雅思小部分作文技巧分析

1、Globalizationthe international spread of products, ideas and information is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not a new concept. For thousands of years,nations have roamed the earth in search of new market s and new sources of raw materials for their own industries.关于“全球化”这个名词

2、,考生并不陌生,但是如何用合理的语言来赋予它一个含义,这并非易事,上述的引言段就很好地做到了这一点,先是从字面上诠释了“全球化”的定义,进而又从实际生活角度赋予了它另外一层含义。2. Telephone/Mobile phoneImagine using smoking signals,carrier pigeons or riders on horseback to send an important message. Although those methods may sound strange,ye ars ago people used them to communicate.Tod

3、ay,all a person has to do is pic k up a telephone/mobile phone.对于电话这一现代通讯工具,地球人都知道它是干嘛的,不过呢,我们可以从对于电话功能的定义上做文章,同样也可以赋予它一个生动的含义,并且一下子可以吸引读者眼球。3. Studying abroadEvery year,students around the world leave behind the comforts of home to pursue a study-abroad experience in a foreign country.While many wo

4、uld say that studying abroad is advantageous,some would argue otherwise.出国留学同样是一个非常熟悉的话题,若直接用字典上的定义直接去解释它显然多此一举,因此,我们不妨从侧面突破,通过引入大量学生出国留学的事实和目的来诠释这个再也不能熟悉的话题,同样可以起到很不错的效果。4. SuccessAs Thomas Edison once said,“If you wish to succeed,you should use pe rsistence as your good friend,experience as your r

5、eference,prudence as yo ur brother and hope as your sentry.”This essay is going to look at factors that constitute success.“如果你希望成功,当以恒心为良友、以经验为参谋、以谨慎为兄弟、以希望为哨兵。”这是伟大的美国发明家爱迪生曾经说过的一句话,借助名人名言来下定义又是一种非常有效的开头方式,这样做一方面揭示了文章接下来的主题,另一方面也增强了说服力,可谓是一举两得。(二主体段中的应用1. Some people think that universities should

6、 provide graduates with the knowl edge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a u niversity should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake,regardless of wh ether the course is useful to an employer. What,in your opinion,should be the m ain function of a un

7、iversity? (剑七Test 4以下是此题目一篇范文的第2个主体段:However, reaching the conclusion that other functions,such as giving access t o knowledge for its own sake,are no longer important is biased. For hundreds of years,especially in the west,the undergraduate education is,indeed,a libe ral education,which means the u

8、ndergraduates learn a wide range of curricul ums such as psychology,economics,politics that has no direct relations t o jobs. The upsides of this is that it firstly enables students to become broad-mind ed and help them lay a solid theoretical foundation,then they will be able to choos e the most ap

9、propriate field based on their own interests for further studies.这个段落的论述的中心是大学以传授知识本身为目的,作者使用了“通才教育”这个在西方国家非常流行的教育方式为佐证,在给出“通才教育”定义的本身,又用定语从句补充到了和题目第2个论点间的关系,从而进行了有力的对比,深化了段落中心。2. EducationWhen people leave school,they wish they could breathe a sign of relief and l eave learning behind. However,lear

10、ning should last a lifetime. You exercise yo ur body to stay strong,and you should exercise your mind to stay sharp.在这个关于教育的话题中,作者在论述时用终身教育的好处来诠释教育的长期性和必要性,从而为下文的扩展作了很好的铺垫和过渡。3. School should teach children academic subjects which will be beneficial to t heir future careers. Therefore,other subjects

11、 such as music and sports are not imp ortant. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(08年5月22日A 类考题Academic subjects,such as reading and writing,play a vital role in the education system. Apart from activating creativity and imagination,it helps student s lay a solid foundation of

12、 knowledge. Some might say that academic subject is to a student as a rifle is to a soldier,without which he is unable to fulfill his missio n在这个主体段中,作者在开头便举出了一些学术课程的具体内容,从而给读者一个概念,同时也展现了作者对题目的解读能力。接下来我们再来看一个相似的用法:4. Why have not alternative energies already replaced fossil fuels?There are also prob

13、lems with production stability. The amount of energy we n eed varies throughout the day,and conventional energy production,such as co al and oil,can be increased or decreased based on these variations. Alternatives like wind and solar power are limited because they can only produce electricity w hen it is sunny or th