2013年高考英语作文范文_写作快速提分技巧

1、2013高考英语写作高分秘诀1句式要有变化 复杂句、并列句 倒装句（1） 虚拟语气中if省略 （2）only+状语置于句首（3） 否定词置于句首 （4）地点副词置于句首 强调句型It is that (who) 非谓语动词。 虚拟语气 固定句型结构tooto sothat such athat not onlybut also neithernor such as not until so that eitheror 直接引语与间接引语多种时态，动名词、不定式，并列结构2要使用高等级词汇及短语 使用高等级词汇 使用短语 使用谚语 使用表强调的词，如alone, just, single, on

2、ly, notat all; on the earth; the very; on earth等 使用修辞手法:明喻， 暗喻，夸张，头韵，拟人等as busy as a bee; as proud as a peacock; as blind as a bat.3. 使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成1） 用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：above before me here on the leftacross below in the distance on the rightbeyond nearby opposite to overalso further next

3、to on top ofup down close to beneathunder around near to along2) 用于按时间顺序展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有soon, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early, this morning /year, now, after, at present, later, afterwards finally, at last, all of a sudden , at noon , in the morning/afternoon/evening 3) 用于按分析法展开的段落之中的连

4、接词和过渡词有 first, second, etc. now for this purpose but as a result furthermore finally at last moreover also therefore likewise another for example next yet for instance on the contrary once in addition in summary such in this case on the other hand then otherwise in conclusion thus 4) 用于按比较法展开的段落之中的连

5、接词和过渡词有 another moreover in addition (to) equally important too, also at the same time besides then in the same way in fact like, similarly 5) 用于按对比法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有on the contrary different from on the other hand in contrast to despitein spite of, yet, but ,whereas, unlike nevertheless not onlybut

6、also herethere years agotoday the formerthe latter thennow t someothers onethe other oncenow on (the )one handon the other hand(一方面另一方面) 6)逻辑关系递进: then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外) 转折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the country(相反)， after all(毕竟)总结: finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之

7、)， in conclusion(最后)。强调: indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)。对比: in the same way(同样地)， just as(正如)， on the one handon the other hand状语从句时间状语从句when, whenever, while, as, before, after, since, till, once, as soon as,etc. 地点状语从句where,wherever 原因状语从句because, since, as, for, now that, et

8、c. 目的状语从句in order that, so that, that, etc. 结果状语从句sothat, so that, suchthat, that, etc. 条件状语从句if, unless, as(so)long as, etc. 让步状语从句though, although, even if, even though, however, whatever, as,etc. 比较状语从句asas, soas, than, etc. 方式状语从句as, as if, as though, etc. 宾语从句1. that 2.whether/if3.特殊问句陈述语序:what

9、 (what colour,what class,) how(how much,how often,how soon,) when where who whom why which(which book,) whose定语从句 that who whom which whose where(in which) when (on which) why(for which)秘诀一：被动结构是备选项高频答案特征！【2010辽宁卷B篇】I hated dinner parties. But I decided to give them another shot because Im in London

10、. And my friend Mallery invited me. And because dinner parties in London are very different from those back in New York. There, “Im having a dinner party means: Im booking a table for 12 at a restaurant you cant afford and well be sharing the checque evenly, no matter what you eat. Worse, in Manhatt

11、an there is always someone who leaves before the bill arrives. Theyll throw down cash, half of what they owe, and then people like me, who dont drink, end up paying even more. But if I try to use the same trick, the hostess will shout: Where are you going? And its not like I can say I have somewhere

12、 to go: everyone know I have nowhere to go. But in London, dinner parties are in peoples homes.(转折对比,说明前面New Yorkers 评价是Self-centred.) Not only that, the guests are an interesting mix. The last time I went to one, the guests were from France, India. Denmark and Nigeria; it was like a gathering at th

13、e United Nations in New York. The mix is less striking. Its like a gathering at Bloomingdales, a well-known department store.-61. What does the writer dislike most about dinner parties in New York? A There is a strange mix of people. B. The restaurants are expensive. C. The bill is not fairly shared

14、. D. People have to pay cash63. What is the authors opinion of some New Yorkers from her experience？ A. Easy-going. B. Self-centred. C. Generous. D. Conservative.【2012四川卷E篇】So far, efforts to cut emissions（排放）of planet-warming greenhouse gases are not seen as enough to prevent the Earth heating up b

15、eyond 2 this century a point scientists say will bring the danger of a changeable climate in which weather extremes are common, leading to drought, floods, crop failures and rising sea levels.-60. What can be inferred from the last two paragraphs about the worlds temperature?A. It has risen nearly 0

16、.2 since 1979.B. Its change will lead to weather extremes.C. It is 0.8 higher in 1979 than that of 1990.D. It needs to be controlled within 2 in this century.【2012四川卷A篇】The seasons change just outside the door. We watch the maples turn every shade of yellow and red in the fall and note the poplars（杨

17、树）putting out the first green leaves of spring. The rainbow smelt fills the local steam as the ice gradually disappears, and the wood frogs start to sing in pools after being frozen for the winter. A family of birds rules our skies and flies over the lake.-43. What does the underlined sentence in th

18、e last paragraph mean?A. The change of seasons is easily felt.B. The seasons make the scenes change.C. The weather often changes in the forest.D. The door is a good position to enjoy changing seasons.【2012陕西卷C篇】The authors of both studies stress that these risks are relatively small for healthy peop

19、le and certainly modest compared with other risk factors such as smoking and high blood pressure. However, it is important to be aware of these dangers because everyone is exposed to air pollution regardless of lifestyle choices. So stricter regulation by the EPA of pollutants may not only improve e

20、nvironmental air quality but could also become necessary to protect public health.-55. What can we learn from the text?A. Eating fatty food has immediate effects on your heart.B. The EPA conducted many studies on air quality.C. Moderate air quality is more harmful than smoking,D. Stricter regulation

21、s on pollutants should be made.【2012江西卷D篇】For those who make journeys across the world, the speed of travel today has turned the countries into a series of villagesDistances between them appear no greater to a modern traveler than those which once faced men as they walked from village to village. Je

22、t plane fly people from one end of the earth to the other, allowing them a freedom of movement undreamt of a hundred years ago.Yet some people wonder if the revolution in travel has gone too far. A price has been paid, they say, for the conquest (征服) of time and distance. Travel is something to be e

23、njoyed, not endured (忍受). The boat offers leisure and time enough to appreciate the ever-changing sights and sounds of a journey. A journey by train also has a special charm about it. Lakes and forests and wild, open plains sweeping past your carriage window create a grand view in which time and dis

24、tance mean nothing. On board a plane, however, there is just the blank blue of the sky filling the narrow window of the airplane. The soft lighting, in-flight films and gentle music make up the only world you know, and the hours progress slowly. Then there is the time spent being “processed” at a mo

25、dern airport. People are conveyed like robots along walkways; baggage is weighed, tickets produced, examined and produced yet again before the passenger move again to another waiting area. Journeys by rail and sea take longer, yes, but the hours devoted to being “processed” at departure and arrival

26、in airports are luckily absent. No wonder, then, that the modern high-speed trains are winning back passengers from the airlines.Man, however, is now a world traveler and can not turn his back on the airplane. The working lives of too many people depend upon it; whole new industries have been built

27、around its design and operation. The holiday maker, too, with limited time to spend, patiently endures the busy airports and limited space of the flight to gain those extra hours and even days, relaxing in the sun. speed controls peoples lives; time saved, in work or play, is the important thingor s

28、o we are told. Perhaps those first horsemen, riding free across the wild, open plains, were enjoying a better world than the one we know today. They could travel at will, and the clock was not their master. -73.According to Paragraph3, passengers are turning back to modern high-speed trains because_

29、A.they pay less for the tickets B.they feel safer during the travelC.they can enjoy higher speed of travel D.they dont have to waste time being “processed”75.What is the main idea of the passage?A.Air travel benefits people and industriesB.Train Travel has some advantages over air travelC.Great chan

30、ges have taken place in modern travel.D.The high speed of air travel is gained at a cost.秘诀9：lead to (result in, bring about, cause)是选项中答案高频暗示词!【2012浙江卷C篇】First of all, students need to realize that conflict is unavoidable. A report on violence among middle school and high school students indicates

31、that most violent incidents between students begin with a relatively minor insult (侮辱). For example, a fight could start over the fact that one student eats a peanut butter sandwich each lunchtime. Laughter over the sandwich can lead to insults, which in turn can lead to violence. The problem isnt i

32、n the sandwich, but in the way students deal with the conflict.-51. From Paragraph 2 we can learn that_ .A. violence is more likely to occur at lunchtime 具体!B. a small conflict can lead to violenceC. students tend to lose their temper easilyD. the eating habit of a student is often the cause of a fi

33、ght 具体!【2011湖北卷D篇】our own generation has access to more nutritious food .more convenient transport .bigger houses, better ears .and of course, more pounds and dollars than any who lived before us .This will continue as long as we there things to make other things, This more we specialize and exchang

34、e, the better off well be.2) Brilliant advances One reason we are richer, healthier, taller, cleverer, longer-lived and freer than ener before is that the four most basie human needs -food, clothing, fuel and shelter- have grown a lot cheaper. Take one example. In 1800 a candle providing one hours l

35、ight cost six hours work. In the 1880s the same light from an oil lamp took 15 minutes work to pay for. In 1950 it was eight seconds. Today its half second.-65. The candle and lamp example is used to show that . A. oil lamps give off more light than candles B. shortening working time brings about a

36、happier life. C. advanced technology helps to produce better candles. D. increased production rate leads to lower cost of goods.秘诀10： Control (handle, deal with )是选项中答案高频暗示词!【2012天津卷D篇】Those who choose to be creators look at life quite differently. They know there are individuals who might like to c

37、ontrol their lives, but they dont let this get in the way. They know they have their weaknesses, yet they dont blame themselves when they fail. Whatever happens, they have choice in the matter. They believe their dance with each sacred(神圣的)moment of life is a gift and that storms are a natural part

38、of life which can bring the rain needed for emotional and spiritual growth.-52. According to Paragraph 2, creators _.A. seem willing to experience failures in life B. possess the ability to predict future lifeC. handle ups and downs of life wisely D. have potential to create something new【2012山东卷D篇】

39、Last year, it was a refrigerator that tweeted. This year, its Wi-Fi-enabled laundry machines and fridges that can tell you when your groceries are going bad. The washers and dryers, available starting in the spring, connect to any smartphone through a downloadable application. The phone can then be

40、used as a remote control, so the machines can be turned on and off while their owners is at work or on the bus. Samsung says its not just something new the app connection actually has some practical uses. “If you started to dry clothes in the morning and forgot to take them out, you can go to your p

41、hone and restart your dryer for the time when come home, so your clothes are refreshed and ready to go,” said spokesperson Amy Schmidt. The company also says that with electricity rate(电价)varying depending on the time of day, more control over when the machines are used can help save money. Perhaps,

42、 but what they will probably really accomplish is what all good technologies do enable laziness. Rather than getting up to check on whether the laundry is done, users will instead monitor it on their phones while watching TV. -73. What can we learn about the new laundry machines?A. They can tell you

43、 when your clothes need washingB. They can be controlled with a smartphone C. They are difficult to operateD. They are sold at a low price秘诀12：miss (missing) ; lose (lost)是选项中答案高频暗示词!【2011全国新课标卷A篇】There is sadly no home milk delivery today. Big companies allowed the production of cheaper milk thus m

44、aking it difficult for milkmen to compete (竞争). Besides, milk is for sale everywhere, and it may just not have been practiced to have a delivery service.Recently, an old milk box in the countryside I saw brought back my childhood memories. 1 took it home and planted it on the back porch (门廊). Every

45、so often my sons friends will ask what it is. So I start telling stories of my boyhood, and of the milkman who brought us friendship along with his milk.-59. Why did the author bring back home an old milk box?A. He missed the good old days. B. He wanted to tell interesting stories. C. He needed it f

46、or his milk bottles. D. He planted flowers in it. 【2010江西卷A篇】Andy rode slowly on his way to school, day-dreaming about the fishing trip that his father had promised him. He was so busy dreaming about all the fish he would catch that he was unaware of everything else around him.He rode along until a

47、strange sound drew him to the present. He came to a stop and looked curiously up to the heavens. What he saw shocked and terrified him. A huge swarm of bees filled the sky like a black cloud and the buzzing mass seemed to be heading angrily towards him.With no time to waste, Andy sped off in the opp

48、osite direction, riding furiouslybut without knowing how to escape the swarm. With a rapidly beating heart and his legs pumping furiously, he sped down the rough road. As the bees came closer, his panic increased. Andy knew that he was sensitive to bee stings(蜇). The last sting had landed him in hos

49、pitaland that was only one bee sting! He had been forced to stay in bed for two whole days. -56. Why did Andy fail to notice the swarm of bees earlier?A. He was riding to school.B. He was listening to a strange sound.C. He was going fishing with his father. D. He was lost in the thought of the fishi

50、ng trip.方法一：找中心句第一段首、末句(一段末出现转折)二段一句、二句(二段对一段进行总结或否定)尾段首末句, 90%在末句有汉语标注的地方!【2012全国新课标卷B篇】Honey(蜂蜜)from the African forest is not only a kind of natural sugar, it is also delicious. Most people, and many animals, like eating it. However, the only way for them to get that honey is to find a wild bees

51、nest(巢)and take the honey from it. Often, these nests are high up in trees, and it is difficult to find them. In parts of Africa, though, people and animals looking for honey have a strange and unexpected helper一a little bird called a honey guide.The honey guide does not actually like honey, but it

52、does like the wax (蜂蜡) in the beehives (蜂房). The little bird cannot reach this wax, which is deep inside the bees nest. So, when it finds a suitable nest, it looks for someone to help it. The honey guide gives a loud cry that attracts the attention of both passing animals and people. Once it has their attention, it flies through the forest, waiting from time to time for the curious animal or person as it leads them to t