(名师整理)最新英语中考写作《校园生活》专题精讲精练

1、主题训练8,校园生活【名师点拨】校园生活是学生热切关注的主题之一。有关如何做一个好学生、校规问题、穿校服问题、学 生间的友谊、校园活动、初中生活回顾等都是非常好的讨论话题。因为校园生活与学生的学 习、生活密切联系，所以也是中考命题的热点之一。【主题词汇】 校园活动:a colourful school life, all kinds of activties, after-school activities, take an active part in, have a sports meeting, have a basketball match with,go on a spring ou

2、ting,take a trip to,be a member of,learn from each other,fill one's heart with hope, hold an evening party,join the Reading Club, build oneself/sb. up,have the chance to do sth., help each other- improve one's skills,win the first prize,beat the other player, lose the game, step into society

3、校园人物:a top student,a true friend,be full of life,f air and honest, be friendly to sb.,be patient with sb.,be ready to help others,be strict with sb.,be willing to do, face difficulties bravely,have a sense of humour,have a strong will,have the same rules for everybody,treat everyone equally,keep a s

4、ecret, play different roles, organize c lass activities, speak highly of sb.（高度平价集人）,think of others first,share one's joy and sadness【常用句型】校园活动1. The modern society requires many qualities of young students, so only learning from text books is not enough.（总起句，通常在第一段或段落的首句。）1 .We can learn a gre

5、at deal from other students we meet in activities.1. After long hours of study,they can relax themselves by taking part in school activities.2. Sometimes we have class meetings and English festivals. They are very interesting.3. We can take part in different activities according to our personal hobb

6、ies.1.lf we like music,we can join the Music Club on Thursday.2.1 think these activities can make our school life rich and colourful.3.1 enjoy my school life very much.1. At last Art Festival, my classmates and I provided a pretty good drama. Onaccount of themjt became my greatest honor in my life.【

7、校园人物】（可以从自己、老师、同学和朋友的角度写）1. How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.1.1 was proud of myself because I got on well with my classmates and my grades were good.3.1 have got more knowledge and improved my life.4,With her help,! made great pr

8、ogress in English. Now,I can even communicate with foreigners!5. It was Mary who gave me the greatest help and made my school life so wonderful.6. We share our joy and sadness just like a big family.6.When I had a stomachache,my classmates looked after me.lt made me moved.6. When my classmates meet

9、some troubles that they are unable to overcome, I am ready for giving them a hand anytime anywhere.I have helped them a lot, and I am always happy to do that.【模拟试题】Be proud of my schoola. What does your school look like?a.What fun do you have at school?b.Why do you like your school? (Give at least t

10、wo reasons.)【要点分析】1 ,通过具体的活动（如:兴趣小组、体育运动、与老师同学的相处、自己在学校生活 中的收获等）来表达对学校的情感。2 .时态:一般现在时。2 .文章结构:略写校园环境，详写校园生活和自己的成长、收获，3 ,切忌:言之无物，只说“热爱”自己的学校，却不说为什么“热爱工【写作思路】36.0I）总体概述“我为学校而骄傲” 1.1 am proud of my school because it is beautiful and we have many interesting school activities.2. My school is very big. W

11、e have. There are.（从建筑、设施、绿化的角度写） 2）具体谈谈校园活动和人物1. We have lots of fun at school. After school we play., We do lots of sports like., Sometimes we have（从体育运动、课外活动、主题活动的角度写）2. Students in our school study hard and do well in their subjects.2.Each student respects his/her teachers and is polite to other

12、s.3）从校园活动和人物中得到的启迪1.1 love my school because.,I learn a lot from.I really feel proud of my school.1.2 f everyone makes a contribution to our school,it will be more beautiful.【范文评讲】原文稿I am proud of my school because it is beautiful and we have many interesting school activities. My school is very big

13、 with several tall buildings. We have a big playground,and there are lots of trees and flowers everywhere. Besid毁4n一 usually play together after class. Others appreciate the goldfish in the joke.lt also gives us much happiness.We also have lots of fun at school.After class we play games and do lots

14、of sports,like playing basketball,football and table tennis. Sometimes we have class meetings and English festivals.I love my school.The teachers are very kind and the students are friendly to each other. We share our joy and sadness just like a big family.【点评与评分】作者在整篇文章中条理清晰，意思连贯,语句通顺逢文流畅。可文章在整体布局时

15、还需考 虑，注意详略得当。按中考作文20分计算，属于第三档第二档的文章，可得1415分，需改进 之处：1 .文章应略写校园环境，详写校园生活和自己的成长、收获。而作者在第一段中用 了过多的笔墨，使文章显得头重脚轻丑。所以去掉部分描写校园环境的句子更好。2 .第二段中，力口上 Sports and school activities make us healthy and make our school lite colourful,更能突出运动和校园活动带来的好处。3 .在最后一段中加上一个连接词，表明热爱学校更重要的原因。4 .原文中少了结尾，应添上结尾，使文章具有完整性。修改稿I am p

16、roud of my school because it is beautiful and we have many interesting school activities. My school is very big with several tall building s. We have a big playground, and there are lots of trees and flowers everywhere.We also have lots of fun at school. After class we play games and do lots of spor

17、ts,like playing basketball,football and table tennis. Sometimes we have class meetings and English festivals. Sports and school activities make us healthy and make our school life colourful.I love my school. The further reason is the teachers are very kind and the students are friendly to each other

18、. We share our joy and sadness just like a big family. I learn a lot from my school life, I feel proud of my school. It is one of the best schools in my heart.My school is very big with several tall buildings. There are 2 -000 students in my school.We have a big playground with lots of trees around

19、it.There are a lot of flowers everywhere.We have lots of fun at school. After class we do lots of sports,like playing basketball,football and table tennis. Also , we chat with each other under the trees and play games together. How happy we a re!I love my school because ifs like a big family. The te

20、achers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school and it is one of the best schools in my heart.of【范文链接】My classmates and my classMy school life is wonderful and I feel proud to be a member of my class. In my class,! get along very well with my classmates. I usually read

21、 books with them and share our thoughts together. When I have a PE lesson,I always play basketball with them and we all enjoy ourselves. And I remember one day,when I had a stomach ache,my classmates looked after me. It made me moved. So in my opinion,my classmates are very friendly and kind.From my

22、 point of view,my class is my second home because it always gives me warmth and love. Itll be the most valuable treasure in my memory.Study is funWhy do we come to school?Different people may have different answers.Some people say that they come to school to study just because they dream of a better

23、 job and a better future. But in my viewpoint,study is fun.It is said that everyone who is interested in study may find pleasure in reading.Exactly! Study can not only enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind,but also bring me lots of fun as w ell. What's mo©study always teaches me how to be

24、 honest,confident and knowl edgeable.In a word,study is fun.Taking part in school activitiesMany students are very interested in school activities. They.have their reasons.Firstly,they think that learning from textbooks is not their only task. They believe that they should take every chance to get m

25、ore practical knowledge. Secondly,they thinkthat after long hours of study,they can relax themselves by taking part in school activities. However, a large group of students have little interest in them and spend most oftheir time on studies. First, they believe that they should make full use of time

26、 to study. Second, they feel that school activities have little to do with their further development.In my opinion, we should take an active pa rt in school activities.On one handfrom textbookswe can learn a greal deal from other students we meel in activities. Besides, the modem society demands tha

27、t students have many good qualitioso only loaming is not erough.A letter about my school activitiesDear Tom,How are you? Now I enjoy my school life very much. Besides learning many subjects at school, we have all kinds of activities after class.We can take part in different activities ac cording to

28、our personal hobbies. For example, we can go to our school computer group on Monday to learn more about computer science. We can also Jmprove our English by joining in English Corner onTuesday.If we like music,we can join the Music Club on Thursday.We can go to play ball games on Friday in order to

29、make ourselves stronger.Of all these activities,! like playing ball games best because health is very important for us students. I think these activities can make our school life rich and colourful. We all like these activities.Yours,Wang LinMy middle school lifea.How time flies! My colourful middle

30、 school life is nearly ending- Here is what I think of about myself.In the past four years,! was proud of myself because I got on well with my classmates and my grades were good,Now, I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on, In this way, I have got more knowledge and imp

31、roved my life.As for the future,! have two dreams. One is to be a teacher,and the other is to be a volunteer. Helping others is my greatest happiness.Although I have made much progress ,l'll try my best to do even better. Believing in myself is the key to success,b. How time fliesiMy colourful j

32、unior middle school life is coming to an end.I'm glad to tell you something about my school life. When I was six years old,I started school. Since I became a student, I have been studying very hard. My parents are quite proud of me. Now,I study at a key middle school,which is not only modern but

33、 also beautiful. The teachers in my school are so kind and hard-working that I love them verychildren,Also they that are strict with us and strict in their work. I am getting along very well with my classmates. Whenever we have difficulties in our study, we help each other. I have many interests suc

34、h as dancing, singing, reading books and playing sports, and I especially enjoy playing basketball, which makes me smarter and helps me learn faster and better. So I've improved my life in this way. My school life is full of happiness and fun.Although I hav。so me new challenges everydayII try my

35、 best to meet them.6.A happy memory in my Junior High Schoola. There are many unforgettable memories in my mind, and among them the happiest memoryis the sports meeting in summer. It was very hot, the sun shone brightly and everyone was so excited. But I was very nervous because it would be my turn

36、to run. With the sound of"GO“ I began to run. I ran as fast as possible but I failed. How awful! But my classmates came to encourage me.They said,"We were all proud of yo u.'l learned that the most important thing is the love between us. That's the happiest memory in my Junior High

37、 School.b. As we will graduate from Junior High School, the happiest memory I will never forget is the experience of a class meeting. We had the group meeting to discuss the performance. We wrote the articles on it and practiced a lot of times.With the help of our class teacher and the hard work day

38、 and night,we did so we II in the performance.From that I knew,"No pains,no gains- "It's the happiest memory in my Junior High School.b.School life plays an important role in our daily life. I have a happy memory in my Junior High School. Last month, we had a spring outing. We went to

39、Gongqing Forest Park. The weather was so comfortable that we all enjoyed ourselves. We had a picnic under the tree and sang together.We shared our food to other people. Finally, we played a game with teamwork.lt was really very interesting and we learned a lot. What a happy memory in my Junior High

40、School!d. As I'm about to graduate,! would like to talk about a happy memory in my and Junior High School. In my mind, I think the sports meeting is a happy memory. We were very excited when the sports meeting was held.On that day, all of us took an active part in it. Some jumped rope, some had

41、a running race, and others played some games. Whenever someone won a prize, we cheered for him. We had such a great time that we were all tired after the sports meeting. How time flies when we're having funilt was a happy and meaningful memory that I will always remember.7. My TV-turnoff weeka.

42、Everyone likes watching TV in our daily life. So do I. But it is unhealthy for us to watch it too much.I have a TV-turnoff week as soon as I find that I'm getting more and more unhealthy.When I have a TV-turnoff week,I turn off my TV and have out door activities regularly.I also change my bad di

43、et in order to have a strong body.What's more,l help my mother do some housework.So I believe,! will have a good and strong body sooner or later.b. As a child, everyone likes watching TV. So do I. However, I'd like to have a TV-turnoff week. There are two reasons for it. First,it's good

44、for my eyes.Second, 111 do the following activities. First,I'll listen to the music more often. Next,I'll do some sports, such as runningjumping and playing badminton. I can not only relax myself but also make myself much stronger. In conclusion,in order to make my life better,I am happy to

45、have a TV-turnoff week.c. I like watching TV very much, but I still have a TV-turnoff week in order to protect my eyes an d study habits.During the TV-turnoff week,I will help my parents do more housework than before.I will also go to the park and enjoy the fresh air as well as the beautiful view. O

46、n the other hand, this activity can help me save electricity and protect the environment. How meaningful!I also think I will read more books instead of sitting in front of the TV set. Let's have a TV-turnoff week right now.d. As we all know, TV becomes an important part in our daily life. I like

47、 watching TV because I can know a lot of news from it. But electricity is running quickly while we are watching TV . So I have a TV-turnoff w eek to save electricity.I will read books and play with my friends instead of watching TV during the TV-turnoff week.I think it enables me to get on better wi

48、th others. And it can protect the environment as well. As far as I m concerned,we all ought to close the TV to save ourselves.e. It's common for teenagers to like watching TV. As a member of them,so do I. I would like to have a TV-turnoff week because I want to rest my eyes and concentrate on st

49、udying. During the TV-turnoff week, I will put my heart into studying. I will enjoy myself by doing some indoor 7activities such as doing a puzzle. There are two reasons for why I am going to do these things. First, I need to relax myself. As technology develops, we are forced to live in a world of

50、fast pace. So why not get away from technology and re lax myself?Second,l m a student of Grade Nine, I have to study hard in order to have a bright future. I believe I will certainly enjoy my TV-turnoff week. It will be helpful to me.8.My friendship with MaryMary,a 15-year-old girl,is my best friend

51、. She is tall with big bright eyes.When we talk about something, she always looks at me, smiling.Two years ago,I came to this school, Everything was strange to me on my first day at school.I felt very lonely. Just then,Mary came to me, She invited me to play games with her. And we went home together

52、 after school. Mary was so kind and helpful that we became good friends soon. With her help,I made great progress in English.Now, can even communicate with foreigners!It was Mary who gave me the greatest help and made my school life so wonderful. A 什iend in need is a friend indeed. That's really true.9. School rulesThere are many rules in our school. For example, we must wear school uniforms everyday and we must get to school on time. We mustn*t ride bikes in school. We mustn't eat in the classroom.We mustn't use mobile phones in class. I agree