202X学年高中英语Unit3AtasteofEnglishhumourSection4Writing课件新人教版必修4

1、Unit 3A taste of English humour Section Writing 如何写幽默类叙事性记叙文 一、文体感知 1文体特点 故事类文章属于记叙文文体。在写作过程中一些技巧需要灵活地掌握和运用： (1)要把握住记叙文的六个要素，即时间(when)，地点(where)，人物(who)，事件(what)，原因(why)和过程(how)。 (2)要把握故事性记叙文的构造。在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物，然后写事件的原因及开展过程，最后写结果。并且要有一条线索贯穿全文，使整个文章融为一体。 2亮点句式 (1)One day/The other day，sb.plann

2、ed/intended/wanted/hoped to.某一天/几天前，某人方案/打算/想要/希望 (2)Unfortunately/Fortunately/Suddenly，sb.found that. 不幸的是/幸运的是/突然，某人发现 (3)sb.ran into/came across/met with.in the.某人在遇到了 (4)sb.felt very content/happy/sad/terrible/embarrassed. 某人感到非常满意/快乐/伤心/可怕/为难 (5)sth.happened to sb. 某人突然发生了某事 (6)It hit/occurred

3、to/struck sb.that.某人突然想到 3写作模板 (事件)happened _(时间，地点).Luckily/Surprisedly/To onesurprise _(结果). When _(另一件事件发生)，(这件事).At first，_事件进展的情况.Then/Suddenly，_(情况发生转变).Later，_(情况的变化).In the end/At last，_(事情的结局).In my opinion/I think，_(观点或看法).If_(条件)，希望或建议. 二、典题演练 结合下面的提要，写一篇100个词左右的幽默故事。 1一个过度肥胖的妇女找医生，想寻求减肥的

4、方法； 2医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天，然后隔一天(skip a day)，再反复如此两周； 3一段时间后，她减肥将近20磅。医生很吃惊； 4秘诀：跳跃。 1完成句子 (1)一个过度肥胖的妇女找她的医生，想寻求减肥的方法。 A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight. (2)她的医生让她节食。 Her doctor put her on a diet. (3)医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天，然后隔一天(skip a day)，再反复如此两周。 The doctor advised her

5、 to eat vegetables and grains for 2 days， then skip a day， and do it like this for 2 weeks. (4)下次我见你时，你会至少减去5磅。 The next time I see you，you will have lost at least 5 pounds. (5)一段时间后，当她回来时，她减肥将近20磅。 Some time later， when she returned she lost nearly 20 pounds. (6)她的医生很吃惊。 Her doctor was shocked. 2句式

6、升级 (7)用and连接(1)(2)。 A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight，_. (8)用bydoing的形式合并(5)(6)。 Some time later，when she returned she shocked the doctor _ _.and her doctor put her on a diet by losing nearly 20 pounds The Perfect Diet A terribly overweight woman went to

7、ask her doctor about ways of losing weight，and her doctor put her on a diet. “I advise you to eat vegetables and grains for 2 days，then skip a day，and do it like this for 2 weeks.The next time I see you，you will have lost at least 5 pounds. However，when the woman returned，she shocked the doctor by losing nearly 20 pounds. “Why，thats amazing！ the doctor said.“Did you follow my instructions？ The woman nodded，“