校园活动(因果关系)

1、 美国康州某中学与你校是友好学校，对方校刊来信说想了解你校为落实素质教育精神所开设选修课的情况。你作为学校记者站的小站长，根据康州中学的要求对学生进行了问卷调查，根据调查结果你以Students Like Optional courses 为题，写了一篇120词左右的英语报道。 课程门类：音乐、美术、体育、文学、记算机等十余种 上课时间：每周五下午3:305:00 上课方式：同一门课同一所教室；集体学习。 最受欢迎的课：计算机、英语口语、艺术等 对课程的看法：1、有利于自己的特长发展，十分感兴趣；2、学到很多课外知识；3、有大量的实践机会。建议：1、增加选修课；2、减少作业量；3、多组织参观，

2、了解社会 This term our school has offered more than 10 optional courses, such as music, arts, literature, computer and so on. Students can choose what they are interested in according to their tastes. The students who study the same subject study in the same class. The courses are given from 3:30 to 5:0

3、0 every Friday afternoon. Students think highly of the measures taken by school, and their favorite courses are computer, spoken English, arts and so on. They say it is useful to develop their specialities and they have learned a lot that is not taught in textbooks and they have got a great deal of

4、practice. However, students are not quite satisfied. They hope more optional courses will be offered while their homework should be less. They suggest that more trips and visits be organized so that they can learn more about what is going on outside school. 写作素材：1.上课时间：每周五下午3:305:00The courses are g

5、iven from 3:30 to 5:00 every Friday afternoon.通知：开会时间：下通知：开会时间：下周二下午3:305:00The meeting will be held from 3:30 to 5:00 next Friday afternoon.2. 最受欢迎的课：计算机、英语口语、艺术等Their favorite courses are computer, spoken English, arts and so on. Computer, spoken English, arts are very popular well received. 3.有利于

6、自己的特长发展It is useful to develop their specialities4.学到很多课外知识They have learned a lot that is not taught in textbooks5.课外活动能让我们更好地了解社会。课外活动能让我们更好地了解社会。We can learn more about what is going on outside school.These after-class activities offer us a chance to have a better understanding of society. 2011四川

7、（世纪金榜四川（世纪金榜p55） 最近，某中学生英文报开设了最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。活动。 你校开展课外活动的情况；你校开展课外活动的情况； 你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处 为同学选择课外活动提出建议为同学选择课外活动提出建议 为学校开展课外活动提出建议为学校开展课外活动提出建议第一段第一段第二段第二段第三段第三段 Nowadays, after-clas

8、s activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my know

9、ledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study. Here I have some suggestions. To students, youd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.

10、 Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve you learning. 谈论精彩的校园活动、校园生活谈论精彩的校园活动、校园生活写作素材：写作素材：活动的意义有助于开拓学生视野。活动的意义有助于开拓学生视野。All these activities are beneficial for students to broaden their horizonsAll the

11、se activities give students an important means to broaden their horizons.2. 校园活动有利于提高学生们的学习成绩。校园活动有利于提高学生们的学习成绩。School activities play a positive role in improving stutents studies.3. 此外这些活动也给那些封闭在此外这些活动也给那些封闭在“象牙塔象牙塔”中中的学子们一个接触社会的好机会。的学子们一个接触社会的好机会。1. In addtion, these activities also give students

12、 living in their “ivory towers” an opportunity to stay in touch with society. 假定你在参加一场英语辩论赛。你是正方辩手，试用英语简要地表明自己的观点。 主题：Shall a senior student take a part-time job in holidays? 观点：1高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。 2假期做a part-time job 是很好的社会实践。 3通过书本学到的东西不如通过实践学到的东西有效。4通过社会实践，我们可以在知识和能力两个方面取得进步。 5假期做a part-time job的报

13、酬或多或少有些帮助。 结论高中生. 要点一：高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。第一步: 确定并翻译句子主干（谓语部分，以短语为主）1. 重视： pay much attention to attach great importance to devote much time to2. 对社会知道少 know little about fail to know about have little knowledge of要点一：高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。第二步: 翻译句子其它部分；分析两个信息之间的逻辑关系，确定连接词和句式1）逻辑关系1:“而” 转折关系We students pay

14、much attention to our studies while we know little about society.比较：他仍然很穷，但他哥哥发了大财。He remained poor while his brother made a fortune.but要点一：高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。逻辑关系2:因果关系We students pay much attention to our studies so we know little about society.We students pay much attention to our studies as result

15、 of which we know little about society.We students pay so much attention to our studies that we know little about society.As we students pay much attention to our studies we know little about society.We students pay much attention to our studies, which makes us know little about societyWe students p

16、ay much attention to our studies, which makes us know little about society.We students pay much attention to our studies, making us know little about society.We students pay much attention to our studies, cause us know little about society. (双谓语错误)We students pay much attention to our studies, lead

17、to us know little about society. (双谓语错误)2012年高考英语作文真题：辽宁卷年高考英语作文真题：辽宁卷 图片丰富；有助于英语学习图片丰富；有助于英语学习 。There are so many beautiful and colorful pictures that we can enjoy English better. There are many beautiful and colorful pictures, _ can help us understand English better. There are many beautiful and c

18、olorful pictures, _ (help)us understand English better.which helping 车多，污染严重车多，污染严重 路上有如此多的车空气污染日益严重。路上有如此多的车空气污染日益严重。 There are so many cars on he road that the air is polluted seriously . 倒装倒装 So many cars are there on he road that the air is polluted seriously . 加结果加结果 There are many cars running on the road , making the air polluted . There are many cars running on the road , which makes the air polluted .要点2：