高考英语写作(正反观点).ppt

1、书 面 表 达 与 短 文 改 错,书 面 表 达 -Approaches to pros to begin with, for one thing, for another等。,3.表示归纳总结时使用： in a word, in all, to sum up, in brief, in short等。 4.要加强句与句之间的连贯时使用： in addition ,whats more ,furthermore, on top of that, besides, moreover等。 5.表示转折时使用： however, while, on the contrary等。,May 25, S

2、unday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl treated me coldly. She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my request. I got angry.I quarreled with her. The manager turned up. H

3、e asked what was the matter. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized（批评）the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,However,At the beginning,In a word,so that,Just then/Just at that moment,After,At last (In the end ),So,And the

4、n,May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. _ ，the salesgirl treated me coldly. _，she didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. _，She said that I made it dirty. _，She gave various excuses to refuse my request. _I quarreled with her. _, the manager

5、turned up. He asked what was the matter. _he knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,However,At the beginning,And then,In a word,I got so angry that,As soon as/ The moment,Just at t

6、hat moment,1） 表列举： for example、such as 、namely，etc 2) 表补充： besides、in addition、moreover，whats more ,etc 3) 表对比： in spite of，on the contrary, despite , etc 4) 表原因： because of、thanks to、due to、 owing to，as a result of ,etc 5) 表结果： therefore、thus、as a result、so，etc 6) 表结论： on the whole 、in a word、in br

7、ief、 to sum up，generally speaking, etc 7) 表转折： however、nevertheless、yet，etc,Different students assume different attitudes towards voluntary work according to the survey. We are glad to see that 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. In their opinion, making a contribution to society an

8、d lending a helping hand to others is a worthwhile job. At the same time, it brings a lot of personal benefits. They can gain valuable experience and skills for future career. Whats more, voluntary work opens up vast quantities of opportunities for them to build up confidence, raise self awareness,

9、and improve good communication skills and leadership. However, 25 of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They consider that working without payment is a waste of time. 5% of the students choose to be neutral. In other words , they dont care about it at all. In my opinion, wed better tak

10、e the chance to participate in voluntary work, no matter how small it is.,Different students assume different attitudes towards voluntary work according to the survey. We are glad to see that 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. In their opinion, making a contribution to society and

11、lending a helping hand to others is a worthwhile job. At the same time, it brings a lot of personal benefits. They can gain valuable experience and skills for future career. Whats more, voluntary work opens up vast quantities of opportunities for them to build confidence, raise self awareness, and i

12、mprove good communication skills and leadership.,However, 25 of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They consider that working without payment is a waste of time. 5% of the students choose to be neutral. In other words , they dont care about it at all. In my opinion, wed better take the

13、 chance to participate in voluntary work, no matter how small it is.,The survey shows the opinions of high school students on voluntary work. 70% of the students are in favor of voluntary work. By doing the work , we can make contributions to the society. And there is much point in helping others. I

14、t can bring us lots of personal benefits. We can also gain precious skills and experience which we can make use of in the future. Whats more, taking part in voluntary work is a way to open up opportunities. Furthermore, it helps to build up our confidence and raise self-consciousness. Our ability of

15、 communication and leadership will also be developed by doing voluntary work. However,25% of the students dont approve of voluntary work. They consider voluntary work as a waste of time because they work without payment. The rest of the students dont have a clear attitude towards voluntary work. In

16、my opinion, as we are members of the society, all of us should spare no effort to make it better and better.,The survey shows the opinions of high school students on voluntary work. 70% of the students are in favor of voluntary work. By doing the work , we can make contributions to the society. And

17、there is much point in helping others. It can bring us lots of personal benefits. We can also gain precious skills and experience which we can make use of in the future. Whats more, taking part in voluntary work is a way to open up opportunities. Furthermore,it helps to raise our confidence and buil

18、d up self-consciousness. Our ability of communication and leadership will also be developed by doing voluntary work.,However,25% of the students dont approve of voluntary work. They consider voluntary work as a waste of time because they work without payment. The rest of the students dont have a cle

19、ar attitude towards voluntary work. In my opinion, as we are members of the society, all of us should spare no effort to make it better and better.,典型错误 70% of the students are in favor of joining in voluntary works. 70% of the students are in favor of joining in voluntary work. work works work job,

20、2. 70% of the students approve that devote themselves to the society is a meaningful work. 70% of the students approve that devoting themselves to the society is a meaningful job.,3. However, we have to leave time studying and finishing our homework. However, we have to leave time to study and finis

21、h our homework.,There are also 5% of the students have no clear idea about it. 5% of the students have no clear idea about it. There are also 5% of the students having no clear idea about it. There are also 5% of the students who have no clear idea about it. There are also 5% of the students with no

22、 clear idea about it.,5. The reasons for they dont want to join the voluntary work are as follow. The reasons why they dont want to join in the voluntary work are as follows.,高考链接 002年普通高等学校招生全国英语统一考试书面表达试题 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 60%的同学认为： 1、不应收门票 2、公园

23、是公众休闲的地方 3、如收票，需建大门、围墙、会影响城市形象 40%的同学认为 1、应收门票，但票价不宜高 2、支付园林工人工资 3、购新花木,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. On the other hand,

24、40% think that fees should be charged.,门票 an entrance fee 免费 free of charge 城市形象 the appearance/ image of a city 园林工人 gardener,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are

25、 against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to t

26、he appearance of a city. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. However, they suggest that fees should be charged low.,Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about

27、 whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.,Opinions are divided on the qusstion. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no dou

28、bt keep some people away.Whats more ,it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.,On the other hand ,40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers , and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest

29、 , however , fees should be charged low.,Yours truly, Li Hua,Practice 现在正是春暖花开春游时节。你校学生会以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”为题，向高三学生作调查。请你根据下表所提供的调查结果，以“Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?”为题，写一篇短文，上交学生会。,注意：1、短文标题已给出，不计入总词数。 2、词数：词数150左右。 3、参考词汇：高考：college entrance examination.,Whether or not sho

30、uld Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion on whether Senior 3 students should go spring outing. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students,about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring On the other hand , about 35% students are against the idea.,春游