2019版高考英语一轮复习课件：专题十七-概要写作课件

1、ing habits. Its better to write for fifteen or twenty minutes every day than to sit for five or six hours to write over the weekend. However, if you can make a daily writing schedule with longer hours on your writing on weekends, then its much better.One of the worst habits is never to get help from

2、 others to improve your writing. It is advised that you share your work with others. For example, you can send your writing to a few friends, round up some readers and let them comment on your writing. That way, youll find your writing gradu-ally improved. 118年答案答案写作提示文章主要讲述好的写作习惯对提高写作水平的帮助。文章结构比较清晰

3、,以自然段为基础概括要点即可。其中第一段是主旨段,而后面的三段为具体的做法。One possible version:Good writing habits contribute a lot to improving your writing.(要点1)First,you should read as much as possible to get the knowledge and skills for writing.(要点2)You should also make a writ-ing plan and keep up your daily writing.(要点3)Besides,y

4、oud better turn to others for help to im-prove your writing.(要点4)218年Writing2(2018浙江金华十校一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。The familiar yellow school bus is the largest system of mass transportation in the US and every school day transports roughly 25 million young people to school and home again after th

5、e school day ends. Meanwhile, it is the safest method for getting kids to and from school, according to the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA). Children are 70 times more likely to arrive at school safely on the school bus than if they had traveled to school driving themselves or

6、 riding with friends.These school buses meet more of the nations motor vehicle safety standards than any other vehi-cles on the road. Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer, such as video cameras on the inside and outside, stop arm cameras, GPS tracking and

7、 colli-sion lessening systems. Another safety tool on school buses is high seat backs, closely-spaced seats and energy-absorbing seats.318年But even the safeness of school buses would not completely sum up why children are safer when riding the big, yellow bus. The bus is only as safe as the professi

8、onal men and women who drive them. All drivers must obtain a Class B or C Commercial Drivers License (CDL). They are ran-domly tested for alcohol and drugs, usually have their driving record checked, and are given the same review of criminal history as teachers and other employees who have contact w

9、ith students. In order to serve as a school bus driver, most applicants are required to successfully complete a training course, along with instruction in the classroom and behind the wheel.School buses are safe for the environment, not only because each bus replaces 36 passenger cars that would, bu

10、t for the buses, be on the road taking and picking up school children. Additionally, school buses use alternative green fuels like natural gas, and electric power.Todd Monteferrario, President of the National School Transportation Association, said parents should remember that the safest and smartes

11、t choice is to put their children on the big yellow bus when they can. 418年答案答案写作提示本文是议论文。文章主要论述校车的好处。文章的结构为“总分总”模式。第一段是主题段,提出了主要观点。第二至第四段分别是具体的论据。最后一段提出结论。One possible version:The school bus is the safest and wisest choice to school in the US.(要点1)Firstly, school buses not only meet high vehicle sa

12、fety standards but also are technologically equipped.(要点2) Secondly, the bus drivers have to pass strict qualification tests and safety driving training.(要点3)Thirdly, school buses, powered by green fuels environmentally safe by reducing the number of private cars hitting the roads.(要点4)Therefore chi

13、ldren are encouraged to go to school by school bus.(要点5)518年Writing3(2017浙江衢州高三一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Among all the fast growing science and technology, the research of human genes, or biological en-gineering as people call it, is drawing more and more attention now. Discussions about it are i

14、n-creasingly heated around the world.The greatest thing that gene technology can do is to cure serious diseases that doctors at present can almost do nothing with, such as cancer and heart disease. Every year, millions of people are murdered by these two killers. And to date, doctors have not found

15、an effective way to cure them. But if the gene technology is applied, not only these two diseases can be cured completely, bring-ing happiness and more living days to the patients, but also the great amount of money people spend on curing their diseases can be saved, therefore it benefits the econom

16、y as well. In addition, the human lifespan(寿命)can be prolonged.618年Gene technology can help people to give birth to healthier and cleverer children. Some families have genetic diseases. This means their children will for sure have the familial disease, which is a great trouble for these families. In

17、 the past, doctors could do nothing about genetic diseases. But gene technology can solve this problem perfectly. Scientists just need to find the wrong gene and correct it, and a healthy child will be born.Some people are worrying that the gene research can be used to create human beings in large q

18、uan-tities. In the past few years, scientists have succeeded in cloning animals such as mice, sheep, and dogs; therefore, these people predict that human babies would soon be cloned and that it would be beyond control, leading to some disastrous consequences. But many believe that cloned babies will

19、 not come out in large quantities, for most couples in the world can have babies in a very normal way and they also believe measures will be taken to control gene technology. 718年答案答案写作提示 文章首先介绍了基因工程的好处。最后一段说明了一些不同的观点。在概要写作时,以自然段为概括的基础。One possible version:Gene technology is now a hot topic worldwid

20、e. (要点1)It can help people cure deadly diseases and allow them to live a happier and longer life with better economic conditions.(要点2) Gene tech-nology also makes it possible for people with genetic diseases to give birth to healthy babies.(要点3) However, some people are concerned that gene technolog

21、y will be largely used in human cloning while others dont see it as a problem.(要点4)高级语块高级语块give birth to 生出小孩;造成(某事的产生)be concerned that. 担心818年Writing4(2017浙江“七彩阳光”联盟3月)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。I cant decide what I want to eat for dinner tonight. Do I feel like Italian food or Thai food?Indian or

22、Chinese?American or Turkish?I dont need to travel around the world;all these choices are available in a typical inner city in Australia.Australian food has many different cultural influences. Over the past century, people from many countries have come to Australia. These migrants (移民) have contribut

23、ed to the melting pot, that is, Australian food.“Whether youre after modern, traditional or exotic flavors, Australias eclectic dining scene of-fers a wide range of the worlds great cuisines (菜肴),” the Visit Victoria website noted.Some Australian families may restrict their diet to the basic “meat a

24、nd three veg” meal:one sort of meat(chicken, beef, lamb, and so on), along with three different types of vegetables (usually potatoes, peas and carrots).But most people enjoy the variety.If I were to pick four meals that every Australian eats, they would be Italian spaghetti bolognaise 918年(意式肉酱面),

25、Chinese fried rice, British fish and chips and Thai green chicken curry.Chinese students in Australia find it easy to get a Chinese meal. Cities like Sydney have large Chi-natowns, but many towns in the country also have a Chinese takeaway restaurant.Popular Australian-Chinese dishes may not always

26、seem authenticHoney Chicken, for examplebut you can still find dumplings and noodles.Even so, Australia has its own, very Australian savory (可口的) dish:meat pie. Its a real classic!The dish is on the menu at every house party and sporting venue (场所), and is eaten every morn-ing after a big night.And

27、who could forget desserts?We Australians often fight with New Zealanders over who has the rightful claim to the pavlova (奶油水果蛋白饼) and lamington (拉明顿巧克力椰丝方形蛋糕) desserts, both equally delicious and sweet. 1018年答案答案 写作提示 文章主要是关于澳大利亚饮食的多元化现象。本文段落比较分散,但是其中心主旨还是很明确的。阅读时注意几个相关中心的把握。One possible version:Var

28、ious choices of food from around the world are available in a typical inner city in Australia. (要点1)Different cultural influences contribute to Australian foods.(要点2)But some Australian fami-lies may restrict their diet to meat and three veg while most enjoy its variety.(要点3)Though Chi-nese dishes a

29、re easy to get in Australia, Australians have their own special dishes:meat pie and desserts.(要点4)深度解析深度解析很多概写的文章的自然段结构就反映了文章的要点线索,但是也有的文章,其自然段比较零碎,因此不能依靠自然段的结构来概要写作。这时就要考虑各个自然段在中心方面的相似度,一次来进行概括。高级语块高级语块contribute to 对做出贡献佳句背诵佳句背诵Various choices of food from around the world are available in a typic

30、al inner city in Australia. Different cultural influences contribute to Australian foods.1118年Writing1(2018浙江学军中学领航卷)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Calling Latin a dead language is a matter of semantics (语义学).There are those who would sug-gest Latin is not dead, and that it lives on in everyday language

31、used by billions of people world-wide. Others argue that because therere routine updates on Latin published by the Roman Catholic Church, it is still alive and developing.However,Latin is no longer used,on a daily basis,by the vast majority of people outside of specific religious settings,where trad

32、ition influences its use.It is no longer anyones native language.While its use is still taught,Latin is no longer considered to be a developing language to the degree of most modern languages.The reasons for Latin dying out are numerous. Perhaps the most significant one has to do with the decline of

33、 the Roman Empire. During the Roman period, language was standardized to a greater degree. Because Rome was the most powerful political country in the Western world at the time,B B组组 2016201820162018年高考模拟年高考模拟综合题组综合题组1218年most of those who had any ambition to succeed had a desire to learn Latin. As

34、a result,the language spread rapidly.However, that rapid expansion would eventually begin to plateau (处于停滞状态)and finally decline.Latin continued to be used during the medieval period. Throughout Europe, it remained the lan-guage of choice. However, with nothing to unite the continent, there was no n

35、eed for a uniform language. So slowly, over a period of hundreds of years,Latin began to change as different regions developed their own dialects (方言),known as the Romance languages today, among which the most commonly spoken and recognizable are Spanish, Portuguese, Italian and French.Though not di

36、rectly related to the Romance languages, Latin still has an effect on many other lan-guages.English, for example, which is not one of the Romance languages but a Germanic one, can trace nearly two-thirds of its words back to Latin roots. 1318年答案答案写作提示本文主要介绍了拉丁语的兴衰。文章有五段,每段自成一个信息群,概括要点时以段落为基础进行即可。One

37、 possible version:Some people assume Latin is a living and developing language rather than a dead one. (要点1)But most people dont use it in daily life anymore except on specific religious occasions.(要点2)Its gradual disappearance resulted from many factors especially the fall of the Roman Empire. (要点3

38、)With the Roman Empire rising and falling, Latin experienced its expansion, stability and then decline. (要点4)Although Latin changed as the Romance languages came into being, it still influ-ences many other languages, like English, today. (要点5)高级语块高级语块result from由于with the Roman Empire rising and fal

39、ling 随着罗马帝国的兴衰 expansion n.扩张stability n.稳定decline n.衰落1418年Writing2(2018浙江温州二模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Look inside any family home in the evening, and you might see a typical enough scene: Mom and Dad,each on their own laptop or tablet, streaming movies, catching up on work or maybe answer-ing em

40、ails on their smartphones. Meanwhile, one child is chatting online with one school friend while texting another. The other is playing a video game with a friend on the other side of the city at the same time. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of tech-nologies.Acco

41、rding to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as tech-nology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships. It appears to be the case that many people would much rather spend time with their electronic gadgets(电子产品)than with one another. Young people

42、say it is difficult to get their parents attention and they have to compete with smartphones, tablets and other technologies.However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and en-couraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can

43、 actually better 1518年family relationships. Just over half of the 2,253 people surveyed agreed that technology had en-abled them to increase their contact with distant family members and 47 percent said it had im-proved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest me

44、mbers of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their own interests. Family mem-bers who might otherwise have sat in separate rooms can now be in the same one while still occu-pying a different mental space.Look back at our typical family scene above. Is it any different from

45、four people reading their own books? Or is it driving family apart? Where technology will lead us remains to be seen. Yet there is no need to worry. As a matter of fact, how it affects our family relationships depends on our atti-tude toward technology. 1618年答案答案写作提示本文结构清楚,但是概括要点时要注意文章的观点在前后有很大的转折和对

46、比,而且其观点和我们平时的对电子产品的社会主流观点并不一致,因此在写概要前一定要读懂原文,不要受固有观点的影响。One possible version:Nowadays family members are often found lost in their own electronic products.(要点1)Some ex-perts fear that technology can affect family relationships for lack of face-to-face communication.(要点2) However, a report has found

47、technology benefits family bonds in that it makes members closer and provides private mental space as well.(要点3)Actually, not technology itself but peoples attitude towards it influences family relations.(要点4)高级语块高级语块in that 因为;由于be lost in 沉迷于attitude towards对的态度1718年Writing3(2018浙江宁波重点高中联考)阅读下面短文,

48、根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Small talk. Chitchat. These are the short conversations we have at parties, while we wait in line at the store, at family events or work. Sometimes we make small talk with people we already know but not well. Often we have to make small talk with complete strangers. Many people fi

49、nd such small talk about random topics difficult. Some people say they hate it. Others say small talk is a waste of time. They may even call it idle chitchat or idle chatter, meaning it doesnt do anything. They consider small talk not important. However, small talk is important.Small talk can open d

50、oors that may lead to larger, more meaningful conversations. When you first meet someone or talk to someone you dont know well, it would be awkward to begin a conversa-tion about a really deep topic such as war, politics or the meaning of life.Small talk also gives you the chance to decide if you wa

51、nt to get know that person better or not. Lets say you make small talk with someone at a party. But they only want to talk about cats. You may not want to build a friendship with them unless you really, really love cats.1818年Chitchat can also increase your feeling of understanding, toward people you

52、 know but not well. Chatting with a colleague about their child may help you to understand more of their life outside the office. This could help build healthy work relationships.Small talk could even help your larger communitiesyour relationships with neighbors. Exchang-ing recipes with a neighbor

53、in your apartment building may make her noises upstairs easier to live with.In 2011, most commuters(通勤者)in the city of Chicago said they would enjoy “quiet cars” where they sat alone and did not talk to anybody. Researchers at the University of Chicago then asked some participants in a study to talk

54、 to people while commuting to work on a train. They found that those who made small talk with strangers were happier than those who sat alone. 1918年答案答案写作提示概要写作一般要以自然段为基础归纳概要。但是本文自然段比较多,而个别段落的中心比较接近,可以将这些相关的段落进行合并。One possible version:Although small talk is disliked by many people, it is actually of

55、 vital importance in our daily life. (要点1)Firstly, small talk can not only lead to meaningful conversations but also help you decide whether to further your relationship. (要点2)Besides, through small talk, you can build better rela-tionships with your colleagues and neighbors. (要点3)Whats more, resear

56、chers also find that small talk can make people happier! (要点4)高级语块高级语块be of vital importance 具有重要的作用further your relationship 推进你们的关系build better relationships建立更好的关系2018年Writing4(2017浙江温州中学3月模拟)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。GUANGZHOUAt least 25 people have been confirmed dead after Typhoon Usagi made l

57、andfall in Chinas Guangdong Province on Sunday evening, according to the provincial flood control headquarters.“Electricity and water supply were cut off in the Huilai county, Jieyang city, and houses were col-lapsed as wind speeds at the center exceeded 180 km per hour on Sunday afternoon,” said Li

58、 Feng, a border police officer of the city.Intercity trains between Guangzhou, Shenzhen and Zhuhai were suspended at 6 pm and nearly 50 trains, including those along the high-speed lines to Beijing, Shenzhen and Hong Kong, will be suspended until Tuesday, according to the Guangzhou Railway Corporati

59、on.2118年At a Xiecheng gas station on National Road 324 near Shanwei city, where at least 13 of the 25 vic-tims were killed, winds were strong enough to blow cars off the road and all traffic was stopped. Resident Li Huolong said he was on his way home in Shanwei when the back window of his car was b

60、roken by the wind.Educational authorities in 14 cities ordered schools to suspend classes on Sunday, a school day in China because of the three-day Mid-Autumn Festival which just ended.More than 47,000 fishing boats were in harbor, with nearly 20,000 fishermen kept onshore. All beaches in the provin