2015年第一次月考作文学案

1、2015年上期高年上期高一一第一次月考作文学案第一次月考作文学案假设你是新华中学的学生张华张华。 你们班从外地转来一名同学李明李明。他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点，用英语给他写封建议信。书信需要包括以下要点：1. 要他分析原因；要他分析原因；2. 给他提出建议；给他提出建议； 3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算陈述你帮助他的具体打算。 I. Typical mistakes :1.这是一篇材料作文，跑题的可能性很小。但部分学生也出现如下问题：A.遗漏要点，如：陈述你帮助他的具体打算，部分学生没有要他分析原因； B.未注意书信格式；且有部分同学在正文部分在正文部分用用1,2,3

2、点列举建议点列举建议。 C.最后未做总结，突然结尾； D.部分同学未注意分段； E.少部分同学时间分布不均衡，作文未写完或根本没写；2. 词汇贫乏，词性概念不清，缺乏高级词汇；甚至出现特别低甚至出现特别低级的表达错误，如：级的表达错误，如：you is3.表达汉式，未有效地使用过渡词尤其是陈述理由时，语句生硬；4.句子结构缺乏多样性，篇章连接手段单调；5.卷面不整，乱涂乱改，标点不明，字迹难辩。有将近有将近80位同位同学字体过小，特别影响老师阅卷，也严重影响自学字体过小，特别影响老师阅卷，也严重影响自己的得分。己的得分。 II. Analysis.1.人称：_2.时态:_3.结构：第一段_第二

3、段_第三段_简明扼要地问候和点简明扼要地问候和点明明所要提出建议的问题所要提出建议的问题.1.鼓励对方分析自身原因鼓励对方分析自身原因 2.提出建议和理由提出建议和理由.对对方进行鼓励对对方进行鼓励（告诉他你将如何帮助他）（告诉他你将如何帮助他）.第二人称第二人称一般现在时一般现在时1. 对感到苦恼_ 2.对有困难_3.与某人相处_4.适应新的班级_5.对熟悉_6.振作起来_7.分析你自己的原因_8.改善关系_be upset aboutcheer upbe familiar withget along/on with sbhave difficulty/trouble in doing fi

4、t in/adapt to/adjust to a new classanalyze your own reasonimprove the relationship 9.尽可能地参加班级活动 10.我将尽我所能帮助你。 _ take part in class activity as much as you canI will do as much as I can to help you.I will do whatever I can to help you.1.你很少与我们交流，这就是为什么你适应不了一个新班级的你很少与我们交流，这就是为什么你适应不了一个新班级的原因。原因。示例：We

5、spent all of yesterday waiting for him, and that is why we had no time to clean the house.(M1U1 Home alone) ,that is why仿写：You seldom communicate with us, and that is why you cant fit in a new class.2.你应该考虑如何做来适应新的生活，而不是只为问题多么严重而心神你应该考虑如何做来适应新的生活，而不是只为问题多么严重而心神不安。不安。示例：Why didnt they ask me what hap

6、pened instead ofshouting at me? (M1U1 Home alone) instead of doing仿写：You should consider how to adjust to the new life, instead of just being upset about how serious the problem is.3.你太害羞了，所以你很难向同学敞开心扉你太害羞了，所以你很难向同学敞开心扉。 示例示例: Since teenagers have difficulty balancing these needs, they often questio

7、n who they are and how they fit in society.仿写仿写:4.你应该多与同学交流以便他们能够更多地了解你。你应该多与同学交流以便他们能够更多地了解你。示例示例:The aliens took me aboard the UFO so that they could do research on me. Since you are too shy, you have difficulty opening your heart to other classmates.You are supposed to communicate with our classm

8、ates as much as possible so that we can learn more about you.Dear Li Ming, Welcome to our class. I know you havent 1._ (adapt) to the new life in our class since the start of this term. Cheer up! The trouble is temporary and I believe you will become one of us soon.2._ the first place, the truth is

9、that you are afraid to talk to others. I think thats3._you dont communicate with us. You should contact us as much as you can, 4._means we can know more about you. Apart from those, 5._(be) confident in yourself. Instead of just being upset about 6._serious the problem is, you should think about what you can do 7._(adjust) to the new life. adaptedInwhywhichbehowto adjust I think itll have 8._good effect on you. In my opinion, most of us are willing to help you. However, you must rely on9._(you). In fact, we really want to mak