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1、文档可能无法思考全面，请浏览后下载! How to make your continuation consistent with the original如何让你的续写与原文一致- 黄石二中 李妮娅Teaching goals:By the end of the class,you will be able to know1. How to discover the clues/hints(线索) for your logical prediction（合理推测）2. How to make your continuation consistent with the original（in p

2、lots and language)（在情节和语言上）Content 1. Analyse the original material（分析原文）2. Ask questions based on the given sentences and key words3. Assess the Continuation samples （评价续写示例）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 I always prided myself on being a wise shopperand having a good nose for bargains. So when I c

3、ame across a sporting goods store with a sign “Going Out of Business Sale”, I marched into the crowded store. Up and down the aisles(过道), I wandered, humming (哼歌)to myself enjoying the energy and excitement of asale. All of a sudden, there, at the back of the store sat acanoe(独木舟) exactly like my hu

4、sbandsdreamboat,whose picture had been stuck on the bathroom mirror for years. My heart beat wildly. I pushed my way through the crowds, and nearly fell into the canoe looking for the price tag(标签). There it was, with the manufacturers suggested price at $6,750 crossed out and a handwritten TO CLEAR

5、 $750 AS IS. Must be a mistake. $6000 off? I had to talk to a salesman. I spotted a young fellow with a “Hi. Im Mathew”. “Mathew. Tell me about this canoe. Whats wrong with it? Why is it only $750?” “Oh. Theres nothing wrong with it. Its brand new. Were closing the store. Its on clearance（清仓） like e

6、verything else. Ill go check.” A few minutes later he came back and said, “Im sorry madam. Someone made a mistakeon the sale tag(标签). It should be $4,750 .” Hearing this,I felt tearswell up in my eyes. “Oh well”, I said sadly. “Of course, it was too good to be true. This is exactly like my husbands

7、dreamboat. Hes going to be 62 years old this Friday. He had to retire(退休)early for his health. Its been hard on just the pension(退休金) but the stubborn（固执地） old fool has been saving $10 every week for years to buy one just like this. I promiseI wont buy anything, but its just an old mans silly dream,

8、 you know. He always said he wanted to fishin a canoe after he retired（退休）,” my voice lowered and I turned and walked away.Paragraph 1:I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me. “Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery（递送）, madam?” Paragraph 2:7 / 7“Madam. Theres something you shou

9、ld know. This store was my Grandpas and the canoe had been ordered byhim. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Step1 Lead-inTalk about the special day in November for shoppers-Nov.11th Related words _ _ _Step2 Analyse the original material（分析

10、原文）1Elements（要素）whoWherewhenWhat The author saw her husbands _ on clearance feeling _ but was informed that there was a_.?how?2Language-(dialogue)“Mathew. Tell me about this canoe.Whats wrong with it? Why is it only $750?”“Oh. Theres nothing wrong with it. Its brand new. Were closing the store.”“Of

11、course, it was too good to be true.” -(Action description& sentence pattern)1. I marched into the crowded store. Up and down the aisles(过道), I wandered, humming (哼歌)to myself enjoying the energy and excitement of asale.2.My heart beat wildly. 3.I pushed my way through the crowds, and nearly fell int

12、o the canoe looking for the price tag(标签).4.Hearing this, I felt tearswell up（涌出） in my eyes.5.It was too good to be true.6. my voice lowered and I turned and walked away.Step3 Ask related questions based on the given sentences and given words （根据所给关键词和段落首句提出相关问题）The underlined words: sale canoe(独木舟

13、) dreamboat / husband Mathew / brand-new（全新的） sadly /retire（退休） fish promiseParagraph 1:I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me. “Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery, madam?” Paragraph 2:“Madam. Theres something you should know. This store was my Grandpas and the canoe(独木舟) h

14、ad been ordered（订购） byhim. Step4 Assess whether the continuation samples are consistent with the original （评价续写示例是否在情节和语言与原文一致）Paragraph1 Sample 1 示例1 (pick out the illogical parts)（找出不合逻辑的地方）I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me. “Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery,madam?

15、” “Really?” I replied in disbelief. “But we still cant afford the canoe.” With tears dropping, I weakly shook my head and headed out. “Wait, Madam,” he stopped me again.“do you have $1? Only $1!With only $1, I will deliver the brand new canoe to your house.” Having heard these,I was speechless with

16、shock（震惊地说不出话来）. “What?But.but.”I began to stutter （结结巴巴地说）and couldnt believe my ears. Mathew stepped forward and continued.Sample 2 示例2I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me. “Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery,maam? “Yes”Turning around, I replied with a mixture of depres

17、sion(沮丧) and surprise .“That is actually all I can afford. Why are you asking .?” Mathew continued, “Well madam,lets make a bargain(做笔交易).You pay me $775 and I will have the canoe delivered to your house on Friday morning as a gift for your husband.” Having heard this, I was so astonished as if a wa

18、ve of electricity flowed through my body. “What?But.but.”I began to stutter (结结巴巴地说)and couldnt believe my ears. “The price tag（价格标签） was a mistake,wasnt it?” “It was.”He smiled gently.Tip1 The continuation should be consistent with the original in _ logically .（续写需与原文在_上逻辑一致）Tip2 The continuation s

19、hould be consistent with the original in _ -(dialogue/ sentence pattern) .（续写需与原文在_上保持一致）Paragraph2Sample1（示例1）(pick out the illogical parts)（找出不合逻辑的地方）“Madam.Theres something you should know.This store was my grandpas and the canoe had been ordered by him. When he retired, he went fishing in this c

20、anoe and lived a happy life.Now he is too old to fish, so he repaired it and add some decorations（装饰品）. Thats why it is brand new.” He paused and went on, “This canoe（独木舟） is no longer useful to him.He told me to sell it at a low price if someone needed it.So I want to make your husbands dream come

21、true.” Having said this, he went away, leaving me stiffly（僵直地） standing there, tears of excitement and gratitude（激动和感激的泪水）clouding my eyes.Tip 3 _ the words is deadly, so accumulating(积累) your vocabulary seems of great importance. Sample2 （completing the passage 语法填空）Madam.Theres something you shoul

22、d know.This store was my grandpas and the canoe had been ordered by him. My grandpa , _ran the store for more than 30 years, was much the same as your husband , _(long) for a simple life of fishing in his dreamboat after his _(retire) .”He swallowed hard and _(pause) a few seconds,then went on _(sad

23、), “Healthy and energetic（精力充沛的） as he looked, my grandpa passed away abruptly just several days ago. So _ it is also your husbands dream to go fishing in a canoe, just make_ a reality before it is too late. I think my grandpa would get comfort seeing you enjoy it, somehow as a continuation of his l

24、ife .”Tears streaming down _(I) cheek ,“Thank you so much .” I expressed my gratitude repeatedly and rushed home_(tell) my husband the good news. Theme：（主题）Giving help to those in need or helping others achieve their dreams does make a real difference to us. So we are supposed to learn from Mathew a

25、nd spread this virtue(美德) around the world. -LoveStep5 SummaryHow to make your continuation writing consistent with the originalStep1: _ the original materialStep2: _ and _ some related questions to get the ideaStep3:_ the ideas to complete the articleTip1 The continuation should be consistent with

26、the original in _ logically .Tip2 The continuation should be consistent with the original in _.Tip3 Misunderstanding the words is deadly, so _your vocabulary seems of great importance. Appendix (附录 )Word lists:1. Continuation n. 续写 2. consistent adj. 一致 3 original adj./n 原作 4 sale n. 打折商品5. canoe n.

27、 独木舟 6 brand-new adj.全新的7 bargain n.便宜货 8 retire v. 退休 retirement n.9. logical adj. 合逻辑的 10. illogical adj. 不合逻辑的 11. dreamboat n. 梦想之船Consolidation（课后巩固作业） Assess whether the samples are consistent with the original(评价续写事例是否与原文在情节和语言上一致)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事One pleasant New Year morning, Ed

28、ward rose and washed and dressed himself very quickly. He wanted to be the first to wish everyone a happy New Year. He looked in every room, and shouted the words of welcome. He ran into the street to repeat them to those he might meet. When he came back, his father gave him two bright new silver do

29、llars. His face lighted up as he took the money. He had wished for a long time to buy some pretty books that he had seen at the bookstore.He left the house with a light heart, intending to buy the books, As he ran down the street, he saw a poor German family. the father, the mother, and three children shivering with cold.I wish you a happy New Year, said Edward, as he was happily passing by. The man shook his head.You do not belong to this country? said Edward. The man