2014年高考英语一轮复习语法专题课件17：作文常用关联词

1、表示时间关系：first, second, then, finally/at lastin the end , soon immediately, suddenly, at the same time, meanwhile, recently表示对称顺序关系：表示对称顺序关系：for one thing. for the other thing, on one hand,.on the other hand，above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, next, finally，the former.the latter, 表示递进关系：表示递进关系

2、：what is more, as well, moreover, besides ,furthermore, in addition，whats worse表示换一种方式表达：表示换一种方式表达：in other words ,that is to say,表示举例说明：表示举例说明：for example, like, such as, for instance 表示陈述事实：表示陈述事实：in fact ,actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth表示总结：表示总结：on the whole, in a word, to su

3、m up, in short, in conclusion, from what I have said above表示因果关系：表示因果关系：as a result ,thus, therefore, so that, as, because, consequently,表示转折：表示转折：but, however, while, instead, although, different from, not only .but also表达自己的观点：表达自己的观点：in my opinion, personally, as far as I know, I believe, I think

4、, as we all know ,It is known to us all that.范例范例1：假如你事实李华，你班同：假如你事实李华，你班同学最近开长了一场讨论，主题是：学最近开长了一场讨论，主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼，高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼，请根据下面所提供的信息，写一请根据下面所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况，并发篇短文，介绍讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点表自己的观点1.关键词语关键词语体育锻炼体育锻炼做早操做早操增强体质增强体质减少疾病减少疾病休息休息学习有效果学习有效果浪费时间浪费时间投入学习投入学习受伤受伤take exercisesdo morning e

5、xercisesbuild up the bodyreduce the diseasehave a reststudy more effectivelya waste of time pay attention to studybe hurt2.作文结构作文结构1.have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins./Different students have different ideas

6、.2.55%of the students think.such as(举例).（原因）.3.On the other hand,45% of the students believe.(原因）.4.In my opinion, I prefer to 3.范文：范文： Recently , we have had a discussion about whether have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin ha

7、s two coins. 55%of the students think they should take all kinds of exercises every day ,such as doing morning exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,” all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Exercise builds up their body

8、and reduce lots of diseases. Sports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective. +On the other hand,45% of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After taking exercise, they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And i

9、ts possible to be hurt in sports.+In my opinion, I prefer to take proper exercises in my spare time.练习：练习：“你们班会的讨论主题是你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗？出路吗？”请根据下面提供的信息写一偏短文，客观的介请根据下面提供的信息写一偏短文，客观的介绍下讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点绍下讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点关键词语：关键词语：widen knowledge, improve qualities, high tuition, senior stud

10、ents关键句子：关键句子：of us consider it necessary to go to college 10% of students think it no use going to college 30% believe “All roads lead to Rome.”范例：范例：某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Young teachers or Young teachers or elderly teacherselderly teachers，which do you prefer?which do you prefer?”请你依据下面表格

11、所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。老年教师老年教师青年教师青年教师教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新你的观点你的观点?注意：注意：1 1词数词数100100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；2 2短短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯学生作品学生作品1：Comparewithyoungteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.There

12、aresomereasonsbelow.Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.Theynotonlysparenoefforttoteachthestudents,butalsogiveclassescarefully.Theywilldoalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstandtheteachingcontent.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothe

13、mostimportant,especiallyforusseniorstudents.Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.点评：亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。2、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。1)2)3)1)Compared2)more3)trytomaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting不足之处：1、个别地方的表达需要改进。学生作品学生作品2: Opinions are divided on th

14、is question. Some students who like the elderlyteachers more than the young ones think thatthe elderly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience. However, the others have a differentopinion. They think the teachers who areyoung are full of energy

15、. Besides, theirteaching is lively and they dare to bring inthe new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderlyteachers and the young ones because fromthem we both can learn a lot.点评：点评：亮点：亮点：1、段落清楚，要点齐、段落清楚，要点齐全，句式表达比较灵全，句式表达比较灵活，能适当运用复句。活，能适当运用复句。2、过渡词运用也比较、过渡词运用也比较熟练。熟练。需要改进的地方：需要改进的地方：1）

16、2)3)4)1) prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones2) with explanations3) the 去掉去掉4) The young teachersOne possible version:Opinions are divided on this question. Some students may like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend

17、to be patient and careful with explanations. However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends as well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more .energetic and enthusiastic. Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively. In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.范例：人们对于