语意连贯。 考点：应用文写作【名师点睛】题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。第二节 （ 20 分）假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提

22、示词：地球日Earth Day【答案】Actions for a Greener Earth A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth. Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of car

23、dboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that

24、 we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school. We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.【解析】试题分析：题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60词，参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和第一人称进行写作。亮点说明：范文使用了非谓语动词call

25、ing upon us to join in the actions和so.that句型与宾语从句we can do more for a better world等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组call sb to do sth, join in, come up with. Make use of, o, give away, be proud of等，使作文内容变得丰富。考点：情景作文【名师点睛】话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来

26、写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性，多使用一些连接词。5.【2016天津】书面表达（满分25分）假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。（1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；（2） 谈谈收获或感情；（3） 表达祝愿语期望。注意：（1） 词数不少于100；（2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；（3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends,How time flies! Thank you.【答案】One possible ver

27、sion: Dear_friends,_How_time_flies! Two weeks went by before we realized that our exchange activities ended. On behalf of our school, I would like to express my feelings.As scheduled, we took part in several instructive activities. We have learnt many Chinese characters and often took exercise toget

28、her. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was extremely delicious and different from our food. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists works.As far as Im concerned, everyone here is a member of our big family. And at last I sincerely wis

29、h you a pleasant trip to your country. I hope well get together again next year. Thank_you. 【考点定位】考查提纲作文【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁的语言。ks5u6.【2016上海】Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Ch

30、inese. 假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：1.描述调研数据；2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。【答案】（略）【解析】试题分析：本文属于图表作文。要求考生以姚平的身份写一则报告，通报“父母是否以子女为荣”的调研报告的内容。文章使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异。2.百分之80的父母亲以孩子为荣；自由

31、百分之60的孩子认为父母以我为荣。3.分析原因：父母亲把全部的精力都倾注在孩子身上，孩子的成功也证明自己的教育方法是正确的；而现在的孩子因为年龄较小，并没有很强的责任感，他们并没有感受到自己承担的义务和责任。建议在写作的时候添加适当的谚语，如Every coin has two sides.提升文采，以增加获得高分的可能性；穿插使用多种句式，让文章富有变化。同时要使用两到三个复合句，并适当使用串联词。考点：考查图表作文7.【2016四川】书面表达（满分25分）某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 你最喜欢的季节；

32、2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受）。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好；3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。【参考范文】One possible version: Among the four seasons in a year, summer is my favourite, which makes me free, excited and energetic. When summer vacation for us students comes every year, we can do all that we cant do d

33、uring our school time, going shopping with friends, swimming in warm water and even hiking and camping in the deep valleys, all of which, I think, lead me to full freedom. We can find us in an exciting world every day, with the sun shining brightly, trees growing greenly and flowers coming out with

34、all kinds of colours. Summer makes me full of energy and I feel I have the strength to do the most difficult things in my life. I like summer best, and what about you？8.【2016浙江】书面表达（满分30分）“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。要求如下： 1.简述你对这句名言的理解； 2.用一个具体事例加以说明； 3.给出恰

35、当的结尾。注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）： 2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。 Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better 【答案】One possible student versionPlanning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. M

36、y experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pron

37、unciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了

38、短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。考点：考查开放式作文9.【2016江苏】书面表达（满分25分）81.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. Peop

39、le not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a

40、 better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 c

41、ompetition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a q

42、uestion that troubles him very much.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。【答案】On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some pe

43、ople, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go

44、around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divide

45、d between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting. (150 words)Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled a

46、t the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, ks5u and active in doing it. In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to. Secondly, voting of this

47、 kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short, internet voting, to some extent,

48、is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.(150 words)2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。3.理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚。同时网络投票的

49、反馈迅速可靠。（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。3.反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响。（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉。（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。注意使用本人熟悉的词汇及句式，以增加获得高分的可能性。不要堆砌使用串联词，穿插使用陈述句、祈使句和被动句式，让文章更加丰富多样化。【名师点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了所有任务。文章结构合理，层次分明。第一段总结归纳短文内容提出网络投票很流行，给人们带来好处同时也有不利之处。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由，两篇范文中正反观

50、点明确，论据有力；第三段中提出合理化建议；时态和人称运用准确无误无误，全文无中国式英语思维，体现出很高的运用语言的能力。从写作技巧来看，文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句. in which candidates go around to seek supports.状语从句.if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同时文章中串联词运用较为合理，如in my opinion、in addition、furthermore、to be honest等等。考点：考查任务型读写2015年高考试题 书面表达之文字提

51、纲式1.【2015新课标全国II】书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结语已为你写好。_ Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【参考答案】 Dear Lucy, Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to

52、the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We sho

53、uld be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。2、提纲是文章的

54、总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。【考点定位】考查提