【省级公开课课件】高中英语概要写作公开课课件

1、Introductory Lesson of Summary Writing Introductory Lesson of Summary Writing 概要写作概要写作 Learning AimsLearning Aims 1. Know what the summary writing is 2. Learn the criteria(标准) of a good summary 3. Master how to write a good summary 普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明 概要写作： 提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（

2、满分25分） 词数词数少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的， 从从总分中减去总分中减去2 2分分 档次档次描述描述 第五档 (21-25) 理解准确，理解准确，涵盖全部要点涵盖全部要点 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了有效地使用了语句间的连接成分语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 完全使用自己的语言完全使用自己的语言 第四档 (16-20) 理解准确，涵盖理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点绝大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达 比较有效地

3、使用了比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文有个别整句抄自原文 第三档 (11-15) 理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影响意义表达所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容连贯应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。 第二档 (6-10) 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。 第一档 (1-5) 多个句子抄自原文多

4、个句子抄自原文 档次档次描述描述 第五档 (21-25) 理解准确，理解准确，涵盖全部要点涵盖全部要点 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了有效地使用了语句间的连接成分语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要，使所完成的概要 结构紧凑结构紧凑 完全使用自己的语言完全使用自己的语言 第四档 (16-20) 理解准确，涵盖理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点绝大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影 响意义表达响意义表达 比较有效地使用了比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分语句间的连接成分，使所完成的，使所完成的 概要结构

5、紧凑概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文有个别整句抄自原文 第三档第三档 (11-15) 理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影 响意义表达响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容 连贯连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。 第二档第二档 (6-10) 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。 第一档第一档 (1-5) 多个句子抄自原文多个句子抄自原文 概要写作解题步骤 Step1: 速读文章 确定主

6、题结构 text type(体裁) / topic (主旨/主题句)/ structure (篇章结构) Step2: 精读原文 提取内容要点 找出每个段落的主题句 把握句际逻辑、厘清信息层次(主要点、次要点、冗余信息) Step3: 精准释义 重组原文语言 语言转化+压缩表达 Step4: 运用衔接手段 连贯成文 巧用衔接，完美过度 Step5: 批判重读修改 完美成稿 Step1: 速读文章确定主题结构 text type(体裁) topic (主旨/主题句) structure (篇章结构) Shyness Are you shy? If you are, you are not alo

7、ne. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. Is it possible to

8、be born shy? Many scientists say yes. They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. These babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic. Family size might cause

9、 people to be shy as well. Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children. They found 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. As a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. T

10、hey are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families. You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries, they found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three pe

11、ople said so. What explains the difference? One scientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on

12、 outside reasons, such as family, teachers, friends, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy. For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. Bu

13、t scientists say you can get over your shyness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation. And dont forget-if you are shy, you are not the only one. phenomenon + topic reason 1 reason 2 reason 3 consequence + solution phenomenon + topic reason1reason2 consequence + solution reason3

14、text type: 事理说明文 topic: reasons for shyness structure: 总分总 shyness Step2: 精读原文提取内容要点 找出每个段落的主题句，并思考主题句的涵盖面 把握句际逻辑、厘清信息层次(主要点、次要点、冗余信息) Paragraph 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their l

15、ives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. phenomenon + topic Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. T

16、ip 1: Clarifying the logical relationship can help identify the Tip 1: Clarifying the logical relationship can help identify the key and minor points . key and minor points . 分清逻辑关系有助于辨析主次要点分清逻辑关系有助于辨析主次要点 Paragraph 2 Is it possible to be born shy? Many scientists say yes. They say 15 to 20 percent

17、of babies behave shyly. These babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic. Tip 2: Pay attention to the topic sentence of each paragraph. Tip 2: Pay attention to t

18、he topic sentence of each paragraph. 善善 于利用段落结构抓住主题句，同时关注衔接词于利用段落结构抓住主题句，同时关注衔接词 reason 1 Some shyness is genetic. Paragraph 3 Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children. They found that 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. A

19、s a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. They are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families. reason 2 Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Tip 3:

20、 Tip 3: 关注衔接词关注衔接词 Paragraph 4 You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries, they found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three people said so. What explains the difference? One s

21、cientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on outside reasons, such as family, teachers, frien

22、ds, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy. Tip 4: Tip 4: 段落主题句概括性不够的情况下，应该进行适当的解段落主题句概括性不够的情况下，应该进行适当的解 释和补充。释和补充。 reason 3 You may also be shy because of where you were born, as different

23、 countries /cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. Paragraph 5 For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. But scientists say you can get over your shyness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation. And dont forget - if y

24、ou are shy, you are not the only one. consequence solution Shyness can cause people some trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation. Tip 5: Tip 5: 提炼提炼/ /表达要点时要学会用概括性语言来概括描述性语表达要点时要学会用概括性语言来概括描述性语 言。言。 Shyness is becoming more and more

25、common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy (phenomenon + topic). Some shyness is genetic (reason1). Family size might cause people to be shy as well (reason2). You may also be shy because of where you were born, as different countries/cultures shape peoples attitudes

26、 towards failure (reason3). Shyness can cause people some trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation (consequence + solution). Step3: 精准释义重组原文语言 语言转化+压缩表达 Language database: 1. 越来越 2. 弄清楚，弄明白 3. n. 想法，意见 1. increasingly 2. figure out /

27、work out / find out 3. opinion / thought /view phenomenon + topic Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. 1. Scientists have _ the possible reasons for shyness, _ is becoming _ common. 2. More people _, scientists have _ the reas

28、ons for it. 3. Scientists have _ about why more and more people are shy. figured/worked/found out which being/feeling shy figured/worked/found out several opinions/thoughts/views phenomenon + topic Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people

29、are shy. increasingly Language database: 1. 遗传的，天生的 2. 因果关系汇总 inborn natural reason 1: Some shyness is genetic. 1. verb (2) account _; bring _; contribute _; give _; give rise _; lead _; result _ (3) be _ for; be _for (4) play a (major) role / part in; as a _; accordingly; consequently; hence; so; t

30、herefore; thus 1. verb phrases: 1. verb phrases: 2. prepositional phrases arise from; lie _ as a _ of; because of; due to; on account of; owing to; thanks to 3. grammar :3. grammar : grammar: (1) v-ing / v-ed / to do / with structure(with结构) (2) adverbial clause(状语从句) cause effectcause effecteffect

31、causeeffect cause cause for about to birth toto toin to blame responsible consequence/result result in consequence/result 1. Some shyness is _. 2. Some shyness _genes. 3. Some shyness _genes. 4. Genes _ some shyness. 5. Genes _. inborn / natural is decided/determined by results/arises from/lies in a

32、ccount for / bring about contribute to / lead to /. plays a major role / part reason 1: Some shyness is genetic. Language database: 促成/导致因素，成因：a contributing cause / factor Another _ is family size. contributing cause / factor reason 2 Family size might cause people to be shy as well. 1. Where you w

33、ere born might be _, as different cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. 2. _ for shyness is birthplaces, _ different cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. 3. Where you were born might _ your shyness, as different cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. another contr

34、ibuting factor Another reason where account for / bring about contribute to / lead to /. plays a role/part in reason 3 You may also be shy because of where you were born, as different countries /cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure. Language database: 1. 给人带来麻烦的(adj.)： 2. 克服，战胜： 3. 沟通，交流

35、： troublesome/worrying/annoying overcome / fight against communicate (communication) /talk to others / exchange ideas consequence + solution Shyness can cause people some trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation. 1. Shyness is _, but

36、scientists believe people can get over it by _ and _. 2. Scientists agree that the _ shyness can be _ by trying something new and communicating more. 3. To help _(深受害羞困扰的 人们), scientists offer several suggestions: trying something new and _. troublesome/worrying/annoying trying something new communi

37、cating more troublesome/worrying/annoying communicating with others consequence + solution Shyness can cause people some trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation. overcome/ got over people suffering from shyness Step4: 运用衔接手段连贯成文 巧用衔接

38、，完美过度 Now scientists have figured out the possible reasons for shyness, which is becoming increasingly common (phenomenon + topic). Some shyness is inborn (reason1)._, shyness may result from family size(reason2). Where you were born might be _ contributing factor, as different cultures shape people

39、s attitudes towards failure(reason3). Shyness is troublesome/worrying. _, scientists agree that people can overcome the troublesome shyness by trying something new and communicating more with others(consequence + solution). (62 words) Besides/Also another However Step5: 批判重读修改完美成稿 检查要点是否齐全 检查要点的准确性

40、检查语法错误 检查拼写和标点符号错误 实战演练-dirt Step1: 速读文章 确定主题结构 text type(体裁) / topic (主旨/主题句)/ structure (篇章结构) Step2: 精读原文 提取内容要点 把握句际逻辑、厘清信息层次(主要点、次要点、冗余信息) Step3: 精准释义重组原文语言 语言转化+压缩表达 Step4: 运用衔接手段连贯成文 巧用衔接，完美过度 Step5: 批判重读修改完美成稿 Step1: 速读文章确定主题结构 text type(体裁) ： topic (主旨/主题句) : structure (篇章结构): Getting rid o

41、f dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and

42、 let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit(好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been