高一英语作文

1、高一英语作文影响英语书面表达得分影响英语书面表达得分的几个因素：的几个因素：1.是否是否2.是否使用是否使用3.结构是否清晰结构是否清晰，4.语篇信息是否完整语篇信息是否完整, 有无多余有无多余5 .卷面整洁卷面整洁,书写工整书写工整第一步：仔细审题第一步：仔细审题题材题材 3. 可能用到的单词可能用到的单词 2. 增减信息增减信息 第二步：理清要点第二步：理清要点（增减；特别留意是否要写自己观点）（增减；特别留意是否要写自己观点） 题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数香港的短文，字数100字左右。字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积香港位于

2、中国的东南部，面积1045平方平方公里，人口公里，人口600多万，被称为多万，被称为“东方明珠东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。抱，其前景会更美好。 Hong Kong is in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million. She is known as “the Pearl of the East”.She was giv

3、en up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland. Her future is very beautiful. - 50 words Hong Kong is in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million. She is known as “the Pearl of the East”.Hong Kong whose area is 1,045k lies in t

4、he southeast of China with a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”.适当增加细节（留意题目要求）She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong

5、 Kong suffered a lot .In 1997, she returned to motherland. Her future is very beautiful.After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful. First, Next, Then, Finally. t

6、hus, therefore, however, in fact, besides, on the contrary, instead of3. first, second, and, but, for, or4. whats more, as a result, what is better 5. as far as I know/am concerned; personally speaking结构是否清晰，行文是否连贯流畅结构是否清晰，行文是否连贯流畅 Family Planning is important, it can help to control population grow

7、ing.=since=as=forMy teacher listening to the music.=be in favor of =like=love=enjoy 翻译：我认为举行超级女生比赛很翻译：我认为举行超级女生比赛很有意义有意义。(meaningful)I think it is meaningful to hold the Super Girl competition.(It 常用句型：常用句型：It is the first/ secondtime thatIt is (high) time that It is said/ reported/ well-known thatI

8、t takes sb. some time to do sth.sb. feel/ find/ make/ think/ consider it +adj.+ to do) 翻译：李宇春在超级女生比赛中获得第一，翻译：李宇春在超级女生比赛中获得第一，这令她的歌迷们很兴奋这令她的歌迷们很兴奋Li Yuchun won the first prize in the Super Girl Competition, which made her fans excited.翻译：我们只有通过努力才能获得成功翻译：我们只有通过努力才能获得成功Only by working hard can we be s

9、uccessful.是超级女生比赛让女孩们获得了是超级女生比赛让女孩们获得了自信自信(confidence)。It is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain confidence. 翻译：有那么多的人支持超女比赛，翻译：有那么多的人支持超女比赛， 这个活动很成功。这个活动很成功。 With so many people supporting the Super Girl Competition, it was a great success. 假如你叫李华，参加了学校开展的假如你叫李华，参加了学校开展的“有困难向谁求助有困难向谁求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的调查活动，点差结果如下表。请用英语）的调查活动，点差结果如下表。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容。给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容。注意：注意：1. 内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连贯，可适当内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连贯，可适当增加内容。增