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1、1. house on fire, last night2. old man, sleep3. suddenly, wake up, cry4. people, help5. old man, save NarrationTime Place Character(s) Cause Event Process Resultwakecry/ask for helphear & run to helpon fire (sleeping)a fireput out / savedlast nighta housean old man / some people时态语态An old man wa

2、s sleeping when a house was on fire.The old man was saved./People saved the old man.连词A house was on fire when an old man was sleeping.An old man was sleeping and suddenly he woke up.One day, in the eveningOne day eveningAt/in/on last nightOne eveningLast night At that time, an old man fell asleep.T

3、he old man was sleeping.The old man was asleep. _When the house was on fire, an old man was sleep_cry 哭；哭；大声喊叫大声喊叫The old man was very afraid and he began to cry. He shouted, “Help! Help!”He was so thankful to the people that he cried again.Suddenly he was waked (up)._Suddenly he waked/woke up._The

4、other people heard his voice andOther people /some people heard The old man was saved and thanks to the people who saved him._The old man was saved and he thanked the people. The old man was saved and he was thankful/grateful to the people.The old man was saved and he gave thanks to the people. A La

5、st night, when the boy was asleep, the house caught fire. The boy woke up at once and ran out of the house, shouting “Help! Help!” after a few minutes, the boy came back with some people. Together they put out the fire and saved the old man who was trapped in the fire. The boy was very thankful to t

6、hose people who helped him. B Last night, a house in a town was on fire. At that time, the owner of the house an old man was sleeping well. After a while, the old man suddenly woke up and he soon found that the house was on fire. He cried for help at once. A lot of people came to help him. At last,

7、luckily, the old man was saved. The town became quiet again. C Last night there was a house on fire. At that time an old man was sleeping in a room of the house. Suddenly the old man woke up and began to cry “Help me! Help!” some people heard that. They ran to the house and helped the old man. After

8、 half an hour, the old man was saved. Last night a house was on fire.An old man was sleeping in the house.Suddenly he woke up and found that the house was on fire.He couldnt go out of the house.He began to cry,”Help me,help me!” A lot of people went to help the old man. At last, they saved the old man.The old man was pleased with the peop