高三英语二轮复习 第三部分 写作 书面表达18 经历感受

1、记叙文,18.经历感受,文体概述 叙述经过就是叙述已经经历过的事情，包括故事、通讯报道、日记周记等，以一般过去时为主，按事情发生的时间先后来叙述。如： 1. 表示时间：once upon a time, one day, the next day, last Friday, on the morning of April 5。 2. 表示先后：at first, then, after that/afterwards, ten minutes later, soon, immediately, during, at last, in the end, finally, when, while,

2、 after, before。 3. 表示感受：amazed, amused, annoyed, delighted, disappointed, embarrassed, puzzled, regretful, relieved, satisfied, ashamed, sorrowful, surprised等,常用语块 1. 一次难忘的经历 _ 2. 使某人想起某事 _ 3. 回首往事 _ 4. 进行为期五天的旅行 _ 5. 给某人留下良好的印象 _,make a good impression on sb,an unforgettable experience,remind sb. o

3、f sth,look back on the past,go on a five-day trip,6. 深受感动 _ 7. 使我受益匪浅 _ 8. 辍学 _ 9. 值得做 _ 10. 设法做成某事 _,11. 利用业余时间做某事 _ 12. 表明我们的决心 _,show our determination,be deeply touched/moved,benefit me a lot,drop out of school,be worth doing,manage to do sth,devote ones spare time to doing sth,套用句式 我确实有过一次难忘的经历

4、。曾经有一段时间然而，只有当我我才意识到 2. 这篇文章使我想起了我自己的经历。当的时候, 我从这次经历中，我意识到,1. I did have an unforgettable experience. There was a time when However, only when I did I realize that,2. The story reminds me of my own experience of When , I From the experience, I realize that,3. 读了这个故事后，我不禁记起我朋友的故事。不久前，直到那时他才知道,3. Afte

5、r reading the story, I can not help remembering my friends story. Not long ago, It was not until then that he knew,4. 你故事中所说/提到的事使我感动得流下了眼泪。我从来没想到过事实上，直到 我才对有了更好/深的理解。 5. 读完这个故事后，令我印象最深刻的是,4. What you said/The fact mentioned in your story moved me to tears. I never thought that As a matter of fact,

6、it was not untilthat I had a better understanding of,5. After I read the story, what impressed me most was that,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Dear Jason, Thank you for your last letter. Now Id like to tell you my experience. Miller and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday. Early at the morning

7、, we set out. We climbed a hill, and then we swam across a river, pushed the backpacks on a large piece of wood what we had found by the river. As we got into a forest, we lost my way,in,pushing,that/which,our,Lucky, we found the right direction. It were dark when we arrived at the campsite. We put

8、up the tent, make a fire and started cooking. We spent on the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledges gained in classroom training solve problems. Ill never forget the experience for the rest of my life. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua,Luckily,was,made,knowledge,1. at in在早上应用介词in。 2. pushed pus

9、hing作状语，与主语是主动关系，用ing形式。 3. what that/which引导定语从句，what不能引导定语从句，先行词是物，故用that/which。 4. my our根据主语we可知，是我们两个人迷路了，故用our。 5. Lucky Luckily作状语用副词,6. were was主语是it，故用单数。 7. make made与前面的put和后面的started并列，故用过去时。 8. 去掉spent后的on因为spent是及物动词，直接跟宾语。 9. knowledges knowledge因为knowledge指知识，是不可数名词。 10. 在solve前加to不定

10、式表目的,课堂练习 假定你是学生李华，你校组织志愿者去常青藤特殊教育学校(Evergreen Special School)开展“关爱自闭症儿童(children with autism)”活动，请你写信给你的美国朋友Jack，跟他分享你的经历和感受。要点如下： 1. 活动时间和地点。 2. 参加人员。 3. 活动形式。 4. 你的感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好,Dear Jack, Thank you for your last letter. Now Id like to tell you what I did. L

11、ast weekend, the volunteers in our school were organized to care for the children with autism in Evergreen Special School. We brought some candies and fruits to the children with autism. Upon arrival, we set to work immediately. First, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor. Then we sang and dan

12、ced,After that, we played with the autistic children. We tried our best to make them happy. Although we were tired, we felt very happy. From my point of view, it is our duty to care for the autistic children and respect them. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,课外作业 假定你是学生李华，你参加了校运会，请你

13、写一封电子邮件给你的美国朋友Tom，跟他分享你的经历和感受。要点如下： 1. 校运会的时间。 2. 你参加的项目。 3. 你的成绩。 4. 你的感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好,Dear Tom, It has been a long time since I wrote to you. Today Id like to tell you about the sports meeting I took part in. In December, we had a sports meeting in our school.

14、I participated in the 3000-metre race. I kept practising for three weeks before the match. I managed to stand at the starting line for the final. Unfortunately, I fell behind others very soon,I tried to run faster, but fell down to the ground, with blood running out of my knees. I struggled to my feet and kept o