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1、怎怎 样样 让让 书书 面面 表表 达达 文文 采采 飞飞 扬扬05高考英语书面表达评分原则高考英语书面表达评分原则4：评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。性及上下文的连贯性。第第5档档（2025分）分）： 应用了应用了较多较多的的语法结构语法结构和和词汇词汇 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用尽力使用较复杂结构较复杂结构或或较高级词汇较高级词汇所致；所致；具备较强的语言运用能力具备较强的语言运用能力05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达年高

2、考英语（湖南）书面表达: 假设你是李平，假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项动，现就有关事项征求你的意见。请征求你的意见。请根据下表所提供的根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信信息用英语以书信形式给予答复。请形式给予答复。请在答题卡上作答。在答题卡上作答。活动时间活动时间 7 7月月15 15日到日到2222日或日或8 8月月15 15日到日到2222日日 活动内容活动内容 参加英语角参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲学唱英

3、语歌曲听英语讲座听英语讲座 表演英语短剧表演英语短剧看英语电影看英语电影 教外宾学中文教外宾学中文 对活动内容对活动内容的建议或要求的建议或要求 请注意：请注意：1. 1. 选择适合你的时选择适合你的时间，并说明理由；间，并说明理由；2. 2. 选择两项你喜欢选择两项你喜欢的活动，并说明的活动，并说明理由；理由；3. 3. 对活动内容提出对活动内容提出至少一个建议或至少一个建议或要求；要求；4. 4. 词数：词数：100100左右；左右；5. 5. 信的开关和结尾信的开关和结尾已给出。已给出。05年高考英语书面表达范文年高考英语书面表达范文(湖南湖南)Dear Sir or Madame,De

4、ar Sir or Madame, Im very glad to be invited to the English Im very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.summer camp. I prefer to go in July because Ill have to prepare I prefer to go in July because Ill have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems myself for the new s

5、chool term in August. It seems that all the activities you offer are attractive and that all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But Id like to attend the English meaningful. But Id like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on lectures, from which

6、 I can get more information on British and American culture. British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. more and more foreigners are eager to know about Ch

7、ina. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.culture. Its been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you Its been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?organize a t

8、our around the city during the camp? Thank you very much. Thank you very much. Yours truly, Yours truly, Li Ping Li Ping05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文 Im very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go inJuly because Ill have to prepare myself for the new school term in August.

9、It seems that all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. Im glad to do Im glad to do prefer to doprefer to do prepare oneself forprepare oneself for It seems thatIt seems that all the activities all the activities （that ) that ) you offer you offer attractive , meaningfulattractive

10、, meaningfulBut Id like to attend But Id like to attend the English lectures, the English lectures, from which I can get from which I can get more information on more information on British and American British and American culture. With the culture. With the coming of the 2008 coming of the 2008 Be

11、ijing Olympic Beijing Olympic Games, more and more Games, more and more foreigners are eager to foreigners are eager to know about Chinaknow about China Id like to do Id like to do from which I can get from which I can get moremore With the coming of With the coming of the 2008 the 2008 be eager to

12、do be eager to do 05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文 But But So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture. Its been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文 spread Chinese spread Chinese culturecultu

13、re It be for sb It be for sb. to . to do do organize a organize a tour tour So So 怎怎 样样 让让 书书 面面 表表 达达 文文采采飞飞扬扬 Im glad to do Im glad to do prefer to do prefer to do prepare oneself for prepare oneself for It seems that It seems that all the activities (that) you offer all the activities (that) you

14、offer attractive , meaningful attractive , meaningful But But Id like to do Id like to do from which I can get more from which I can get more With the coming of the 2008 With the coming of the 2008 be eager to do be eager to do So So spread Chinese culture spread Chinese culture It be for sb It be f

15、or sb. to do . to do organize a tour organize a tour 1. 1. 较高级词汇较高级词汇2. 2. 丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构3. 3. 恰当的连接词恰当的连接词 ， ， ， ， ， ， ， ， ， ， ， 1. 多实少虚多实少虚 :nice nice 2. 短语优先：短语优先：I cannot bearbear it.I wantwant it. generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitalI cannot put up with it.I am

16、 looking forward to it. 弃旧取新弃旧取新:e all havehave the same chancechance.There areare more opponents.1. 1. 较高级词汇较高级词汇possessopportunityexist学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。1. Its very 1. Its very dangerousdangerous for the students to for the students to go throughgo through the traffic.the traffic.2. Studen

17、ts are 2. Students are risking their livesrisking their lives when when threading their threading their way amongway among cars. cars.社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育。社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育。1. The students should be 1. The students should be taughttaught more about the more about the traffic safetytraffic safety. .2. And a

18、lso it is of great use to 2. And also it is of great use to strengthenstrengthen the the safety educationsafety education over the students. over the students.较高级词汇较高级词汇(Exercises 1)(Exercises 1)较高级词汇较高级词汇(Exercises 2)(Exercises 2)1.We all think he is a great man.2. As a result the plan was a failur

19、e.3. She went there in order to study music.4. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.We all of him .The plan to be a failure.She went there studying music.Our school twentysix classrooms.think highlythink highlyturned outturned outfor the purpose offor the purpose ofis made up ofis made up

20、of较高级词汇较高级词汇(Exercises 3)(Exercises 3)5. You can find my house easily.6. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.7. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.Youll finding my house. A good idea to me. the good weather, our journey was comfortable.have no troublehave no troubleA good idea

21、suddenly me.Thanks toThanks tooccurredoccurredstruckstruck非非谓谓语语各各种种从从句句with复复合合宾宾语语倒倒装装独独立立主主格格虚虚拟拟等等等等强强调调句句型型 运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。以使文章增色不少。2. 2. 丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构(Exercises 1)(Exercises 1)1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.1. When he arrives, please giv

22、e me an e-mail.（使用（使用V-ingV-ing形式）形式）. .2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）（使用名词性从句）3. 3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用用withwith结构结构) ) , please giv

23、e me an e-mail. is that the little girl knows so many things.On his arrivingWhat surprises himHe came in , with a baby in his arms.4.(4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟MaryMary联系联系)( )(用用非谓语）非谓语） 5. 5. He did not know what had happened until he had He did not know what had happened until he had read th

24、e news in the newspaper.(read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型) ) 6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 使用倒装）使用倒装）It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that ，he cant get in touch with Tom Not knowing his telephone number he knew what had ha

25、ppened.丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构(Exercises 2)(Exercises 2)Tom likes singing songs, Mary.so does7. She walked out of the lab and many students 7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (followed her. (使用过去分词使用过去分词) )8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.8. When he spoke, he felt mor

26、e and more excited.（使（使用句型结构）用句型结构）9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to 9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. climb the Western hill. （使用独立主格结构）（使用独立主格结构） by many students, she walked out of the lab. , a large number of people went to climb the We

27、stern Hills. he spoke, excited he felt.丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构(Exercises 3)(Exercises 3)FollowedThe more the moreThe weather being fine 一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅连贯流畅，具有具有“逻辑美逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接上下衔接自然、紧凑自然、紧凑，使文章更为，使文章更为地道地道，更具，更具“英语味英语味”。记得使用恰当的连接词，如。记得使用恰当的连接词，如: soon, immediately, sud

28、denly, in front of, next to, on soon, immediately, suddenly, in front of, next to, on one hand, on the other hand, however,one hand, on the other hand, however, though, though, otherwise, thanks to, as a result (of), so long as, on otherwise, thanks to, as a result (of), so long as, on condition tha

29、t,condition that, even if/though,even if/though, whats more, besides, whats more, besides, to make the matter worse, Im afraid, you know, As to make the matter worse, Im afraid, you know, As we all knowwe all know3. 3. 恰当的连接词恰当的连接词1. This village is very small. It used to be very poor. 1. This villa

30、ge is very small. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 .It has changed a lot since 1978 . This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 .2. All the school-age children can stu

31、dy here. They 2. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. enjoy free education in it. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education in it. 3. Yesterday3. Yesterday， there was a policeman in the street. He there was a policeman i

32、n the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car n

33、early bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy. knocked down the boy. YesterdayYesterday， a policeman stopped a cara policeman stopped a carHonda at the Honda at the corner of the streetcorner of the street， becausebecause it nearly knocked down it nearly knocked d

34、own a boy a boy whowho was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk. sidewalk. 恰当的连接词恰当的连接词(Exercises)(Exercises) Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace . They saw a box fall way

35、to the Childrens Palace . They saw a box fall off a passing truck. They shouted “stop” to the off a passing truck. They shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice. driver at the top of their voice. Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on thei

36、r way to the Childrens Palace way to the Childrens Palace whenwhen they saw a box they saw a box fall off a passing truck. fall off a passing truck. Without delayWithout delay, , they shouted they shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice. “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice.

37、 飞飞让让文文采采扬扬达达表表面面书书语意要合情合理，过渡自然语意要合情合理，过渡自然 语句要有简有繁，随语句要有简有繁，随“意意”而安而安语法要结构正确，无懈可击语法要结构正确，无懈可击语言要地道流畅，书写规范语言要地道流畅，书写规范联考书面表达欣赏：联考书面表达欣赏： Making Every Day Earth Day Making Every Day Earth Day As can be seen from the brief dialogue, the earth As can be seen from the brief dialogue, the earth suffers a

38、 lot from mans behavioursuffers a lot from mans behaviour at present. at present. There are many problems. For instance, we human There are many problems. For instance, we human beings are destroying too many trees, which leads beings are destroying too many trees, which leads to air pollution. Besi

39、des, polluted water is sent into to air pollution. Besides, polluted water is sent into rivers directly without being dealt with. Further rivers directly without being dealt with. Further more, few people are aware of such problems more, few people are aware of such problems while most of us take them for granted. while most of us take them