【一轮复习】高考英语应用文写作

1、 第一讲应用文写作应用文属于实用文体，有严格的语境限制，比如确定的时间、地点，确定的对象、范围，确定的行文目的等。新高考应用文写作的命题形式主要是提纲式。主要表达形式包括日记、电子邮件或书信、书面或口头通知、发言稿、网络发帖等。从提供的命题场景看，很多是“涉外”或应用英语的环境，如申请参加国际夏令营、邀请外教参加活动、帮助迷路的外宾、请美国朋友看中国的戏曲节目等(感知中国传统文化)、课外学习英语的经验等。试题所涉及的话题贴近社会生活，富有时代气息，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。【评分标准早知道】一、各档次的给分范围和要求档次描述第六档(13-15分)覆盖所有的内容要点，表达清楚、合理使用

2、了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解有效使用语句衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯，完全达到预期的写作目的第五档(10-12分)覆盖全部或大部分内容要点，表达清楚、合理使用了比较多样的、恰当的词语和语法结构比较有效的使用语句衔接手段，全文比较清晰，较连贯，达到了预期的写作目的第四档(7-9分)覆盖了部分写作要点，有个别的表达不够清楚合理使用简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解基本有效的使用语句衔接手段二、评分原则1.本题总分为15分，按6个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，

3、最后给分。3.词数少于60和多于100的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。【高分技巧要记牢】根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们不难总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”等高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、规范书写等。一式写对格式要求记住英语应用文常用文体的基本写作格式和特点。两头写好两头要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生

4、动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。三写规范书写(1)行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。(2)单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。四关破关夺隘突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。总之，在应用文写作中，考生应该注意“有话好好说”：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；“有话慢慢说”：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时，注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上，书面表达才能得高分。报道新闻、活动报道是典型的应用文体裁，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历、举办的活动或发生的事件给予明确的、实事求是的报道。【篇首句】In

5、 order to encourage the students to get close to nature，our school organized a mountain-climbing activity.为了鼓励学生们走近大自然，我们学校组织了一次登山活动。At 4：00 a.m.on the morning of April 2nd，a big fire broke out in Zhongshan Supermarket.4月2日凌晨4点，中山超市发生了大火。【篇中句】The purpose of this race was to inspire us students to pa

6、y more attention to physical exercise.这次比赛的目的是激励我们学生更加重视体育锻炼。On the way，although some students fell behind，they kept running until the finishing line.途中，虽然有些学生落后了，但他们一直坚持跑到终点线。Apart from knowledge，we also learned to cooperate with each other and came to realize the importance of teamwork.除了知识，我们也学会了

7、互相合作，也逐渐意识到团队合作的重要性。【篇尾句】The activity benefited us a lot./The activity was of great benefit to us./The activity was very beneficial to us.该活动对我们很有好处。What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.他们所做的给别人带来了快乐，而且丰富了他们自己的生活。They said it was such a beautiful day that they would r

8、emember it forever.他们说这是多么美好的一天，他们会永远铭记。(2020新高考卷)假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.参加人员；2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3.活动反响。注意：词数80左右。A Cross-Country Running Race【佳作展台】A Cross-Country Running RaceLast Sunday，our school held a five-kilometer cross-country running race，which all the students in Senior

9、 3 took part in.The purpose of this race was to inspire us students to pay more attention to physical exercise.At 7 a.m.we started at the school gate.And then we ran all the way to the foot of South Hill.On the way，although some students fell behind，they kept running until the finishing line.From th

10、is activity，we have realized that building up our body is of great importance，and we have also learned more about “persistence leads to success”.【亮点借鉴】1.结构美：采用三段式结构，结构清晰明了。2.词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如take part in，purpose，inspire，pay more attention to，fall behind，build up our body，be of great importance，persi

11、stence等。3.句式美：句which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词race。句不定式短语to inspire us.作表语，对主语purpose进行详细说明。句although引导让步状语从句。句and连接表示顺承关系的并列句，第一个分句中that引导的是宾语从句，第二个分句中谚语persistence leads to success的恰当运用提高了文章的档次。(2020山东烟台模拟)新华中学近期组织了校园劳动周(Campus Labor Week)活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇简短的英文报道。内容包括：1.活动的时间与地点；2.活动的过程；3.你的评论。注意：1.词数80左右

12、；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】In order to encourage the students to love laboring and protect our environment，an activity called Campus Labor Week was organized by our school during the week from June 8th to June 12th.All the students in the senior grades took an active part in it.Our school organized ou

13、r class to carry on the activity in the park.The whole class was divided into three groups，each of which had different tasks.We all felt much tired，but we were very happy because we had done a good deed.The activity is really meaningful and instructive.日记日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。日记的种类有很多种，从体裁角度，可以

14、分为记事型日记和议论型日记。记事型日记是以某种顺序描述某一件事情发生发展的过程。而议论型日记是针对当天的某一事件或某一现象表明自己的看法或态度。【篇首句】This afternoon，we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang，who was going to study abroad.今天下午，我们开班会向即将出国留学的张强告别。Last week，we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture，which tu

15、rned out to be extremely rewarding.上周，我们带着来我校的外国学生去体验了地道的茶文化，收获颇多。I was so pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.去年，我的一个中国笔友邀请我和她一起过春节，我很高兴。【篇中句】The moment we arrived at the Chinese Academy of Sciences，we were warmly greeted by a friendl

16、y expert standing at the entrance.我们一到中科院，一位友好的专家就站在门口，热情地迎接我们。We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively.我们首先去了藏书丰富的图书馆，在那里我们看到学生们在认真地阅读。【篇尾句】From my point of view，its indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.在我看来，探索外国文化的确值得。Well su

17、rely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.我们一定会想念他，并祝他未来好运。Through the meaningful activity，we all agree that science plays an important role in our life and we will study hard to take advantage of it to make our world a better place.通过这个有意义的活动，我们都赞同科学在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色，我们将努力学习，利用科学使我们的世界成为一个更美

18、好的地方。假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华。你班同学张强即将去国外读书，下面四幅图描述了同学们为他送行的过程，请根据图片的先后顺序用英语写一篇日记。注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。2.词数80左右。Monday，March 10 Fine【佳作展台】Monday，March_10 FineThis afternoon，we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang，who was going to study abroad.In the beginning，he made a brief speech to express hi

19、s true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us.We were all moved to tears.Then came the moment to present him with the special gift，a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together.Afterwards，we signed on his T-shirt expressin

20、g our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.At last，we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment.Well surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.【亮点借鉴】1.结构美：采用二段式结构，结构清晰明了。2.词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如：say goodbye to，everlasting friendship，moved to tears，present.with.，unforgettable da

21、ys，reminder，have a photo taken，this precious moment等。3.句式美：句who引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Zhang Qiang。句为倒装句，其中a heart-shaped board with some photos为同位语，现在分词短语recording the unforgettable days作名词photos的后置定语，we had spent together为省略关系代词的定语从句，修饰先行词days。句had a photo taken为have复合结构，不定式短语to memorize this precious mom

22、ent为目的状语。句and连接并列谓语。假如你是May，在刚刚过去的春节里，你应邀前往中国与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一封日记记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。内容：1.春节期间你们参加了什么活动；2.谈谈你的感受。注意：1.日记的格式已为你写好；2.词数80 左右；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Saturday，February 13th，2021 Sunny【参考范文】Saturday，February_13th，2021 SunnyI was so pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with

23、her during the past Spring Festival.That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience for me.The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.Besides，we tried some traditional foods，watched Drago

24、n and Lion Dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair.Afterwards，we paid a visit to Mount Hengshan，a famous tourist attraction and a religious spot.Greatly impressed by Chinese unique culture and attractive scenery，I have known further about China.From my point

25、 of view，its indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.邀请信邀请信是邀请亲朋好友等参加某项活动时所发的邀约性书信。邀请信一般包括此次活动的性质、活动内容、发出邀请以及请求同意等。一般邀请信具有简洁、热情的特点。【篇首句】Its my pleasure/a great honour to invite you to join us.非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday fo

26、r the Double Ninth Festival.我想邀请您下周六重阳节一起去探访附近的养老院。【篇中句】Here are some details about the activity.下面有一些关于这个活动的细节。The activity is scheduled at 8：00 a.m.on January 20th in the lecture hall and its theme is “Differences Between Eastern and Western Customs”.活动定于1月20日上午8点在报告厅举行，主题为“东西方习俗的差异”。Our music fes

27、tival will cover a wide range of activities，including short musical performances，playing musical instruments，as well as a，singing contest.我们的音乐节将包括各种各样的活动，包括音乐短剧表演，演奏乐器以及一场歌唱比赛。【篇尾句】I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you.你方便的话我真心希望你能接受我们/我的邀请。We would appreciate it if

28、 you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们将不胜感激。(2020浙江1月卷)假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【佳作展台】Dear George，Learning that youre very interested in the Chinese language，Im writing to invi

29、te you to participate in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreign students.The contest，which is scheduled to be held in our school hall on January 18th，will focus on the traditional Chinese culture.There is no doubt that you are qualified enough and experienced in presenting your ideas，because of your

30、 abundant skills.If you are available and have the eagerness，please sign up for it by email.I am looking forward to your involvement and do wish you a success!Yours，Li Hua【亮点借鉴】1.结构美：采用三段式结构，结构清晰明了。2.词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如participate in，be scheduled to do，focus on，qualified，be experienced in，present，abun

31、dant，available，sign up for等。3.句式美：为现在分词短语作原因状语；为非限制性定语从句修饰先行词contest；高级句式：There is no doubt that.毫无疑问.；为if引导的条件状语从句。(2021青岛模拟)作为学校戏剧节系列活动之一，英语社将邀请外教David为学生们做一场讲座，假定你是英语社社长李华，请根据提示写一封邀请信。主要内容如下：1.时间和地点； 2.讲座目的； 3.讲座内容。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear David，I am Li Hua，president of the Englis

32、h club in our school.I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture next Friday in the school library，from 2：00 pm to 4：00 pm.In order to make us have a better understanding of western dramas，you are expected to give us a lecture on this theme.We hope that you can tell us the origin and history of

33、western dramas，which interest us most.Whats more，wed appreciate it if you can recommend some relevant books.We would be grateful if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.Yours，Li Hua建议信建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，一定要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力，并注意要礼貌当先。【篇首句】I have learned that you have so

34、me trouble in learning English and I would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.我知道你在学习英语方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。Youve asked me for advice with regard to helping others and Ill try to make some useful/helpful/practical suggestions here.你向我征求关于帮助他人的建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的/有帮助的/实用的建议。【篇中句】My advice i

35、s that you go and see the doctor right away.我建议你马上去看医生。In my personal opinion，it would be wise of you to take the following actions.我个人认为，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。If I were you，I would try another method.如果我是你，我会尝试另一种办法。【篇尾句】I will be glad if you will take my advice/suggestions into consideration.如果你能考虑

36、我的建议我将非常高兴。I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你实用/有用/有帮助。Hope youll have a good time in China.希望你在中国过得愉快。你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总

37、词数。Dear Jim，Yours，Li Hua【佳作展台】Dear_Jim，Im cheerful to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended.Personally，I prefer the tour along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilizati

38、on，from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing，with many well-known sightseeing spots.Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.Yours，Li_Hua【亮点借鉴】1.结构美：采用三

39、段式结构，结构清晰明了。2.词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如highly recommend，prefer，Chinese civilization，scenery，amazing，sightseeing spots，a better choice等。3.句式美：句youre coming to China为省略that的宾语从句。句the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization为the Yangtze的同位语，from which引导的是非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词the Yangtze。句Mor

40、eover的恰当运用，使得上下文逻辑通顺，并提升了表达层次。句Thats why.为高级句式，体现了作者深厚的语言功底。(2021山东威海二模)假设你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容如下：1.深表同情；2.提出建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如：参加学校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等)3.希望建议能有所帮助。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Bill，I am sorry to know you are having trouble with y

41、our life and study here.However，the situation is easy to change.Now，Id like to give you some advice.Firstly，join some school clubs，where you can make some friends.Secondly，communicate with the people who have the same interest with you.Maybe it can get rid of your loneliness.Thirdly，do some outdoor

42、activities which can make you relaxed.Only by doing all these can you get used to your school life and live happily.Hope my advice can help you.Yours，Li Hua求助信求助信是指写信人就某一个问题向收信人寻求帮助，希望收信人就提出的问题提供帮助或给出针对性的解决方法。求助信要简明扼要，语气委婉、真诚。【篇首句】Im writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor.我写信是想问您能否帮助我

43、。Im sorry to bother you，but I have some difficulties here and need your help.很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。I have some difficulty in English pronunciation，which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在英语发音方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。【篇中句】I cant concentrate on my lessons these days，a

44、nd I failed in the last exam，which worries me a lot.这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。Faced with/Facing so many difficulties，I have to turn to you for help.面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。【篇尾句】I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor.如果您能帮助我，我会非常感激。Id appreciate it if you could take my request into considerati

45、on/account.如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。Please reply at your earliest convenience！Thanks a lot!请在方便时尽早回复！谢谢！假定你是李华。校学生会打算举办一个美国文化节，急需一些美国杂志。请你给美国笔友Jimmy写一封e-mail求助，让他帮忙选购一些能反映美国社会、适合中国学生的杂志寄过来，并告知会承担相关费用。内容包括：1.求助的原因；2.对杂志的要求；3.费用。注意：1.词数80左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【佳作展台】Dear Jimmy，Im writing to ask for a favor from

46、 you.To help us students gain a glimpse into American culture，the Student Union is organizing an American Culture Festival.Were now in urgent need of some American popular magazines that can reflect modern American society.So，could you please help select and buy some and send them to us？Besides，we w

47、ould appreciate it if you could see to it that the contents of the magazines are suitable for Chinese middle school students.We will cover all the relevant costs.Please reply at your earliest convenience！Thanks a lot!Yours，Li Hua【亮点借鉴】1.结构美：采用三段式结构，结构清晰明了。2.词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如：gain a glimpse into，in u

48、rgent need of，reflect，see to，cover，the relevant costs等。3.句式美：句不定式短语To help us students gain a glimpse into American culture作目的状语。句that引导定语从句，修饰先行词magazines。句运用了高级句式we would appreciate it if you could.，see to 后面的it为形式宾语，代替后面的that从句。(2021浙江杭州三模)假设你是校英文报编辑李华，近期收到一封署名为Anxiety的求助信，在信中该同学表示由于考试临近压力剧增。请用英文

49、给该同学回信，内容要点如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建议；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Anxiety，Im sorry to know that you are experiencing a tough time now.Actually，everyone seems to have one of those periods when they are under great pressure，so there is no need to worry too much.In my opinion，sharing your fe

50、elings with your friends is a wise choice as you can remove your negative emotions.Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise，which can lift your spirit.Also，keep an optimistic attitude towards life about your future.I do hope my advice will be of benefit to you.May

51、you get rid of your trouble soon.Yours sincerely，Li Hua申请信申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等，其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等。【篇首句】I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of secretary.我认为我是秘书工作的合格人选，所以我写信推荐自己。I am writing in response to your advertisement for a secretary

52、.我看到了你们的招聘秘书的广告，于是写信申请。I am glad that I feel quite qualified for the position you advertised.我很高兴，感觉自己完全有资格申请你们在广告中所招聘的职务。【篇中句】I enjoy drawing cartoons，and once won first place in a national cartoon competition.我喜欢画漫画，并且曾经在一次全国漫画比赛中得了第一名。Moreover，I get along with others easily，ready to give help whe

53、never it is needed.此外，我很容易和别人相处，随时准备帮助别人。【篇尾句】Should you offer me an interview，I would be very grateful.Look forward to your reply soon.如果您能给我提供面试机会，我将非常感激。期待您的早日答复。I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.期待在您方便的时候尽快给我一个肯定的答复。I would greatly appreciate it if you could take m

54、y application into consideration.如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英语给组委会写一封申请信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历；2.个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人；3.承诺：提供最佳服务。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【佳作展台】Dear Sir/Madam，My name is Li Hua.I would like to be one of the volunteers working for the A

55、sian Winter Games.I am a boy/girl of 16 and I am studying at high school now.I am good at English and I like sports.Moreover，I get along with others easily，ready to give help whenever it is needed.My promise is to offer the best service to the people at the Games.I would appreciate it if you could consider my request，and Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully，Li Hua【亮点借鉴】1.结构美：采用三段式结构，