高考英语概要写作[共14页]

1、 提供一篇提供一篇350350词以内的短文，要求考词以内的短文，要求考 生基于该短文写出一篇生基于该短文写出一篇6060字左右字左右的内容的内容 概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容： (1)(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 (2)(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 (3)(3)上下文的连贯性上下文的连贯性 (4)(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况对各要点表达的独立性情况 WhilereadingWhilereading WhilewritingWhilewriting Whilereading Whilereading 1.

2、Isthepassageanarration,exposition,argumentation oradescription? 2.Isthereanytopicsentenceorkeywords?Ifso, underlinethem. 3.Gothroughthesupportingdetailsorevidenceto checkwhetherthetopicsentenceorkeywordsyoufind isappropriate. outline topic sentence supporting details (conclusion) (以议论文为例以议论文为例) Whil

3、ewriting Whilewriting 1.Structure 1)Topicsentence* 2)Mainsupportingpoints/evidence 3)About60words 2.Language 1)Touseyourownwords* 2)Tobeconcise(leaveoutthedetails;reducetheexamples; simplifythedescriptions;eliminateallrepetitions. 3)Topresenttheinformationfairly,donotgiveyourownco mments 4)Tousethet

4、hirdpersontoretell 5)Tense Para1： Childraising findouttopsentencesorwords whichcanbestservethemainidea. Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world. Since babies do not come with child raising manuals(指南), couples, especially future mothers, have to l

5、earn from their mothers, aunts, mothers-in- law, or any other relative who is close to them. difficult Topic： Characteristics： Reasonsu找对主旨句找对主旨句 Step1 reading Para2： As children grow up, parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children, advise them, punish them, lead them to ach

6、ievements, and teach them. Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately. For example, they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect for their relatives. I think parents in these cases should punish their children in a reasonable way. Children must know those kinds of attitude

7、s are not good at all. . Adetailed example u忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过 Para3： There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job, for example, the culture in which they live, the economic situation in their society, and the religious environment. Para4 One group consists of people who d

8、ont have economical resources or education. Para 5 Other groups of people are hard workers or well-educated. u例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括 Evidence outline Para1：1st sentence reason Para2: 1st sentence an example Para3: the first sentence Para 4 Para 5 evidence Step2 writing Howtoexpressthekeypoints

9、byusing yourownwordsproperly? Para1Childraisingisprobablyoneofthemost difficultjobsforpeopletodoallovertheworld. Tip1：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息 Childraisingisadifficultjob. Step2 writing Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusing yourownwordsproperly? Bringing up a child Childraisingisadifficultjob. Tip2：转换同

10、义词或者词性：转换同义词或者词性 is hard work/ Tip3：转换句型：转换句型 It is rather tough to raise a child for people. difficult/tough. Step2 writing Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusing yourownwordsproperly? Para2Aschildrengrowup,parentshaveto findreasonablewaysinordertohelptheir children,advisethem,punishthem,leadthem toachiev

11、ements,andteachthem. Tip4：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举 的并列词汇的并列词汇 educate their children Parents should _ to educate their children. adopt reasonable methods Step2 writing Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusing yourownwordsproperly? Therearemanyaspectswhichinfluence parentsinthishardjob. Tip5：代词转换成具体信

12、息：代词转换成具体信息 There are many factors that influence the parents in _. bringing up their children two examples are given in order to make it clear Step2 writing Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusing yourownwordsproperly? Onegroupconsistsofpeoplewhodonthave economicalresourcesoreducation. Othergroupsofpeoplea

13、rehardworkersorwell- educated. Tip6：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性 In order to make it clear, two examples are given, which show that _ children raised in families with different economical and educational background may have different futures It is rather tough to raise children for couples, especially future mothers. Parents should adopt reasonable methods to educate their children. There are many factors that influence the pa